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PostPosted: Sat Oct 09, 2010 9:50 pm
Do you remember?
Remember that time?
When we were young
and you were that,
blond haired
green eyed prince.
And I was your
black hair
grey eyed princess?
We would be together forever.
But you grew up.
Too much,
too fast.
I wasn't your princess
not anymore.
We would be together forever.
But I grew up too.
Not enough,
not for you.
But you are my prince,
forever more.


I think this is my shortest poem, like ever haha  
PostPosted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 11:39 am
wow love it. very much. it tells about the feeling he felt about her then when they grew up their feelings have change he fell in love with someone else.  

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 11, 2010 5:12 pm
very deep and romantic hope you write down more and yeah can't wait for more mrgreen can't wait good luck  
PostPosted: Tue Oct 12, 2010 5:15 pm
very well written out and great job i love it and yeah hope you write out more i can't wait for more of it mrgreen okay hopefully things are well  

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 13, 2010 5:44 pm
can't wait until more to be read and very deep love it. what make you decide to write this?  
PostPosted: Thu Oct 14, 2010 4:58 pm
it is very descriptive and love it very much can't wait until more from you yet and yeah i can't wait until more from you yet and etc  

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 15, 2010 8:48 pm
very good and yeah can't for more of your story very good hoping more of it  
PostPosted: Sat Oct 16, 2010 6:05 am
very well written out and yeah good and etc i can't wait until more and yeah mrgreen  

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 12:30 am
very good and written out very detail and love the look of it and it very well portray with the feelings you had and yeah  
PostPosted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 12:15 pm
wow very good and like the story how it portray the sadness of the character's feeling it very well written that make you feel like your there  

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 18, 2010 5:23 pm
it very well written out and very good detail hope more comes from you and yeah mrgreen can't wait for more and yeah ninja  
PostPosted: Tue Oct 19, 2010 5:27 pm
it is very well written and very good hope to see more and yeah mrgreen i can't wait until more happens in your story and yeah mrgreen good job on it  

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 20, 2010 4:30 pm
very well written can't wait for more and yeah hopefully by then and yeah mrgreen  
PostPosted: Thu Oct 21, 2010 12:40 pm
wow very good and eyah mrgreen i cant wait until more story comes out and yeah that is why and yeah that is why  

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 22, 2010 11:44 am
very well written out and very good detail story and etc and yeah it good and yeha i cant wait for more yet so yeah ninja hoping more comes out  
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