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Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 4:54 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 9:20 pm
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PandaEnlightenment Captain
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Posted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 10:06 am
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So, I cheated. Instead of using my own words, I stole Panda's.
================ We saw deer tracks, Freshly pressed into snow Like the kisses you pressed Into my skin. The air, crisp, kissed You and me And the deer-- Wherever they hid.
The beer, amber In the light Through the open tent flap Warmed our veins, And we warmed our veins In each other's skin With kisses pressed Like tracks into snow.
You rose out of the sleeping bag, A swan burst from the lake's mirror, And your skin, warmed to the veins With snow and my kisses. And you asked if we could play rummy. “That,” I said, “would be lovely,” With you. ===================
Not my best, but I like it. In continuing the theme, and maybe modifying the rules of the contest, I provide 5 words for some other intrepid soul to attempt to make a poem out of.
The words: god, coffee, bent, letter, poor
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Posted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 10:41 am
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PandaEnlightenment Captain
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Posted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 10:47 am
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Posted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 11:16 am
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PandaEnlightenment Captain
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Posted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 11:32 am
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Posted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 11:36 am
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Posted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 11:43 am
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JamesRaith QueenElizabeth3 See? Isn't this fun? Everyone is doing a really good job, I'm very impressed!
And James. If you don't publish your poetry...I will be very mad at you, and Hammi's packman will have to eat you. You're amazing! Haha. Careful. My ego bites if stroked too much. Really, though, poetry isn't my thing. I'm good at it, I guess, but I don't care if it ever gets published.
Foolish little writer.... such silly stories you tell yourself. I care if they get published! I want to read more of them!
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Posted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 11:46 am
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PandaEnlightenment Captain
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Posted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 11:53 am
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Posted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 11:56 am
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PandaEnlightenment Captain
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Posted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 6:51 pm
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Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 11:25 am
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PandaEnlightenment Captain
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Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 5:01 pm
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