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 Posted: Sat Aug 22, 2009 8:05 am
This is the story of Annie-May.
She is a sweet little girl who is only 4 years old.
She had long brown hair, rosey pink cheeks, and sweet little Blue eyes.
Everyone who meets her love her.
Her little elephant doll is her best friends.
She always had him in her arms.
She has lots of friends that live down the street but no one can be more close than her doll.
Her momther is mean sometimes but never to her.
Her father is sweet loving and caring, but he gets very stressed from work.
After work he normaly goes to the Bar.
When he gets back he is always drunk, mad, and stressed.
Both her parents normaly get into fights when her father gets home late from the bar.
Sometimes they wake up Annie-may.
She wacthes her parents fight from upstairs.
Sometimes her parents even start slapping eachother.
Annie-may always wacthes in fear that one day they will see her.
Today when her father got home from the bar her mother was mad.
She said that she was thinking about 'leaving him'.
Annie-May was confused.
Then her father got a confused look on his face too.
He begged her not to leave him.
He said he loved her, but she wouldn't change her mind.
Then they kept fighting.
Annie-May went back up to her room.
Trying to sleep.
The next day after her dad left her mother packed a bag and left the house.
Leaving Annie-May alone
Annie-May had never been left alone before.
Annie-May got scared and thought about what she should do.
Her mother was putting her bag into the car
Annie may grabbed and bag and stuffed 3 of her toys and 2 outfits and stuffed it in the bag, holding tightly onto he doll.
She Ran out the door as fast as her legs would carry her
Her mother started to drive away.
Annie-May Ran down the street trying to keep up with her mother.
Her mother made a few turns and Annie-May tried to keep up.
Then she turned a cornner and her mother was not there.
Annie-May was lost, Hopelessly lost.
She tried to find her mother's car, but there was no luck.
She tried to get back home, and again no luck.
Annie-May walked around for hours.
The only food she had 2 water bottles, that a nice man had given her, and an apple and pack of fries.
She had a few coins a lady had given her for her toys, but she didn't give up her doll.
She had everything pack nicely into her bag.
She was walking in the street and she saw a newspaper.
Annie-May picked it up and saw her picture.
She couldn't read but it had said her name "Annie-May Rose Simson" Then followed with a few letters she could make out like L, S, T, C, I, and D.
She tried to tell a man sitting on the side of the srteet that it was her in the paper.
The man looked counfsed as Annie-May was talking to him
Annie-May soon grew very tired.
That day she had eaten her apples and drank one of her bottles of water but her other one had a hole and made her fries soggy and everything wet.
She laied down on her bag and hugged her elephant.
When she woke up her whole body was covers in scracthes and a rabbied dog was staring at her.
It had foam coming from it mouth.
Annie-May ran as fast as she could.
She dropped her bag on the way but she didn't care.
Annie-May was screaming clucthing tighly onto her doll.
She screamed and kept running
She didn't know where she was running but she didn't care.
She ran until she was in the middle of the a treey area.
Annie-May layed there in pain.
She was panting and gasping and was so thristy she felt very faint.
Then she fell onto the ground and closed her eyes and with her last bit of strength hugged her doll for the last time.
Then Annie-May took a deep last breath and died
That day Annie-May died only 4 years old holding tighly onto her Elephant doll.
She was finaly at peace.
The last days of her life were the hardest and all she wanted was to be a peace.
The next day a man found her and reported her to the police.
They looked up her parents and they had a funral.
Her death brought her parents farther apart.
They blamed eacthother for her death.
They burried little Annie-May with her best friends in her arms.
Then after that day her parents never saw eacth-other again.
Because they missed dear old Annie-May too badly. Hope you liked it!
Tell me what you think I can do to make it better please!!! razz Full version in the areas is here >Click!<
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Posted: Sat Aug 22, 2009 1:23 pm
I really liked the story, it was very sad too
Annie-may could go and ask more people about what the newspaper said, but they ignored her, and then she grew very tired
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Posted: Thu Jan 28, 2010 11:08 pm
crying crying Poor annie-may good *sniffle* job
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Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 4:25 pm
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Posted: Thu Feb 11, 2010 11:54 pm
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Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 4:05 pm
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Posted: Wed Jul 07, 2010 12:45 pm
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Posted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 10:17 pm
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