rate my OU ev'd team

[ossiss]

jolly aerodactyl
focus sash
288 HP
303 attack
150 defense
126 sp. attack
170 sp. def
388 speed.
moves: stealth rock, taunt, earthquake, rockslide (speed and attack ev spread)
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careful dusknoir
no item currently
226 hp
220 attack
366 defense
135 sp att
404 sp def
95 speed
moves: pain split, shadow sneak, will-o-wisp, toxic (defense and sp defense ev spread)
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relaxed swampert
focus sash
388 hp
236 attack
289 defense
185 sp. attack
195 sp. defense
121 speed
moves: hammer arm, earthquake, ice beam, waterfall (defense and attack ev spread)
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timid jolteon
leftovers
325 attack
140 defense
240 sp att.
224 sp def.
379 speed
moves: thunderboly, substitute, baton pass, wish (speed, attack, and then a few into sp defense)
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rash typhlosion
choice scarf
281 hp
188 attack
176 defense
342 sp att
171 sp def
293 speed
moves: extrasensory, eruption, heat wave, focus blast (speed and sp att)
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impish donphan
378 hp
266 attack
366 defense
126 sp att
140 sp def
120 speed
moves: earthquake, ice shard, rapid spin, stealth rock (attack and defense)

just currently edited.  

[Bulbasauur]

It'd be easier if you could just tell us where you placed the EVs instead of giving us the stats, but I can see why both would be considered.

Why do you have two stealth rock users? Wouldn't one suffice?  

[[Philosophy In A Teacup]]

Bulbasauur

It'd be easier if you could just tell us where you placed the EVs instead of giving us the stats, but I can see why both would be considered.

Why do you have two stealth rock users? Wouldn't one suffice?

An two Stone Edges, and three Grounds. I'm not sure if he's trying to cover his bases (and failed) or make a Ground-themed team. And yes, give us the EV spreads, not the stats

Keep Aero if you want a suicide lead, and ditch Swampert and Flygon. Or put Swampert up as a bulky lead and ditch Aero and Flygon. Right now, a Kingdra could probably ruin your s**t.  

[Fox Demon Shippo]

I agree with ditching Swampert.

I tend to like Flygon better, so I disagree with Tippy (though her advice is probably good and competitive).
Flygon can be quite an annoyance, as long as it doesn't get hit with an ice beam.

 

[Bulbasauur]

I usually use Pokemon Marriland's team builder to see where I am lacking in type coverage...

It only gores by the pokemon though, and not their moves.  

[ossiss]

lol id tell you where i placed the ev's, but alas i cannot remember... im going to rework the moves, but i have to get around to finding the damned tms...  

[Bulbasauur]

EVs are really important to remember... I hate to be "that guy", but I would suggest starting over if you don't even remember where you placed the EVs. Maybe play on Shoddy for a little bit? And experiment?  

[[Philosophy In A Teacup]]

Bulbasauur

EVs are really important to remember... I hate to be "that guy", but I would suggest starting over if you don't even remember where you placed the EVs. Maybe play on Shoddy for a little bit? And experiment?

I have to agree with this. You don't have to remember the exact spread at a moment's notice, but you should know the gist of it. Or write it down, if you think you can't even do that (I have a little pocket-sized notebook that I have all of my com.bat business written down in, from EV spreads to movesets to a list of which Pokémon give three EVs in which stats). Remembering where your EVs are helps a LOT, because well, how are you going to know what that Pokémon's niche is if you can't remember what you trained it for?

No offense, or anything.


@Shippo: Haha, not saying Flygon sucks or anything. I just couldn't remember off the top of my head a good niche for it.  

[ossiss]

[Philosophy In A Teacup]

Bulbasauur

EVs are really important to remember... I hate to be "that guy", but I would suggest starting over if you don't even remember where you placed the EVs. Maybe play on Shoddy for a little bit? And experiment?

I have to agree with this. You don't have to remember the exact spread at a moment's notice, but you should know the gist of it. Or write it down, if you think you can't even do that (I have a little pocket-sized notebook that I have all of my com.bat business written down in, from EV spreads to movesets to a list of which Pokémon give three EVs in which stats). Remembering where your EVs are helps a LOT, because well, how are you going to know what that Pokémon's niche is if you can't remember what you trained it for?

No offense, or anything.


@Shippo: Haha, not saying Flygon sucks or anything. I just couldn't remember off the top of my head a good niche for it.

lol i remember what niche they are for, and how to play them...  

[Bulbasauur]

its not really that simple but if it works for you it works
have you tested it on shoddy?  

[[Philosophy In A Teacup]]

ossiss

lol i remember what niche they are for, and how to play them...

Then you should be able to recall the general gist of the EV spreads. neutral  

[Fox Demon Shippo]

Look, if you don't remember what you EV trained in what, then don't say they're EV trained.

 

[Bulbasauur]

[Philosophy In A Teacup]

ossiss

lol i remember what niche they are for, and how to play them...

Then you should be able to recall the general gist of the EV spreads. neutral

Pretty much this. neutral
Do you plan to use this team for a tournament? Among friends? Online battles?  

[ossiss]

im looking for a tourney or something... but i just want to get my team good enough to take out a guys team... vaporeon, mamoswine, dragonite, sceptile, heatran, and an ever changing lead... usually its smeargle, but he switches it whenever he battles me... jirachi, or swampert...

EDIT: just updated the original post. tell me what you think...  

[Bulbasauurr]

I think three stealth rock users is overkill. Have you tested this team at all?

For Typhlosion, Fire Blast > Heatwave.

Like I said earlier, use this to see the holes in your team:

http://pokemon.marriland.com/diamond_pearl/team_builder/