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Tak-Jak
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Nov 25, 2007 10:42 am
Only on gray days
can you map the distances
between our parched hearts.  
PostPosted: Sun Nov 25, 2007 11:11 am
I think that...

You have such a lovely way of thinking.  

KirbyVictorious


Tak-Jak
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Nov 25, 2007 11:46 am
3nodding  
PostPosted: Sun Nov 25, 2007 12:49 pm
Isn't grey spelled gray? Unless I'm totally retarded.

Thinking of adjective to describe this one... sweet? Something like that.  

BlackHawkGS


Tak-Jak
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Nov 25, 2007 1:13 pm
Thanks Hawk.

Though I wouldnt necessarily descibe this as sweet..  
PostPosted: Sun Nov 25, 2007 3:13 pm
Well, I have a feeling I interpreted it a little bit differently than what was intended sweatdrop  

BlackHawkGS


Tak-Jak
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Nov 25, 2007 4:10 pm
Which is fine.

Its writing. You interpret at will of self.  
PostPosted: Sun Nov 25, 2007 4:21 pm
Your writings always make me sad, in some way that's not the same sadness that you feel when something bad has happened. It's more like an inside melancholy. This was one of those things.

Lovely, of course.  

Voxxx


Tak-Jak
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Nov 25, 2007 4:39 pm
It is a sadness, that pccurs when you are dry-eyed and stiff.
And numb to the world.  
PostPosted: Sun Nov 25, 2007 5:39 pm
KNow what you mean, Onee-chan.  

KirbyVictorious


Xahmen
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Nov 25, 2007 7:27 pm
It's pretty, but I have no idea what it means, as it's hard to understand a meaning when all that is present are thirteen words.

What... does it mean?  
PostPosted: Sun Nov 25, 2007 8:08 pm
Maybe it's a girl thing...?

Numb is kind of hard to achieve, isn't it?  

Voxxx


Tak-Jak
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Nov 25, 2007 8:26 pm
So is grey.  
PostPosted: Mon Nov 26, 2007 7:16 pm
Grey is a lovely color.  

KirbyVictorious


NovaKing

PostPosted: Mon Nov 26, 2007 7:21 pm
So you can only measure the distances between two thirsty hearts when its likely to rain?


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