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 Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 2:08 pm
defenetly no my best but il get around to improve it. i think im still having problems with the neck can someone help me solve it? kiaaaaiiiiii!!!!!!!!
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Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 2:10 pm
menen defenetly no my best but il get around to improve it. i think im still having problems with the neck can someone help me solve it? kiaaaaiiiiii!!!!!!!! when will the day that i wont have to quote my self will come?
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Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 2:25 pm
Awwwww. You didn't put Tae Kwon Do as one of your choices. (Darn!) But I think your pic is cute.
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Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 2:30 pm
no i didnt cus tae kwon do hurts in the toes and i dont like hurting my toes
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Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 2:37 pm
Well, it's a good picture overall, but one thing that bothers me is her hair. I don't see a hairline, so from here it looks as if she's wearing a toupe'.Oh and about the neck, I would add some lines to add some veinsto the neck. Even girls' necks show veins. Without them it looks as if one side of her top(Can't remember the name) is falling off her shoulder. Overall it's good. I may or may not be anatomically correct...I'm new to this constructive critisism.
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Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 9:54 pm
*agrees with Abstractangel* Kiratay!
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Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2005 11:37 am
As a lady who has experience in the art of kendo, a first reaction who be that she's going to trip if she has her hakama that long ^_^;
I would also suggest you lower the waistband and form a collar for her dogi.
(yes, my sensei would be proud >_>; )
Other then that, I agree with AbstractAngel for the anatomy commments. The ear might wanna be drawn further back and I suggest you color red over the ear to make it look like hair is there, and not that she shaved it ^^;
*Feels guilty about talking about kendo and disapears within the mist*
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