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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 5:46 pm
I walk these halls and pass you by You dont even think to ask me why
Ignoring me is what you do This to me is nothing new
As i look at you i must turn away Never knowing What to say...
I wrote this a while ago and i think i will add a few more uhhh i think there called stanzas Post if u like it smile if u dont than go away stare
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Posted: Sat Aug 11, 2007 11:41 am
nice poem i liked it alot. i get ignord too
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 4:44 am
Please, capitalize your i's. stare And a LOT of people are ignored in this subforum.
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 6:02 am
Ashes is right... stare
Either way, you just need to be better at your grammar and capitalize every I you write....Other than that, it's really good.
And yes, they are called stanzas.
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 7:43 am
I thought that was fantastic!! it was really good
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