My Writing Club Pieces.

[Cassandrahaven]

You click. You read. You give opinions. I get mad or happy. And say thank you.(:

So, most of my works become poems appearently so I'm gonna post my writing club things in here. Hope none of you mind if they don't make sense. I am a teenage girl after all.

What do I drag behind me?

My mistakes.
Happy Times.
Lost hopes.
Wants for something new.
Wants for something better.
Bad dreams.
Memories.
Fears that in the dark emptiness consume me.
Good times.
Bad times.
Past relationships.
Past lies.
Old jokes.
Thoughts.
Anger at my current state of life.
Anger at friends.
Confusion on choices I know must be made.
Hope at the idea of something changing when I know that it will not.
The idea of innocence.
Peace and love from all.

So, poetry or no? Like or no? Total fail? My English teach said it sounded like a poem when said out loud so I posted it here.  

[linkster3769]

reminds me of a story of this thing called pandora's box. It contained many things, both good and bad  

[daddylatrell]

I like "Lost Hopes".
Great use of figurative language!
And it's also relatable, so that's a plus.
I give you a medal for saying things we're afraid to say! mrgreen
(Hands epic medal)

 

[Cassandrahaven]

simperson

I like "Lost Hopes".
Great use of figurative language!
And it's also relatable, so that's a plus.
I give you a medal for saying things we're afraid to say! mrgreen
(Hands epic medal)

Ohmygosh! I got an epic medal! YESH! : D
Anyways, that's a lot of what I do. I write things no one will ever hear me say. I have a whole blog of things here.
Lots aren't poems, but I really do like them. Please tell me what you think of them if you read them.  

[daddylatrell]

Cassandrahaven

simperson

I like "Lost Hopes".
Great use of figurative language!
And it's also relatable, so that's a plus.
I give you a medal for saying things we're afraid to say! mrgreen
(Hands epic medal)

Ohmygosh! I got an epic medal! YESH! : D
Anyways, that's a lot of what I do. I write things no one will ever hear me say. I have a whole blog of things here.
Lots aren't poems, but I really do like them. Please tell me what you think of them if you read them.

I like "Just So You Know"!
Hahaha, I feel the exact same way sometimes.

 

[Cassandrahaven]

Thank you very much. Most of those are actually sayings that I developed when I was heart broken over my first serious boyfriend. He's actually the most seirous guy I've dated so far which is terribly sad. Anyway, I'm still heartbroken over him at times and we broke up in September.

And now I am posting another poem. It was not done during my writing club considering that that's on Tuesdays but it was done today in math. Opinions?



Love is a fairy tale.

Does he even care?
My soul tells me no,
Byt my heart hopes so.
Goodbye forever-
That's all you say
&Then you talk anyway.
I'd kiss you if I could.
Somehow you just don't see...
I know we're meant to be.
You only see that girl.
No longer is she my best friend.
Both of you wanted that to end.
All I can do is wonder.
Why no me?
Why must it be she?


Not written about the same guy previsouly mentioned.
That one never kissed me.
&This new guy is a horrible kisser.
Just in case that shows how much I really like him even a teeny bit more.  

[daddylatrell]

Nice!
The title is a great similie!
I also liked how you added a twist; the guy you fell for ended up liking your best friend. xp YIKES.
But it added very good flavor, haha.
Good job!

 

[Cassandrahaven]

simperson

Nice!
The title is a great similie!
I also liked how you added a twist; the guy you fell for ended up liking your best friend. xp YIKES.
But it added very good flavor, haha.
Good job!

Um, my dear?
Yes that's not a twist. That is my current situation.
But thanks anyway.(:
emo  

[daddylatrell]

sweatdrop Oh...
I'm sorry. eek
Well at least your using your feelings and life into your work.
That's why they're spectactular!

 

[Cassandrahaven]

Thanks.! Anways, Today is writing club day!
I wrote three pieces there and an extremely long one during my English class because I could care less about Billy Shakes. And for those of you (everyone) who don't know, that's our nickname for Shakespeare(x

Best friends aren't real.
They claim to be but they turn.
Slowly all that you enjoy they'll steal.
Never blieve what they say.
It's all a lie.
They'll admit it one day.
For now you just smile.
You two plan the future.
Perhaps a trip to the Nile?

^^This was timed so I only had two minutes to write >.<

Falling through the sky I am.
All I see, all I feel is nothing.
Emptiness surrounds me.
Never have I felt this way.
You're words pound into me.
So harsh &full of hate.
Why is it you say this?
Never have you before today.
A new you is what I see.
Deep down I know you're the same.
I cannot guess what will happen.
Nor can I decide what to say
Just pain &emptiness fills me.
The end is near, that much is clear.
Fear is not something I contemplate.
Better times is all I seek.

^^Another timed one. This time in four minutes. And wasn't suppose to become a poem but seems to have anyway.

I don't want to write about pets.
I want to cry. I want to die.
My heart is broken in many pieces.
He refuses to listen or care.
No one understands what I'm thinking.
They judge &critizie again &again.
I can't take all of the lies.
The pain is far too much to deal with.
It hurts me to think about this but that's all I seem to do.
Always one of you is near me.
If you're not then you're on my mind.
The pain is never ending. It simply kills me.
Honestly I didn't see this coming.
If only it would end.

^^Five minutes but I sent a few texts so I don't know the actual time. Not supposed to be a poem and I'm not sure if it is. What do you think?

She says she knows but she doesn't get it.
So you're here for me?
Then why are you dating him?
Oh you b***h.
You don't see at all.
I love him &yet you claim to.
Best friend? You only wish.
I've loved him for monthes &here you are.
Without you in the way we're fine.
Always you destroy my life.
Will you please just tell me why you lie?
This isn't a joke to me.
Because of you he doesn't see.
The two of you don't love each other.
He never even loved me.
This is all a game to you but not me.
Never have you hurt me so.
This pain has yet to leave.
I wonder if it will forever stay.
Just wait, in time he'll want me.
We had something special.
Turely he felt for me.
I don't hate you, geeze.
Wanna kill you? Now that's a maybe.
My heart is shattered &fallen to pieces.
Never have you seen me so pititfully in pain.
My life is in ruins &tatters.
I want to cry &scream &die.
Just tell me why.
You refuse to talk or explain.
I miss your smile.
It's now only seen near her.
What happened to Harvard?
Love &happy ever after?
All just lies?
But you deny lying &you deny loving.
Or did you really love me?
Because that means that you must still.
There is no way to forget that fast.
&Now you claim to love her?
Oh dear, what a long lie.
So you're trying to forget?
Why, oh why?
It just makes no sense.
I really just need to cry...
Shut up &stop your lies.
I see through them.
Everyone but her does.
You go &say them hating you is my fault?
Kee dreaming, lover boy.
One thousand percent yours
Just stop making all of this up.
Don't you see we're not naive?
We know what all is going on so stop.
It's not funny &it's not enjoyable.
I wish I could say I was done but I'm not.  

[daddylatrell]

Hehe, your poems are always so easy to relate to! :]
I like the last one.
You should turn it into a short story!

 

[Appelsina]

I love your poems.
Mine are usually 5 lines max, but I'm not a poem person, that may be why. sweatdrop
I agree with Simperson, you should make the last one into a short story. o:  

[Cassandrahaven]

Thank you guys oh so much. You have no idea how happy it makes me to hear that(:

And story? Well, considering I'm living it I suppose I could...Name changes...Maybe a little change to all that has happened...Hm. I like it. Think I should do it myself or would one of you guys want to collab with me? I'm supposed to do one with Zero soon but he's a little slow...(x Butttt, I LOVE YOU ZERO! [Like a brother]

Hahas, anyways, if you really thinkk so I will make it a story. But short isn't really something I do. Everything I do is long and complicated. But I think maybe I shall make it a story. Thanks once again for all of your opinions and support guys. I'm gonna try and find some of my old work to put up here.  

[daddylatrell]

No problem! Can't wait to read it...

 

[Cassandrahaven]

simperson

No problem! Can't wait to read it...

That dotdotdot worries me but whatever. Part of it is posted. It's titled 'Middle School is Hell (A Work in Progress)'

Please give your opinion on it. It's totally not done. Yes, it's incredibly long but so not long enough. That's just basically background information. The drama hasn't even started yet.(: