A small thing.

[KirbyVictorious]

California II

Nothing bad can happen in
California
Where the moon shines bright
as the sun at night
Where there's always light....
There's always light.

You and me together,
California;
We'll chase the demons away.  

[BlackHawkGS]

Sounds like it could be the chorus of a song.  

[KirbyVictorious]

'Tis the minisequel to my other poem. *sigh* one of my favorites so far, it is.

There are too many songs about California. :/  

[BlackHawkGS]

Exactly why I thought that xd

*Hums "Dani California" to himself*  

[KirbyVictorious]

Tis a reason for that.

but california is just a metaphor.  

[Voxxx]

You're starting to sound a bit like Astrid. *ponders*  

[KirbyVictorious]

Good!  

[NovaKing]

KirbyVictorious

Tis a reason for that.

but california is just a metaphor.

I wonder what "chase away" means ....certainly not what you think it means, as you can't chase away a part of you (that is, those aforementioned "demons")...hmm interesting...

A lot shorter than your other work...

[I wonder why....]  

[KirbyVictorious]

because I wanted it to be concise. The whole point can be summarized into very few words.  

[NovaKing]

KirbyVictorious

because I wanted it to be concise. The whole point can be summarized into very few words.

well stop it X_X, it burns ^_^

[I demand that you write a bagillion lines of poetry to compensate for the briefness of this one.]  

[KirbyVictorious]

shut up.  

[Reese_Roper]

Poetry doesn't have to be politically correct, Nova. That's why it's poetry.  

[The Splendiferous Rufu]

Non-PC material is poetry? Call me crazy, but I don't think Carlos Mencia is a poet.

<3RUFU

 

[KirbyVictorious]

.....................  

[NovaKing]

KirbyVictorious

shut up.

-shrug-