"This contest is to make sure my tribe has enough for the Hatchlings? Then I better make sure we win!"
I have been around for 20 years. I am a were-gator and affiliated with Malandaia. I am on team two as a player. I'm the best huntress of my tribe! At least, that's what the shaman tells me. I love everyone all the same! So long as I'm happy with my mate, and they love the tribe!
I have a few nicknames. I'm usually called Dee, but some mean people call me names like Boots, or Purse. But I would rather you call me Dee. Deesie works too, but you have to say it right!
Links - to - stuffs (optional)
↣ A b i l i t i e s ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ Deesie wields a short bow, and a greatsword (as seen in this picture. It's hanging on her back) The short bow packs less range and power than an average bow, but it smaller size means she can manuver with it much more easily, and she can use her were-venom to enhance the effectiveness of her arrows. Her sword, on the other hand is quite large and clunky, but smashes through armor, and cleaves bone. And applying venom to this weapon is much more difficult than an arrowhead. Thanks to her thick, leathery hide, she is much better protected than she appears. She is also much more resistant to illness, poisons, and disease. Althought she cannot breate underwater, she can hold her breath for a surprisingly long time. And although her limbs do not pack the power of the more powerful species, her jaws and tail can snap tree trunks and shear right through armor if given the chance.
↣ P e r s o n a l i t y ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ Deesie is quite the airhead, absent-mindedly doing things that everyone tells her not to, and acts suprised when something bad happens. She also tends to be fairly ignorant of the humor of those living in more civilized places. She's usually pretty quiet, which is good for a huntress. But she quite the glutton, and has been known to eat until she becomes sick. But she always tries to give to those she feels are less fortunate than herself.
↣ M y x S t o r y ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ Deesie's tribe have lived in the marshlands for centuries. They have always revered the Goddess, and every season for the Games, they send a tribesman to compete in the tournaments for the chance to defend they're prosperous nature. But this year, the shaman's daughter was made to enter. Despite the fact that she is a female, and her larger than average figure, she bested all of they're warriors, and earned the right to leave the clan, and head to Malandaia's capitol to fight
↣ H o w x I x G o t x H e r e ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ Deesie competed in the arenas of Malandaia for the right to join the players of the game. She fought to the best of her abilities, and came out a survivor.
((I hope ya like that. If not, let me know what has to change.))
Nice idea but I can't get around that picture. It's much too cartoony and were creatures don't look like their creature when in a humanoid form. Were venom turns other creatures into more of their kind. It won't help her archery any. She could use regular poison instead. =O Otherwise, she'd just be making more weres. Were creatures can get sick and are susceptible to poison. Also be mindful of grammar. Particularly forms of their, they're, and there. So, just fix these things around and then you're good to go. =3
Posted: Sun Aug 25, 2013 7:22 pm
Kiri sai
Miss Fruit Loops
Kiri sai
Miss Fruit Loops
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Quick question, can I have more than one character? Just have this one idea bouncing around in my head, but dunno if I can use it here or not.
Of course! As many as you can handle. =3
Huzzah!! Wait, are hybrid-ish races okay? It would be explained in the bio section, of course, but need to know if it's okay... otherwise I'll have to tweak the idea somewhat severely...
Hybrids can have one of the two creature's strengths, but both weaknesses. =/
Quick question, can I have more than one character? Just have this one idea bouncing around in my head, but dunno if I can use it here or not.
Of course! As many as you can handle. =3
Huzzah!! Wait, are hybrid-ish races okay? It would be explained in the bio section, of course, but need to know if it's okay... otherwise I'll have to tweak the idea somewhat severely...
Hybrids can have one of the two creature's strengths, but both weaknesses. =/
*checks races and weaknesses that are applied to each* hmm... I can work with that! Onto the profile code!
Posted: Sun Aug 25, 2013 7:47 pm
↘ xxxxEnya Black Celestas xxxx ↙ |_________________________________________________|
↣ The Black Lady↤
"I always like to get my way.."
I have been around for a 100years. I am a Sorceress and affiliated with Zeladis . I am on team 3 as a fighter. Males, Females either can catch my eyes..!
I have a few nicknames. Black Lady- Enny- Anya But I would rather you call me Enya.
↣ A b i l i t i e s ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘Her powers you might say are Chaos. She uses both white magic and black magic. However over the years she has found herself following the path towards the black magic. Her mind is always pulling towards the light and dark and dark mostly wins. Over the years she has learned how to steal someone’s lifespan. She speaks to the dead and uses them to get what she wants, or they help her fight her enemy. Before she had traveled the Chaos path, Enya had always been strong using the fire element for good. Every day is a battle for her, she is always trying to figure out where she belongs with her magic. She feels that her mind is splitting every day and soon she might give herself to the darkness…However she still has a light inside her that flickers every time she uses her powers for good. ↣ P e r s o n a l i t y ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ Enya has a split personality due to ripping her soul apart each year. She has stolen life over the years creating her once warm heart to turn cold. She's rather mysteries and seems rather odd at times. Some days Enya can be collected and warming, the girl she once was. Other days her darker side slips out and she tends to be moody and rather rude to those around her.
↣ M y x S t o r y ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ Enya lived in a small village with her mother and three older sisters, which all of them were witches. All of them were 'good' or 'light' witches and practiced magic with the elements. Enya always knew she was different from the first time she cast her own magic. Her first element she mastered was fire and soon she started to show potential of the fifth element, spirit. Her sisters were always there guiding her and making sure she didn’t travel to the dark side.
One day Enya returned home and discovered her home invaded. Everything was broken, scattered or turned over. As well the walls, and floors were covered with blood…her family’s blood. Everything good about Enya shattered that day and she was never the same again. She found who had killed her family and in return she stole all their souls one by one. When she found this gave her youth, Enya found she couldn’t stop herself from stealing souls from those that didn’t deserver to breath on this planet That warm, sweet girl that once used her magic for good, was now lost in the shadows. ↣ H o w x I x G o t x H e r e ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ Enya is here because the King and Queen seem to enjoy having her around. She grew bored picking off souls from humans and found her skills were needed for a much greater cause. The games had caught her attention. Once the King figured she wanted to join the games the figured she would be best as their defender. Besides this might keep her out of trouble for the time being…maybe.. .
↘ xxxxEnya Black Celestas xxxx ↙ |_________________________________________________|
↣ The Black Lady↤
"I always like to get my way.."
I have been around for a 100years. I am a Sorceress and affiliated with Zeladis . I am on team 3 as a fighter. Males, Females either can catch my eyes..!
I have a few nicknames. Black Lady- Enny- Anya But I would rather you call me Enya.
↣ A b i l i t i e s ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘Her powers you might say are Chaos. She uses both white magic and black magic. However over the years she has found herself following the path towards the black magic. Her mind is always pulling towards the light and dark and dark mostly wins. Over the years she has learned how to steal someone’s lifespan. She speaks to the dead and uses them to get what she wants, or they help her fight her enemy. Before she had traveled the Chaos path, Enya had always been strong using the fire element for good. Every day is a battle for her, she is always trying to figure out where she belongs with her magic. She feels that her mind is splitting every day and soon she might give herself to the darkness…However she still has a light inside her that flickers every time she uses her powers for good. ↣ P e r s o n a l i t y ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ Enya has a split personality due to ripping her soul apart each year. She has stolen life over the years creating her once warm heart to turn cold. She's rather mysteries and seems rather odd at times. Some days Enya can be collected and warming, the girl she once was. Other days her darker side slips out and she tends to be moody and rather rude to those around her.
↣ M y x S t o r y ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ Enya lived in a small village with her mother and three older sisters, which all of them were witches. All of them were 'good' or 'light' witches and practiced magic with the elements. Enya always knew she was different from the first time she cast her own magic. Her first element she mastered was fire and soon she started to show potential of the fifth element, spirit. Her sisters were always there guiding her and making sure she didn’t travel to the dark side.
One day Enya returned home and discovered her home invaded. Everything was broken, scattered or turned over. As well the walls, and floors were covered with blood…her family’s blood. Everything good about Enya shattered that day and she was never the same again. She found who had killed her family and in return she stole all their souls one by one. When she found this gave her youth, Enya found she couldn’t stop herself from stealing souls from those that didn’t deserver to breath on this planet That warm, sweet girl that once used her magic for good, was now lost in the shadows. ↣ H o w x I x G o t x H e r e ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ Enya is here because the King and Queen seem to enjoy having her around. She grew bored picking off souls from humans and found her skills were needed for a much greater cause. The games had caught her attention. Once the King figured she wanted to join the games the figured she would be best as their defender. Besides this might keep her out of trouble for the time being…maybe.. .
Good. Though if she uses chaos magic, she wouldn't be able to use fire. Was fire what she was leaning toward first and then she shifted? And team two is chosen by a tournament. The winners are sent off to the games.
Posted: Sun Aug 25, 2013 8:35 pm
Yes, that's what I meant... She use to have fire... As for team two I know that they are chosen, but I have her down for team three at least I thought I put her down for three.... Let me go back and reread it team three... I think what happen I was trying to figure out which team I wanted.... So sorry for the confusion!
Yes, that's what I meant... She use to have fire... As for team two I know that they are chosen, but I have her down for team three at least I thought I put her down for three.... Let me go back and reread it team three... I think what happen I was trying to figure out which team I wanted.... So sorry for the confusion!
Oh. sorry. I'm being stupid and getting teams mixed up. I thought she was on two for some reason... o.0 Disregard that bit please. lol Looks good! Please post in the profile thread. =3
"The most precious things... are often the ones we least expect."
I have been around for 17 years, I think. I am a cyborg were-cat and affiliated with Zeladis. I am on team three as a scout. I don't really know who suits my fancy.
I have a few nicknames. Little red - Kitten - 'Thief', if that counts... But I would rather you call me Aoi.
↣ A b i l i t i e s ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ Aoi is an unusual case among were-species in general, mainly due to her seeming to be perpetually stuck in a mid-transformation to her were-form. As a result, she has very long, prehensile tail, and the hair on it is sharp enough to slice through bone if she swings it fast enough. The lower half of her right arm, including the hand, is also magitech, and it has a compartment in it where she stores small weapons, namely knives and small spikes. Her left eye has also been replaced and can be used to scan through various visual spectrums, including thermal, ultraviolet and magical auras. She also possesses a very high level of flexibility, agility, balance and dexterity, making her very difficult to trap or pin down. As she is in a mid-transformed state, she also has claw-like nails on her fingers and toes, allowing her to climb nearly any surface. Her distinctive crimson hair is also virtually indestructible and therefore cannot be cut, burned or otherwise damaged and she can use it to shield herself from blades, arrows, small explosions, fires and energy-based attacks.
↣ P e r s o n a l i t y ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ Aoi, at a glance, seems rather innocent and child-like and portrays much of her animal side more than most were-species do. However, beneath this, she is quite cunning and clever, able to use her innocent looks to lure people into a false sense of security for a variety of purposes. She also suffers from a minor case of kleptomania, and is technically known as the infamous thief, 'The crimson flash'. She tends to avoid direct conflict whenever possible, quicker to just watch and slip away before being noticed than to fight someone straight on. If she has the resolve to kill, it's never been seen, nor is it apparently clear from how she seems overall.
↣ M y x S t o r y ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ Aoi's past is a rather grisly one, despite her rather upbeat outlook on things. Her earliest memories are of her running around the dusty streets in the slums of some city, no parents and no real home. She learned from an early age the art of pickpocketing and thievery was the only way she'd survive. As the years went by, survival turned into a profitable career and rough skills became refined. She had graduated to major heists by the time she was about 14, and was able to infiltrate almost any location virtually unnoticed and leave just the same. There was only one instance where she was almost caught, but all that was seen was a flash of her red hair as she vanished. Around the age of 15-16, she was asked to pull a rather large heist, and one on a nearby magic school. At first it seemed too easy, but she didn't question it and went on with it. This led to her only true failure as a thief. The whole heist had been a set up, as when she reached the targeted item, a beautiful, yet simple dagger, an enchantment on it detonated, costing her her right arm and left eye in the process. She managed to flee after the detonation, but knew she was losing a lot of blood. In an effort to prolong her life a bit more, she tried to change into her were-form to regenerate. However, with the damage she'd taken, she could only turn halfway, but it was enough to slow the blood down. She held the half-formed state until she found a magitech smith, who she knew was also married to a healer. She asked that they heal her and give her a new arm and eye, more than able to pay any rate they had. The healer asked her to shift back to human to accurately analyze Aoi's wounds, but Aoi could not. She'd held the half-state for too long while being too weak and was now stuck in it, resulting in a tail, cat-like ears, and ash-colored skin. The initial shock of this horrified the young girl, but the healer said she'd do the best she could regardless. Somewhere in the healing process, Aoi's hair got caught up in it and became accidentally enchanted with an indestructible charm. Since such a charm had never been applied to a living being before, rather than being relatively temporary, it permanently bonded to her hair. The crafting of her new arm and eye took more time than her healing, allowing her to watch and request specifications to both to suit her needs. Once done, the arm was a nearly perfect match to her left one, and the eye was a flawless match to her remaining one. She thanked the smith and healer happily and agreed to pay for both their services and their silence on her 'visit' to them. Since then, her thieving has become more cautious and aimed at less high-profile items, causing her to fade somewhat more into obscurity as a thief.
↣ H o w x I x G o t x H e r e ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ She was chosen by Zeladis for her skills in stealth and infiltration over anything else, but they also agreed to give her full amnesty should she ever be caught in a theft in the future, regardless if Zeladis won or lost the games.
I was making a character who caused bad luck, rats! I like your system for the bad luck, that's great. Very cool character.
hmm, I noticed someone else has a sort of chaotic luck power too, so it really wouldn't matter if you had the same! it would make it interesting for me to fight you twisted but you could twist it, where you cause a stroke of good luck...? you may even do better because you might have more control over what the good luck targets like that. Once I throw the dice, I really have no clue what could happen, or what people will come up with on what it destroys.
What do u think?
It's all good. I am in the process of making another character. n_n All I have left is the bio~.
Posted: Sun Aug 25, 2013 9:40 pm
Aaaand a person was quick and had my same idea. I guess I need to bust out this profile right quick and come up with a different concept. Poo on a stick.
"This contest is to make sure my tribe has enough for the Hatchlings? Then I better make sure we win!"
I have been around for 20 years. I am a were-gator and affiliated with Malandaia. I am on team two as a player. I'm the best huntress of my tribe! At least, that's what the shaman tells me. I love everyone all the same! So long as I'm happy with my mate, and they love the tribe!
I have a few nicknames. I'm usually called Dee, but some mean people call me names like Boots, or Purse. But I would rather you call me Dee. Deesie works too, but you have to say it right!
Links - to - stuffs (optional)
↣ A b i l i t i e s ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ Deesie wields a short bow, and a greatsword (as seen in this picture. It's hanging on her back) The short bow packs less range and power than an average bow, but it smaller size means she can manuver with it much more easily, and she can use her were-venom to enhance the effectiveness of her arrows. Her sword, on the other hand is quite large and clunky, but smashes through armor, and cleaves bone. And applying venom to this weapon is much more difficult than an arrowhead. Thanks to her thick, leathery hide, she is much better protected than she appears. She is also much more resistant to illness, poisons, and disease. Althought she cannot breate underwater, she can hold her breath for a surprisingly long time. And although her limbs do not pack the power of the more powerful species, her jaws and tail can snap tree trunks and shear right through armor if given the chance.
↣ P e r s o n a l i t y ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ Deesie is quite the airhead, absent-mindedly doing things that everyone tells her not to, and acts suprised when something bad happens. She also tends to be fairly ignorant of the humor of those living in more civilized places. She's usually pretty quiet, which is good for a huntress. But she quite the glutton, and has been known to eat until she becomes sick. But she always tries to give to those she feels are less fortunate than herself.
↣ M y x S t o r y ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ Deesie's tribe have lived in the marshlands for centuries. They have always revered the Goddess, and every season for the Games, they send a tribesman to compete in the tournaments for the chance to defend they're prosperous nature. But this year, the shaman's daughter was made to enter. Despite the fact that she is a female, and her larger than average figure, she bested all of they're warriors, and earned the right to leave the clan, and head to Malandaia's capitol to fight
↣ H o w x I x G o t x H e r e ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ Deesie competed in the arenas of Malandaia for the right to join the players of the game. She fought to the best of her abilities, and came out a survivor.
((I hope ya like that. If not, let me know what has to change.))
Nice idea but I can't get around that picture. It's much too cartoony and were creatures don't look like their creature when in a humanoid form. Were venom turns other creatures into more of their kind. It won't help her archery any. She could use regular poison instead. =O Otherwise, she'd just be making more weres. Were creatures can get sick and are susceptible to poison. Also be mindful of grammar. Particularly forms of their, they're, and there. So, just fix these things around and then you're good to go. =3
Hmm... Well, I did have a back-up pic, but it looks just as beastial as this one. Less cartoony, but still not human looking. The venom thing I'll give ya. But I figured since she's a were-gator, that she'd have a greater resistance to those things than a normal were. I guess I'll delete Dee, and try to make a new char.
"This contest is to make sure my tribe has enough for the Hatchlings? Then I better make sure we win!"
I have been around for 20 years. I am a were-gator and affiliated with Malandaia. I am on team two as a player. I'm the best huntress of my tribe! At least, that's what the shaman tells me. I love everyone all the same! So long as I'm happy with my mate, and they love the tribe!
I have a few nicknames. I'm usually called Dee, but some mean people call me names like Boots, or Purse. But I would rather you call me Dee. Deesie works too, but you have to say it right!
Links - to - stuffs (optional)
↣ A b i l i t i e s ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ Deesie wields a short bow, and a greatsword (as seen in this picture. It's hanging on her back) The short bow packs less range and power than an average bow, but it smaller size means she can manuver with it much more easily, and she can use her were-venom to enhance the effectiveness of her arrows. Her sword, on the other hand is quite large and clunky, but smashes through armor, and cleaves bone. And applying venom to this weapon is much more difficult than an arrowhead. Thanks to her thick, leathery hide, she is much better protected than she appears. She is also much more resistant to illness, poisons, and disease. Althought she cannot breate underwater, she can hold her breath for a surprisingly long time. And although her limbs do not pack the power of the more powerful species, her jaws and tail can snap tree trunks and shear right through armor if given the chance.
↣ P e r s o n a l i t y ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ Deesie is quite the airhead, absent-mindedly doing things that everyone tells her not to, and acts suprised when something bad happens. She also tends to be fairly ignorant of the humor of those living in more civilized places. She's usually pretty quiet, which is good for a huntress. But she quite the glutton, and has been known to eat until she becomes sick. But she always tries to give to those she feels are less fortunate than herself.
↣ M y x S t o r y ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ Deesie's tribe have lived in the marshlands for centuries. They have always revered the Goddess, and every season for the Games, they send a tribesman to compete in the tournaments for the chance to defend they're prosperous nature. But this year, the shaman's daughter was made to enter. Despite the fact that she is a female, and her larger than average figure, she bested all of they're warriors, and earned the right to leave the clan, and head to Malandaia's capitol to fight
↣ H o w x I x G o t x H e r e ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ Deesie competed in the arenas of Malandaia for the right to join the players of the game. She fought to the best of her abilities, and came out a survivor.
((I hope ya like that. If not, let me know what has to change.))
Nice idea but I can't get around that picture. It's much too cartoony and were creatures don't look like their creature when in a humanoid form. Were venom turns other creatures into more of their kind. It won't help her archery any. She could use regular poison instead. =O Otherwise, she'd just be making more weres. Were creatures can get sick and are susceptible to poison. Also be mindful of grammar. Particularly forms of their, they're, and there. So, just fix these things around and then you're good to go. =3
Hmm... Well, I did have a back-up pic, but it looks just as beastial as this one. Less cartoony, but still not human looking. The venom thing I'll give ya. But I figured since she's a were-gator, that she'd have a greater resistance to those things than a normal were. I guess I'll delete Dee, and try to make a new char.
"The most precious things... are often the ones we least expect."
I have been around for 17 years, I think. I am a cyborg were-cat and affiliated with Zeladis. I am on team three as a scout. I don't really know who suits my fancy.
I have a few nicknames. Little red - Kitten - 'Thief', if that counts... But I would rather you call me Aoi.
↣ A b i l i t i e s ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ Aoi is an unusual case among were-species in general, mainly due to her seeming to be perpetually stuck in a mid-transformation to her were-form. As a result, she has very long, prehensile tail, and the hair on it is sharp enough to slice through bone if she swings it fast enough. The lower half of her right arm, including the hand, is also magitech, and it has a compartment in it where she stores small weapons, namely knives and small spikes. Her left eye has also been replaced and can be used to scan through various visual spectrums, including thermal, ultraviolet and magical auras. She also possesses a very high level of flexibility, agility, balance and dexterity, making her very difficult to trap or pin down. As she is in a mid-transformed state, she also has claw-like nails on her fingers and toes, allowing her to climb nearly any surface. Her distinctive crimson hair is also virtually indestructible and therefore cannot be cut, burned or otherwise damaged and she can use it to shield herself from blades, arrows, small explosions, fires and energy-based attacks.
↣ P e r s o n a l i t y ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ Aoi, at a glance, seems rather innocent and child-like and portrays much of her animal side more than most were-species do. However, beneath this, she is quite cunning and clever, able to use her innocent looks to lure people into a false sense of security for a variety of purposes. She also suffers from a minor case of kleptomania, and is technically known as the infamous thief, 'The crimson flash'. She tends to avoid direct conflict whenever possible, quicker to just watch and slip away before being noticed than to fight someone straight on. If she has the resolve to kill, it's never been seen, nor is it apparently clear from how she seems overall.
↣ M y x S t o r y ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ Aoi's past is a rather grisly one, despite her rather upbeat outlook on things. Her earliest memories are of her running around the dusty streets in the slums of some city, no parents and no real home. She learned from an early age the art of pickpocketing and thievery was the only way she'd survive. As the years went by, survival turned into a profitable career and rough skills became refined. She had graduated to major heists by the time she was about 14, and was able to infiltrate almost any location virtually unnoticed and leave just the same. There was only one instance where she was almost caught, but all that was seen was a flash of her red hair as she vanished. Around the age of 15-16, she was asked to pull a rather large heist, and one on a nearby magic school. At first it seemed too easy, but she didn't question it and went on with it. This led to her only true failure as a thief. The whole heist had been a set up, as when she reached the targeted item, a beautiful, yet simple dagger, an enchantment on it detonated, costing her her right arm and left eye in the process. She managed to flee after the detonation, but knew she was losing a lot of blood. In an effort to prolong her life a bit more, she tried to change into her were-form to regenerate. However, with the damage she'd taken, she could only turn halfway, but it was enough to slow the blood down. She held the half-formed state until she found a magitech smith, who she knew was also married to a healer. She asked that they heal her and give her a new arm and eye, more than able to pay any rate they had. The healer asked her to shift back to human to accurately analyze Aoi's wounds, but Aoi could not. She'd held the half-state for too long while being too weak and was now stuck in it, resulting in a tail, cat-like ears, and ash-colored skin. The initial shock of this horrified the young girl, but the healer said she'd do the best she could regardless. Somewhere in the healing process, Aoi's hair got caught up in it and became accidentally enchanted with an indestructible charm. Since such a charm had never been applied to a living being before, rather than being relatively temporary, it permanently bonded to her hair. The crafting of her new arm and eye took more time than her healing, allowing her to watch and request specifications to both to suit her needs. Once done, the arm was a nearly perfect match to her left one, and the eye was a flawless match to her remaining one. She thanked the smith and healer happily and agreed to pay for both their services and their silence on her 'visit' to them. Since then, her thieving has become more cautious and aimed at less high-profile items, causing her to fade somewhat more into obscurity as a thief.
↣ H o w x I x G o t x H e r e ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ She was chosen by Zeladis for her skills in stealth and infiltration over anything else, but they also agreed to give her full amnesty should she ever be caught in a theft in the future, regardless if Zeladis won or lost the games.
The magitech and half were thing are kind of op together. Also, I have a bit of a thing against furry's. Either she's human or in beast form, unless you can find a way to make it logical as to how she got stuck mid-transformation, and then she wouldn't be able to transform back and forth since she would be stuck as a hybrid of both forms already. The picture is also really anime. I can't accept anime. D= I have a few links in the first few posts that will bring you to my pb album and alphacoders. Both have good fantasy, non-anime, pictures you can choose from.
DX Sorry Kiri! <3
Hmmmmm rethinking... Now that I read further, there is a logical reason in her bio. That's fine. But I still need you to cut down on the extra abilities with half transformation, and a new picture. DX
"This contest is to make sure my tribe has enough for the Hatchlings? Then I better make sure we win!"
I have been around for 20 years. I am a were-gator and affiliated with Malandaia. I am on team two as a player. I'm the best huntress of my tribe! At least, that's what the shaman tells me. I love everyone all the same! So long as I'm happy with my mate, and they love the tribe!
I have a few nicknames. I'm usually called Dee, but some mean people call me names like Boots, or Purse. But I would rather you call me Dee. Deesie works too, but you have to say it right!
Links - to - stuffs (optional)
↣ A b i l i t i e s ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ Deesie wields a short bow, and a greatsword (as seen in this picture. It's hanging on her back) The short bow packs less range and power than an average bow, but it smaller size means she can manuver with it much more easily, and she can use her were-venom to enhance the effectiveness of her arrows. Her sword, on the other hand is quite large and clunky, but smashes through armor, and cleaves bone. And applying venom to this weapon is much more difficult than an arrowhead. Thanks to her thick, leathery hide, she is much better protected than she appears. She is also much more resistant to illness, poisons, and disease. Althought she cannot breate underwater, she can hold her breath for a surprisingly long time. And although her limbs do not pack the power of the more powerful species, her jaws and tail can snap tree trunks and shear right through armor if given the chance.
↣ P e r s o n a l i t y ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ Deesie is quite the airhead, absent-mindedly doing things that everyone tells her not to, and acts suprised when something bad happens. She also tends to be fairly ignorant of the humor of those living in more civilized places. She's usually pretty quiet, which is good for a huntress. But she quite the glutton, and has been known to eat until she becomes sick. But she always tries to give to those she feels are less fortunate than herself.
↣ M y x S t o r y ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ Deesie's tribe have lived in the marshlands for centuries. They have always revered the Goddess, and every season for the Games, they send a tribesman to compete in the tournaments for the chance to defend they're prosperous nature. But this year, the shaman's daughter was made to enter. Despite the fact that she is a female, and her larger than average figure, she bested all of they're warriors, and earned the right to leave the clan, and head to Malandaia's capitol to fight
↣ H o w x I x G o t x H e r e ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ Deesie competed in the arenas of Malandaia for the right to join the players of the game. She fought to the best of her abilities, and came out a survivor.
((I hope ya like that. If not, let me know what has to change.))
Nice idea but I can't get around that picture. It's much too cartoony and were creatures don't look like their creature when in a humanoid form. Were venom turns other creatures into more of their kind. It won't help her archery any. She could use regular poison instead. =O Otherwise, she'd just be making more weres. Were creatures can get sick and are susceptible to poison. Also be mindful of grammar. Particularly forms of their, they're, and there. So, just fix these things around and then you're good to go. =3
Hmm... Well, I did have a back-up pic, but it looks just as beastial as this one. Less cartoony, but still not human looking. The venom thing I'll give ya. But I figured since she's a were-gator, that she'd have a greater resistance to those things than a normal were. I guess I'll delete Dee, and try to make a new char.
You can't find a humanoid picture for her? D=
aside from that doll that's in there, I never had one drawn for her. I've never used her as a werebeast in other RPs. But since ya don't have an option for a straight lizardling race, I had to work with what I was given. I'll try making another char in a bit.
"The most precious things... are often the ones we least expect."
I have been around for 17 years, I think. I am a cyborg were-cat and affiliated with Zeladis. I am on team three as a scout. I don't really know who suits my fancy.
I have a few nicknames. Little red - Kitten - 'Thief', if that counts... But I would rather you call me Aoi.
↣ A b i l i t i e s ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ Aoi is an unusual case among were-species in general, mainly due to her seeming to be perpetually stuck in a mid-transformation to her were-form. As a result, she has very long, prehensile tail, and the hair on it is sharp enough to slice through bone if she swings it fast enough. The lower half of her right arm, including the hand, is also magitech, and it has a compartment in it where she stores small weapons, namely knives and small spikes. Her left eye has also been replaced and can be used to scan through various visual spectrums, including thermal, ultraviolet and magical auras. She also possesses a very high level of flexibility, agility, balance and dexterity, making her very difficult to trap or pin down. As she is in a mid-transformed state, she also has claw-like nails on her fingers and toes, allowing her to climb nearly any surface. Her distinctive crimson hair is also virtually indestructible and therefore cannot be cut, burned or otherwise damaged and she can use it to shield herself from blades, arrows, small explosions, fires and energy-based attacks.
↣ P e r s o n a l i t y ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ Aoi, at a glance, seems rather innocent and child-like and portrays much of her animal side more than most were-species do. However, beneath this, she is quite cunning and clever, able to use her innocent looks to lure people into a false sense of security for a variety of purposes. She also suffers from a minor case of kleptomania, and is technically known as the infamous thief, 'The crimson flash'. She tends to avoid direct conflict whenever possible, quicker to just watch and slip away before being noticed than to fight someone straight on. If she has the resolve to kill, it's never been seen, nor is it apparently clear from how she seems overall.
↣ M y x S t o r y ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ Aoi's past is a rather grisly one, despite her rather upbeat outlook on things. Her earliest memories are of her running around the dusty streets in the slums of some city, no parents and no real home. She learned from an early age the art of pickpocketing and thievery was the only way she'd survive. As the years went by, survival turned into a profitable career and rough skills became refined. She had graduated to major heists by the time she was about 14, and was able to infiltrate almost any location virtually unnoticed and leave just the same. There was only one instance where she was almost caught, but all that was seen was a flash of her red hair as she vanished. Around the age of 15-16, she was asked to pull a rather large heist, and one on a nearby magic school. At first it seemed too easy, but she didn't question it and went on with it. This led to her only true failure as a thief. The whole heist had been a set up, as when she reached the targeted item, a beautiful, yet simple dagger, an enchantment on it detonated, costing her her right arm and left eye in the process. She managed to flee after the detonation, but knew she was losing a lot of blood. In an effort to prolong her life a bit more, she tried to change into her were-form to regenerate. However, with the damage she'd taken, she could only turn halfway, but it was enough to slow the blood down. She held the half-formed state until she found a magitech smith, who she knew was also married to a healer. She asked that they heal her and give her a new arm and eye, more than able to pay any rate they had. The healer asked her to shift back to human to accurately analyze Aoi's wounds, but Aoi could not. She'd held the half-state for too long while being too weak and was now stuck in it, resulting in a tail, cat-like ears, and ash-colored skin. The initial shock of this horrified the young girl, but the healer said she'd do the best she could regardless. Somewhere in the healing process, Aoi's hair got caught up in it and became accidentally enchanted with an indestructible charm. Since such a charm had never been applied to a living being before, rather than being relatively temporary, it permanently bonded to her hair. The crafting of her new arm and eye took more time than her healing, allowing her to watch and request specifications to both to suit her needs. Once done, the arm was a nearly perfect match to her left one, and the eye was a flawless match to her remaining one. She thanked the smith and healer happily and agreed to pay for both their services and their silence on her 'visit' to them. Since then, her thieving has become more cautious and aimed at less high-profile items, causing her to fade somewhat more into obscurity as a thief.
↣ H o w x I x G o t x H e r e ▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰ ¯ ¯ ↘ She was chosen by Zeladis for her skills in stealth and infiltration over anything else, but they also agreed to give her full amnesty should she ever be caught in a theft in the future, regardless if Zeladis won or lost the games.
The magitech and half were thing are kind of op together. Also, I have a bit of a thing against furry's. Either she's human or in beast form, unless you can find a way to make it logical as to how she got stuck mid-transformation, and then she wouldn't be able to transform back and forth since she would be stuck as a hybrid of both forms already. The picture is also really anime. I can't accept anime. D= I have a few links in the first few posts that will bring you to my pb album and alphacoders. Both have good fantasy, non-anime, pictures you can choose from.
DX Sorry Kiri! <3
Hmmmmm rethinking... Now that I read further, there is a logical reason in her bio. That's fine. But I still need you to cut down on the extra abilities with half transformation, and a new picture. DX
I don't really have any other images even close to this one, finding this one itself was pure luck as it is. I'll admit it's very close to anime, though... The image is kinda what defines her character in the first place. Without it, or one very close to it, she's not Aoi. And I did check your photo bucket stock images when I worked up Kiri's profile, I don't remember any being similar to Aoi's here.
