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Posted: Thu Dec 24, 2009 10:14 am
can anyone help me?
as you open the door you see me there on the floor i have fulfilled my will to die but you continue to wonder why
it wasn't a bullet from a gun yet it wouldn't take more than one it was from a slowly breaking heart but not from being apart
along with my dream to die came an urge to cheat and lie i took a shot in the dark and managed to hit my mark
its over now you stare and "how?" but i'm laying there dead an end to the miserable life ive lead....