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Full Name:
Kris

Actual Age:
39

Appearance Age:
21


Date of Birth:
10/3

Ethnicity/Origin:
Africa American
Gender:
male

Height:
6ft

Weight:
159


Division:
N/a

Seat/ Rank:
(Must apply for Seat or Rank)



Apperance with non shinigami form
Kris wears baggy blue jeans and a white shirt when not in uniform


Zanpakuto Info.:
Avion is a powerful flame sword.It controls fire and steam and is very rare so few have ever seen it.Kris was choosen by Avion cause of his burning determination to finish any job givin to him.


Zanpakuto Name and Spirit type:
Avion. Fire/steam

Zanpakuto Sealed Appearance:
Claymor
Zanpakuto Released Appearance:
Red katana with spikes running along the bottem
Release Command:
Avion blaze
Skills
1.Is uneffected by fire
2.can control fire and steam


Baknai:
(must be a captain or Vice Captain

Bankai Appearance:


Bankai Ability/ Attacks:


Abilities:


Extra Skills:
Can disapear in a puff of steam


Personality:
kind,Determinded,and smart

Hobbies/ and likes:
reading and training

Personal Skills and Abilites:
Can burn people by touch

Favorite Drink/Food:
pizza and lemon lime soda

Hates:
small kids


Bio History:


Biography
Kris was on a plane to japan when he died.
The plane when down over have way to japan.A bird was stuck in the engine so the plane slowly droped to the ocean but then the engine blow up.Kris fell out the side window and hit his head on the water and died as soon as he touched the water.he woke up dead as a spirt and was attacked by a water hollow but saved by a soal reaper.
Relatives:
none that he knows of

*raises hand* I don't know if I've been approved to pass judgment on profiles, but I can be a detail-Nazi, so . . . .

You say that he's 829 years old. Okay, in the background of the guild, it says that Aizen has been beaten four about 30-ish years. So, if we say that he was defeated ~2010 (dunno when the date is in the manga/anime, but that seems close/generous enough), then the date would be ~2040 in the real world. Now, the airplane's first successful flight was in 1903, only 137 years ago (in this cannon), but even that plane could only fly about 120 feet, getting 10 feet in the air. It was decades before a commercial airline could fly from the US to Japan.

There is no way your character could be 829 years old. Even if he died on the first transpacific commercial flight from the US to Japan, or something like that, he would probably still be less than 100 years old, or just about. The first transatlantic commercial flight was in 1939, only carried 21 passengers, and at that time, America wasn't exactly the best of friends with Japan. There wouldn't be any commercial flights heading in that direction (across the Pacific).

Sorry, but the numbers don't even come close to adding up. Your character would have had to have been over 700 years old when he died, which is impossible. People can barely live to 100 with current medicine. So, you either need to change the actual age or the cause of death.