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[Love On Her Arms 215]

This is a poem I wrote. It's sad. All my poems are sad. I don't know why. Well, tell me what you think!


I love the way you look at me
The way you tilt your head like it's all OK
and you smile
like everythings the way it should be.

I hate the way you laugh at me
when I try to do something good
but in your mind it's always bad
The way it's not ment to be.

Love and hate
good and bad
right and wrong
simmilar and different

Was this ment to be?

an original  

[LunaNatz]

i liked it, i thought it was really really good!  

[Love On Her Arms 215]

thanks for commenting! (yippee, first comment!!)  

[xPastelRainbows]

wow, that was amazingness ^_^
keep it up, i totally understand how you're feeling!  

[Love On Her Arms 215]

Actually, this above situation in my poem has never happened to me, things pop into my head at random, but they are all sad, if not unusual. The ideas beg to be written, so that's my job. To get these ideas onto paper (or type and post them) and share them with the world.
Thanks for commenting and constructive (non-violent) critisism would be apreciated! Thank you!  

[Mizuki-chan93]

I like it very much! You should definitely keep writing! lol i keep commenting on other peoples work, no one seems to comment on mine T-T oh well~! your poem was lovely!