Poetry Showcase

[The Real Mandaleigh96]

This is the place for all you poets to show off your poetry and get some feedback on it. You can post each poem in separate topics, or one topic, and just keep adding to it with each poem you want to post. And remember, if it's anything more than PG13, make sure you write 'Mature'in the name of the topic. smile  

[xXxdarling_chaosxXx]

such unrelenting pain
is caused by us loving in vain
ad i'm sorry to say
but this is our last day

i'm leaving now
i still don't know how
i turn for a last glance
but i missed my chance

i can't take anymore of this
anymore empty bliss
i'm still searching for a way out
but i'm begining to doubt

i don't think i can get away from you
you know how hard i'm trying to
all i can do is make you sad
then make you cry and feel really bad

i'm out of your life
ridding you of your strife
the end of this lie
begins with goodbye....