Some of my many poems, lemme know what you think!

[walk like thunder]

Way With Words

Angst lends its eloquence
My heart's put up it's own defence
Heartache inspires poetry
But that's not all you meant to me
The ink on this page is running with my tears
The images I convey to you can't show you all my fears
The verses that I can think up are simply just too bland
The guy that I am with is not who I had planned
And this pain it gives me reason
To write all that I feel
And this pain that I am feeling
I wish it wasn't real
And these words that I'm spelling out
Don't show you what I'm thinking 'bout
And though my heart is beating
I've learned that happiness is fleeting
The signs say I'm still alive
But I'm long dead inside.

Fallen Angel

If I'm gonna get to heaven
I'm gonna get there tonight
I might get to heaven
If I slit my wrists right

Heaven would be escaping
Escaping from this hell
I'll make my escape
A returning angel that fell

I'll do it tonight
I'm sure they'll understand
I'll slip away in sleep
With a razor in my hand

I'll leave them a letter
It's filled with my thoughts
I leave behind my feelings
They're all that I've got

And so I'll go to heaven
I'm gonna get there tonight
Even if I go to hell
It can't be worse than this right?

Strange-er

You speak a language I don't understand,
Punctuated by gestures made by a strange hand.
A tongue that seems foreign,
Yet I know yours so well.
From that glint in your eye
You have something to tell.
You're familiar to me, like a second skin.
But I can no longer guess just what lies within.
We were the same person,
But you're a stranger now,
Seperated suddenly,
I can't remember how.
Does it even matter?
Now your touch is cold as ice.
And we can't go back.
You don't get a second choice.
There is no other option.
There is no simple cure.
Our damage has been done now,
Of that I am quite sure.

So you'll remain a stranger,
No longer the boy I knew,
But in case you remember,
Just know that I loved you.

Attention Whore

Stupid lil' emo girl
In your lil ******** up world,
Safety pins in your arm,
Your hobby is self harm.
Mildly pornographic photography.
How low will you sink to insult me?
I hope you're happy in your future,
With those words carved in your skin.
I hope you get what you deserve.
Faking pain when there's none within.
Seeking attention,
You just want your name mentioned.

Are you proud of yourself?
Proud of what you do?
Is depression an achievement?
I bet your mom is proud of you.
You're so hypocritical, wait, do you even know what that means?
I bet you gotta starve yourself to fit into those skinny jeans.
And yeah, I'm ugly, but at least I'm sane,
I don't get a kick outta taking pictures of my pain.

So ******** up lil emo girl,
Come join us in the normal world.  

[ElVl0]

omfg i TOTALLY LOVE THEM specially the fallen angel and attention whore i was stunned xd keep up the good work ur amazingly good  

[walk like thunder]

thank yhoo thank yhoo thank yhoo *huggles above person*  

[ElVl0]

i ish no person i be teh emoh frogzorz domokun
but am serious they were kickass poems heart

and if you dont mind i will relpy to your attention whore poem with another poem am gonna write now ^^  

[ElVl0]

took me less than 2 hours to write it, i was in class so i was kinda distracted razz i hope u like it:-


call me stupid call me emo
you people are just too shallow
i am the living dead
i feel haunted in my bed
living forever in pain is my own curse
if i dont spill my blood i see my hearse
i'm so confused so scared of death
never knew love or had a hearth
people are just puppets of fate
"go along with the world and live it sane"
you stupid pricks your just insane
i have no future i live for the moment
and rather die than hear your comment
i cleanse my sins while shedding those tears
i prayed and cried and fought my fears
till i knew for sure, god has no ears
always been had..i thought he hears
he hears our plea, our pains he feel
proud of pain ? b***h please get real
am not hypocritical just eat your beans
your mom always told you to eat your greens
while mine was drunk going out with a loser
thinking she's alive she was just a poser
she always screamed i was a mistake
so i hurt myself and my life i'll take  

[walk like thunder]

i like it but it irritates me haha
wow less than 2 hours? long time
mine take like 5mins

and i wrote the attention whore poem coz this lil emo b***h started havin a go at me, insulting my appearance and whatnot...god i hate that girl  

[ElVl0]

if i knew ur reason to write it then i wouldnt have replied to it am sorry eek yea i took me that long cause like i said i was in class and the teacher had to b***h at me few times .  

[walk like thunder]

grr teachers eh? i wrote a poem bout like, eating disorders, while in class and my teacher read it....I got referred to the counsellor...fun.

and i like your comeback poem, it reminds me of me when i used to self harm! (in my darker moments)  

[The Dadalorian]

lol..you ran out of ideas when you got the the eat your beans part didn't you?  

[ElVl0]

Soviet Mudkipz

lol..you ran out of ideas when you got the the eat your beans part didn't you?

omg i hate you! HOW CAN YOU TELL ?!!!!! domokun u must die for my sake xD

its true i ran out of ideas cause the teacher was bitching at me, so i wanted to end the poem asap lol  

[walk like thunder]

lol yes rhyming the word beans in an emo poem is...unusual
but sssh you!  

[ElVl0]

i still made it fit didnt i ? if hiccups likes it then am happy  

[walk like thunder]

i'm not gonna get any opinions on these am i?

stare  

[ElVl0]

oh.. guess mine doesnt count then, cool  

[walk like thunder]

argh your so finicky!
of course your opinion counts!
drama queen! *poke*