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Kumcubus

Lonely Bloodsucker

 
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 1:11 pm


I shed my tears
as moonlight appear.
Sadness of the night
cut my heart deeply into the light.
Wishing you where here kissing me goodnight.
As our love continue on into the stars above.
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..so what do you think of my poem? is it good? what should i change?
PostPosted: Thu May 06, 2010 3:21 pm


I think your poem is very beautiful! I like the whole theme of night and lonliness and one light of hope (stars and moon).  

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