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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 6:25 pm
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While gathering together any traces of creative effort for my college entrance applications, I noticed that a lot of--many--okay, okay, all my stories have one theme, voice, and style. I know it's important to have a variety of styles and be able to write in more than one genre. So, I took a stab at a contemporary story.
Note: This is my first try so... be gentle. sweatdrop
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The blood had been savagely splattered on the walls of the one-bedroom apartment since three o'clock that morning. Detectives Mallory and Camp of the New York Police Deparatment crossed under the yellow caution tape and stood in awe of the hideous scene. Jacob Mallory folded his arms against his chest and gave a long whistle. "Whadd'ya think, Camp?" he said.
"I think we have ourselves a serial killer," she said after running a hand through her long brown hair. She took a few steps toward the mass covered by a plain white sheet, bent down and threw the cloth back with one hand. Mallory turned away. "This is the fourth victim. All female - all with their faces hacked by this nut." She replaced the sheet and began to survey the apartment.
"It doesn't make any sense," he said after his stomach settled. "Victims' faces are mutilated to hide their identity. But -"
"But this apartment's filled with pictures, documents and all sorts of identification," she said, thumbing through the desk drawers. "The murderer didn't bother to remove so much as the driver's license. Look, it's still here. Right next to her keys." She tossed the flimsy piece of plastic to her partner after giving it a quick glance.
He studied the item carefully. "Sarah Conner," he cast a glance towards the corpse. "Age 19."
"Come on," she said flatly. "Let's get back to the station."
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 6:42 pm
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 6:58 pm
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 7:13 pm
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 8:08 pm
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 4:04 pm
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 4:50 pm
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 6:03 pm
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 8:16 pm
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