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Darkness Lin

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 28, 2008 10:21 am
I hope this i okay tell me what you think of it

Perlog
Life is a game how we play is up to the one who control's the pieces. I have for see everything and plan to use this to help me out active me goal's. The perfect one shall be brought back and the weak race will be enslave by her hand and i shall be second in charge. This game is set up time to play. Winners take all.

CH 1 First moves

I slowly pick up my paper and started to read were i last left off. "neferet are you sure its wise to start are operations before the date?" I slightly smiled as i place the paper down on the desk and stood up from my nice soft chair. "shino its best to start its the right time also... dont worry the game has started its just a matter of times before we make it to are next part of her plans." I said while walking shino slightly bow. shino was a very close friend of my she had on a maid outfit and had been with me almost throw my hole life. Shino just walked next to me with no smile she never smiled and i was okay with it for me and shino new when one and other were happy. "Dont worry about me just make sure my son starts his mission and so do the others. If we fail to active are goal's then everything will fall." She smiled as she started to walk. "we managed to change the route with that one fight and we all due owe Kain and the widow for that one." she said with a smile as a person in a black cloak appeared right next to her. "im heading head of you... i hope you have your fun so fare i heard that no team has made it." I just smiled as i heard the figure talk. "what do you think are race is getting weaker and weaker." i said with a smile as the figure just nodded its head and disappeared like it was never there. shino just nodded her head as she walked away. I just smiled as i open the front door and walked out with my red hod on. My feet touch the snow which had been falling all day. "time to get this all started." I said while I open a portal.

The game had started i was the behind everything I just need to make sure that i insure that nothing would stop my plans this time. As i step into a lab I just smiled as I Started to walk. "Ada james you two will be mine." I said with a smile as i heard a guard shot out Vampire. I just laugh "weak human." I said as i just looked at him. He raise his gun and started to open fire. I just quickly ran on the wall and pulled out a couple of needles and throw them at him. Two hit him in the eye's while one hit him in the throat. The guard dropped on the ground moving around but was not able to yell. "Like i said weak." I just kept moving as i walked into room room after room killing everyone that i saw. I soon maid it to the top floor "this is were they are." I just nodded my head as i pulled out a couple more needles. There were only two rooms on the top floor of this underground lab. The control room and the cell room. Luckily for me the label the rooms. "very smart humans." I said with a small laugh as i open the control room and quickly took care of the trash. I looked around on to see someone sneaking into the elevator of the parking lot. "It seem's they sent one... and by the looks of it hes a new born." I just walked out of the room and head to the cell room. I could hear gun fir in the lower floors that I didn't even go to. "i cant wait to see what this kid will be like." I said as I looked at james and ada with a smile as they new who i was and didn't even dear move i just sat down and started to read what ever papers were on the desk. "soon... i might have a little bite fun soon." i said in a low voice as i read.

The gun fire soon die down and the sent of blood could be smelled. "I wonder did he make it." I said with a smile as I listen to hear a small item fall on the ground on the floor below me. "nope the widow is walking in... stupid humans cant even know if one of there staff is a vampire or not." I said with a smile as heard 6 dumps noise. I just slowly got up and got ready for the little game i was about to play. It didn't take long for the door to open i was on the side. "watch it dont get any closer to us she will kill us like the others." Ada said as she looked at me i just laugh slightly. "well it took you long enough young one." Elliot turn and looked at me. He had bullet holes in his cloths and some blood on his lips. "i see you had a hard time... so should i just end your weak life or toy with you?" Elliot eye's sharpen. "im not weak you old hag ill kill you." he said as he grabbed one of his daggers and rush to me. I just nodded my head as i grabbed his hand that held the dagger. "one thing you dont hold the dagger like that you wont be able to use it right." I just punch him in the face sending him into the air and right into a wall. Elliot got back up and just looked at me with hateful eye's but somewhat shock. He move his hands to his side making manny different items out of the darkness. I just slowly throw my hood down to the ground and looked at him with both of my eye's. "kid ill let you have your fun... winners takes all." I smiled as my other eye started to look at his attack. "Crystal eye." I said with a smile the eye that i had always kept cover was my crystal eye it was something no one had seen for more then hundreds or even thousands of years.

Elliot laugh "your going to need more then some kind of trick to win against me." he said as he aim his arms to me everything he made with the darkness flew at me. I just smiled as i saw everything coming. As soon they got in a 2 meters ratio they disappeared. "kid im not using some kind of trick this is the gift I was born with. This is may mark." I said with a smile as i just ran towards him. He didn't stand a chase(sp) but i wasn't real aiming to kill him but see how strong the 6 generation was and so fare they were weaker then the last one. My theory was right with ever generation we grow weaker and weaker soon we be nothing but humans with powers. I grabbed Elliot by the hand and throw into a wall leaving a hole were he was thrown. "your not even worth my time kid." I said with a smile as i just looked at the hole. I just open the door to see him on the ground trying to get back up. "why dont you just stay down at less save your self the trouble of being put back on the ground." i said in a cold tone for it made me angry to see we were getting weaker and weaker. "I wont lose not on my first mission." He said as he got back the smell of new blood could be smelled. He has some blood running down his face. "As you wish kid.." I just turn around "shino you can have your fun with him." Right when I said Shino's name she appeared right next to me. shino just pulled out a couple of needles. "you want him dead or alive.?" Shino asked while looking at Elliot Shino didn't care for the child at all as long as she was with her lady she was all right. I just smiled and whisper, " Alive he might turn out to be something great at the end but do make it look like we want him dead... and make it fast others are coming." I said as i head back to the room. Shino just bow as she ran on the wall still in her maid cloths. I could smell more blood in the air. "I will never get tired of that smell." I said as i walked up to Ada and James. "you two have your options. "one come with me or two be thrown into a volcano pick." I said just looking at both of them. Ada was the first to answer in a an angry voice. "ill go." She said as looked away. James just nodded his head. "Ill go also." They both want to live which was good. I just smiled as i move my hand the both fell into a portal that would take them back to my mansion. I just turn to see elliot thrown throw the hole again. He lay on the ground cover in needles. "well well it seem's she did a number on you." Shino just walked in throw the door she had no makers on her cloths only a little bite blood drops here and there but that was all from elliot. Right when she close the door a large noise could be heard. It came from the elevator door's. "well there here." I said with a smile as I just looked at the door wait for the others to come. I just want to say hi to an old friend that i play the game cat and mouse.  
PostPosted: Sun Sep 28, 2008 12:31 pm
o_O did ...i ...already read someting like this? lol... i'm not sure i remembr something about the game, and i can't remember if it was your journal i read it out of... lol either way your stories are good lin ^-^
great job!

i always get hooked into them, its like mind hypnotizing @_@

hmm... now that i look back into it... it's a little different then the other game one...  

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 28, 2008 1:09 pm
nice gj I'm making a book too
<.<

>.>

"steals your idea"  
PostPosted: Sun Sep 28, 2008 2:02 pm
kingdomheartswiz
nice gj I'm making a book too
<.<

>.>

"steals your idea"


lol >.>

>.> .... *idea blows up in khw's face, burst out laughing* XD

heee... u shouldn't stteal.. blaugh  

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 28, 2008 3:06 pm
crying but i liked that idea makes me think of the kitty that blew up in his face

poor kitty  
PostPosted: Sun Sep 28, 2008 4:53 pm
lol glad you like it and also i been adding to it and plz dont steal it. I been trying to get all my ideals down on it which has taken me about 4 mouths in all to start to acutely write hee ^^  

Darkness Lin

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 28, 2008 4:58 pm
don't worrie i'm not gonna steal it lol (i'm not that evil untill you steal my cookies)  
PostPosted: Sun Sep 28, 2008 5:08 pm
kingdomheartswiz
don't worrie i'm not gonna steal it lol (i'm not that evil untill you steal my cookies)


lol... *has cookie in hand* oh... this was yours wasn't it? sweatdrop *innocently hands cookie back*  

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 28, 2008 6:19 pm
scream YOU STOLE MEH COOKIE

wait she gave it back and you steal kittys all the time well um i

hmmm

ok i forgive you mad but your on thin ice  
PostPosted: Mon Sep 29, 2008 3:23 pm
kingdomheartswiz
scream YOU STOLE MEH COOKIE

wait she gave it back and you steal kittys all the time well um i

hmmm

ok i forgive you mad but your on thin ice




taps foot...i dont like yelling whenim trying to sleep  

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 29, 2008 3:26 pm
o and by the way nice story hmmmm you know i hope you dont mind but i goona give you some of my advice....its really a great story but the dialect and the wording needs a lil spice you know bigger words...so that way your not usiong the same word over and over again but other than that it keept me interested and thats hard to do so very good ...bows in respect to your writing ..keep it up and im sure you will make it far in what you do  
PostPosted: Mon Sep 29, 2008 5:06 pm
forever_her_guardianangel
kingdomheartswiz
scream YOU STOLE MEH COOKIE

wait she gave it back and you steal kittys all the time well um i

hmmm

ok i forgive you mad but your on thin ice




taps foot...i dont like yelling whenim trying to sleep


*we all fall through the thin ice khw said we're "on" (lol)
gwah!! i sorry! *shoots myself through the air to hug chris* ^-^ better?  

Kurisu-s Lil Angel
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forever_her_guardianangel
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 29, 2008 5:39 pm
Ninja Shiya - Kutani
forever_her_guardianangel
kingdomheartswiz
scream YOU STOLE MEH COOKIE

wait she gave it back and you steal kittys all the time well um i

hmmm

ok i forgive you mad but your on thin ice




taps foot...i dont like yelling whenim trying to sleep


*we all fall through the thin ice khw said we're "on" (lol)
gwah!! i sorry! *shoots myself through the air to hug chris* ^-^ better?


yes better ...smiles and jumps in the cold cold water with you  
PostPosted: Wed Oct 01, 2008 11:45 am
jumps i n the cold water with you guys  

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Darkness Lin

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 13, 2008 7:59 pm
(thank you for the advice forever but im just working on the rough draft so yeah i have a lot of work to do)

CH 2 Old Friends

Shino looked at me I just nodded my head. "go have your fun with them... but make sure he makes it here." I said with a smile as i looked at her. She just slightly bow," As you wish my lady." she said as she rush out of the room. I just sat on top of the desk and looked down at Elliot. He try to get up but fell back down. "I-Ill get you back for this." I just slightly laugh at him. "revenge is a poison it slowly kill's you from with in... are you willing to kill your self just to take me down?" I asked while looking at his blood cover body. He just slightly smiled "Hell I would do it in a hart beat... you old hag ill kill you thats a promises." I just smiled "then your fate is seal my boy... you shall die by my hands and to-" I stopped for the door flew across the room. I just stood up and looked at a young child looking man walk in. He looked at Elliot as soon as he saw how badly he was he rush over to him. "I new you were not ready for this mission." He looked up at me with hateful eye's. "aw Intel officer Kain." I said with a smile as i just stood there looking at him. "Its been sometimes... after all i was the one to attack your little friends kind and wipe out all but one... how is she doing." I said with my eye's just slightly sharpening. Kain just looked at me. "she's find and you wont get to her." He said as he got in front of the blood cover Elliot. I just smiled at him. "your an Intel officer how can you think to beat me here with out your man.." I said right when gun fire could be heard. "they have there hands full with Shino so how do you plan to win a fight you know you cant win." I said as i just looked at his eye's. He new about my crystal eye already. He smiled as he move out one of his hands. "Blaster Edge." A Round type blade that was strapped to his wrist appeared. "aw it seem's you got a new toy." I said with a smile as i pulled out a katana. "Well let are little game began again" I said as I ran to the side to side heading to him. He just nodded his head. "at the end you wont win." he said as he move his hand slightly up and shot the blade at me. I just smiled as I saw it coming at me I duck right under it felt a couple of my white hair get cut a little. "hum.." i said as i rolled to the side seeing how it came back to him. "thats a nice little toy." I said as i just throw my katana at him and quickly grabbed to needles that i had and throw them also at him. His eye's sharpen as he turn around and quickly push Elliot away from him. Right when the katana hit him in the back it explode.

I smiled as i saw kain fly to a wall and smash right into it. "See your Deity isn't coming to save you this time. Kain your still weak as always just give up and make this easy on your self. Who knows i might use your soul in of there body it wont be all that bad." She said with a smile as she just started to walk to were he lay on the ground. "Never talk about her like that she was once your friend and is still my friend." I just smiled as I looked at him. "she's gone thats the truth. I guess ill just end this." I said as I pulled out a needle right when I did she saw kain rolled to the side and aim his Blaster Edge at me. "I wont let you harm anymore it ends now." When he finish talking the blade shot at me. I just did a back flip right over the blade. "You know fully well you cant beat me that easily" I said as i turn to see the blade coming at me again i just smiled as i move my hand in front of me and caught the blade some blood drip on the ground as it had cut me but i had stopped it before it did any major damage to me. "This is just a toy at the end." I said as I just add more perisher to it braking it into two. I throw the two pieces to the ground and turn to him. "As much as i like to finish you off its to early to do that..." shino appeared right next to me. "Its done and more are coming do so i would say its wise to leave for we got what we want my lady." I just smiled as i heard her. "yes my friend its best we leave." I said as a portal open right under us and we appeared right back in my mansion.

I just smiled as i sat back down in my seat. "so Do you think Vayne and Mira had any trouble on there mission." Shino smiled and just nodded her head "no i highly thought they have any problems as to NIkku her mission is going well as to calera and Elda they havent started and are wait on the right timing to get in." I just smiled as I drank some tea that shino had brought me. "well glad to see everything is going well. The door open," Mom i brought him as you asked for." I just smiled as i looked at Vayne. "thank you son Mira must be sleepily after all im sure she had a hell lot of fun toying around with them." Vayne just nodded his head "yeah she's sleepily im going to rest up a bite and your right she did have a lot of fun. See you mom." He said as he walked right out. He left the door open a tall man about 6 feet walked in and smiled as he looked at me. "well its been sometime im shock to find your still alive and not under this cures that im in." I just smiled as i move my had for shino to leave she did what i want her to with out saying or making a noise. "well Draken its been sometime. After all after that fight which you were seal away by the widow i been looking for you." He smiled as he took a seat and looked at me his dark red eye's looked at my only eye the other one my crystal eye i had it cover with my red hood. "Well glad to see you been looking for me... but time isn't on my side i dont have long before i must go into sleep and the only way to brake this curse is to get someone to kill them self for me or kill the ******** b***h who put this seal on me." I just smiled as I heard him. "Trust me finding the widow is as hard it was back then you know how she is. She's everywhere but no were to be found. She also the same hatless type person that would even kill her own children and kill her husband if she ever got one." Draken just laugh at what I said. "So what your doing i heard you have plan going on." I just smiled as I drank some more tea. "yes, I do have plans set up and well since i got you back and knowing you want to get back at your brother for all the
chaos he throw you into. Your mission is Bring kain back here alive and kill the widow she most likely will go to the fight for... Kain was one part that help her and she is going to try to seal you away with the help of Kain." Draken smiled as he heard. "this should be fun. Neferet you know how to sure give your old friend a welcome gift." I just smiled "oh this isn't nothing compare to your main gift." I said with a smile as I got up and walked to the door and open it. "if you need help Take Rosalind with you she doesn't have a master yet." Draken smiled "no thank you. I can take care of my self and pules ill have lot of fun taking Kain out along side that b***h." I just smiled and walked out. "just as i thought old times dont change much." I said as I walked throw the hallway. Two figures appeared next to me. "not yet to you and well you just be ready." I said as both disappeared as fast as they had appeared.

I was back in my work room working on a new doll(one of those old looking type of dolls). I just smiled as i work on its legs and arms. I felt someone walk into the room I slightly smiled as i listen to the foot steps. "whats wrong vayne?" Vayne smiled as he looked at my back. I could always tell how he looked when not even looking at him. "Are you sure that Draken is ready to go to the school you dont want to send anyone to help him?" I just smiled i could see he was worry about my old friend. "he will be find dont worry to much about him. I already sent Calera and Elda out to keep an eye on him." I just slightly looked at him. "There's something else on your mind isn't there?" He just looked at my eye's as i looked at him. "Yes, the seals are still on her do you want me to do anything to speed up this process?" I just slightly smiled as i looked at him. "No in do time they be gone at the end you'll have your fun so will Mira." He just nodded as he turn around,"I trust what you have plan mother." I just nodded as he left. I just got back to work then a felt a cold blade close to my neck I had a smile as i just looked at the doll i was working on. "Stop this or else you'll forces manny other groups into this mess. You know full well she's watching this." I just smiled as listen to her," Great Grandmother shouldn't mind what im doing after all im just trying to get her daughter back or should I say Grandmother." The blade was push closer to my neck. "Listen to me lady stop this now before it gets out of hand and we have to step in." I just smiled even more "Oh shut up mother or should I say shinda." I started to feel some blood run down my neck. "You dont call me by my name daughter." I just smiled and slight nodded my head as I felt the blade move away from me. "were watching and so are they so stop this before we are force to act on you and your little so call family." I just turn to see a cloud of black smoke. "I wont stop... i wont never stop until we are in control of this world." I just turn around and went back to work the main game was about to fully start.  
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