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Shy Risktaker
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 11:14 pm
You rawred at me
I look at you
You climb in bed
I held your hand
You smile at me
I kiss your hand
You fall asleep
The night has peaked
Dare we speak?

Glance around
Don't make a sound
Laugh away
These crazy days
Please don't frown
I don't want you down
Hold you tight
When your full of fright
Never out of sight
You're my light

In the spring picnic for two
Watching the sky so blue
Clouds pass bye
Let us never die

See you walking
Laughing and talking
Didn't think it real
Life can make things a wonderful meal
Sometimes things seem so wrong
But that doesn't last long
Just give me a hug
I'll give your hand a tug
It's cute when you pout
You put a plane in my coat
Made my day
Please don't go away

I'll always be here
Just take a peer
Here in my hood
Feeling pretty good
When your feeling dim
Just find me.
I hope I can make you grin.  
PostPosted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 11:59 pm
i understand what it means your begging and asking that special person to stay with you always to the end. and not abandoned you or leave  

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Shy Risktaker
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 10:13 am
Very well done my dear. I would like for you to post a poem of yours. If you wish, that is. I would love to see what sort of art you create.  
PostPosted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 5:36 pm
well here goes
your soft delicate as a flower petals that is bliss
your innocence surprised me with those angelic eyes of yours
longed that i yearn for those beckoned lips of your that is cherry red as shape of the rose

even though your not here with me why did you left me for another girl was it not meant to be for us
even this memories are fake of dreams of hopes
i guess we went our separate wide dream way for the better future

i miss you wish you were here my vampire prince that i long yearn for forever yours beloved princess phoenix

i tried hope it not crappy  

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 7:45 pm
-A smile would spread over the females lips as she'd then bring her hands together in a repeated motion, causing a clapping sound to echo from them- Very well done my dear ... I love your style. And, you have a very clear message in your work. Perhaps, if you really feel that horrible about your grand work, you and I can work together to improve your skills. Perhaps on your vocabulary. Other then that, your work is very well done. I'm impressed.  
PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 5:41 pm
thanks i tried it difficult for me do that because i have school going on and i tried to work on my time to do this but since i have many things going on it makes it hard  

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 24, 2010 8:00 pm
Understandable.  
PostPosted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 5:36 pm
thanks for understand and also i have a project to do for my classes thanks  

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 3:57 pm
my dog
he is funny very not very bright
lovable and very affectionate
very entertaining
run like a horse wild as a wind
sniff the air while looking up
very brave and silly at the same time
he even barks at the tv thought the people were crazy  
PostPosted: Tue Apr 20, 2010 10:22 am
violin
very soothing and elegant
can be sad when your stressed out
can calm down the mind of someone who feels left out
have the desire to heal the mind of others of comfort and care
can take away the pain what u have lost that something is important and etc  

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 11:57 am
love
is a happy feeling that makes u want to doing things you have never done before
you meet a person you like thought they were interesting
hoping that they could be the one for you
wishing that they would change you and make things easier for you to understand
hope things will make you happy  
PostPosted: Mon May 10, 2010 4:16 pm
happiness
is hard to puersit while things are challenging
never let fall and be happy and strong  

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PostPosted: Wed May 12, 2010 3:25 pm
never give up
giving up means that you are losing half what you want
the expectation of the sacrifice of the choice you have to make in life to live and love for a day of life  
PostPosted: Sun May 23, 2010 8:15 am
make a fine living a day
of laughter and joy
happiness
and sorrow
living freely
of joy and
burst of freedom  

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 1:36 pm
i like the effects how it is in very details  
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