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 Posted: Sun Apr 24, 2011 3:25 am
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Posted: Sun Apr 24, 2011 3:26 am
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Posted: Sun Apr 24, 2011 3:28 am
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Posted: Sun Apr 24, 2011 3:29 am
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Posted: Sun Apr 24, 2011 3:36 am
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Posted: Sun Apr 24, 2011 8:54 am
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Posted: Sun Apr 24, 2011 10:29 am
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I lived in possibly the most secluded area in the land. The rolling hills and craggy mountains surrounding our home were unspoilt by human hands. It was beautiful to say the least, and my family led a happy life there.
Living peacefully holds it's problems however, and a grave problem arose when my family fell ill. Normally we could use our herbs, but this illness was far too serious to be remedied by mere plants. As the only healthy male in the household, it was my job to seek outside help.
The closest doctor to us worked in the city 50 miles North of here. We didn't have a horse so I had to go there by foot.
At first the journey treated me well. Although it was winter, the weather was fair. A light breeze gently whipped round the hills, the trees and plant life animating it's course. The air smelled fresh and the grass crunched satisfyingly under foot.
I did not fatigue until night, at which point I set up my tent, had a quick snack, and lay waiting for my dreams to lift me away. I couldn't sleep though. The previously gentle breeze was starting to pick up pace and the cold night air whistled through my tent loudly.
What seemed like many hours later, the sun began to poke it's head above the horizon and I emerged from my tent, which had taken a beating from the now baffling wind over night. I watched the sunrise for a few minutes and turned back to my tent. It had gone. After a startled search I found my tent rolling Northwards, jumped on it, and extracted my belongings. I battled with the tent and finally folded it up.
Continuing my steady walk to the city, I noticed the wind was pushing me forwards. As I entered a mountain range and climbed higher, the wind was so strong I had to run with it or it violently shoved me to the ground.
Of course, when climbing mountains this was a problem. Eventually I had to run into a cliff, and after a few hours of safe running and a few falls, I blindly ran off a cliff. Screaming as I fell, I quickly grabbed for my camping equipment hoping if I landed on it it would soften my fall. The tent came loose as I held it tightly and I felt it yank my arm up. The rate of decent slowed as I landed in a grassy valley with a thud. An electrifying sock ran through my legs as I collapsed onto the ground crying in pain.
My legs would not carry me to the city any more. However, the tent's effect on my jump off the cliff gave me an idea. Using sticks and rope I crafted the tent into a sort of hand glider. As long as the wind kept blowing Northwards it could possibly carry me for quite a distance.
With the modified tent, I limped up out of the valley to the top of a high cliff, got the tent in position, and skipped painfully towards the edge of the cliff. I closed my eyes and jumped.
The suspense was terrifying. I kept my eyes closed for a while, and felt no pain or impact. Had I died? I opened my eyes to see the ground speed by below me. The incredible tempest flinging my tent across the sky was unbelievably powerful, and most importantly, taking me Northwards.
I was overjoyed. I forgot all my fears and worries as I swooped gracefully through the cold winter air.
After an hour or so, the sky went a light shade of pink and the sun sank peacefully below the horizon. The city was fast approaching, and the wind started to die down. The tent slowly lost momentum and drifted down outside the city gates.
Whichever God was watching over me that day, I could not thank them enough. This miracle of nature saved my family and provided me with the greatest adventure of my life.
(Had to do a lot and cut a lot to keep the word count down for this. There is no way I can write a decent story without going over 500 words. Do I still need to cut more or can I get away with this?)
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Posted: Sun Apr 24, 2011 1:35 pm
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Eloquent Conversationalist
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Posted: Sun Apr 24, 2011 1:51 pm
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Posted: Sun Apr 24, 2011 3:06 pm
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ecopper12 Um...YES! A writing contest? I'M SO IN! Just one question: Tempest refers to the weather, right? So, it's a story about a storm?
Nice idea for someone wanting to do a stupid comedy story: the hugest fart ever... I take back the 'nice' part. |
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Posted: Sun Apr 24, 2011 3:41 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2011 5:07 am
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My entry, subject to change before the deadline hits if I spot mistakes or want to do it over razz
Pale sands crafted under feet, morning sun pushes me off in some vague direction in a tiny craft made up from a desire to find that which is not here.
Sun beats a gentle rhythm upon my skin, water plays around my fingers as days roll on and the sounds become a rising tempo orchestrated by darkening clouds.
It comes from some place unknown; no manner of human device could ever hope to sense its approach. The music is rising, vibrating my flesh with its touch.
The spray of the sea, tempest surrounds me.
It roars like some beast, tearing my heart asunder and rending my vessel aloft into dark blue skies of watery reflection.
I am lost in utter blank reminiscence of shallow mornings, a distant glimmer of the sun far beyond my reach amidst the whirling crash.
Everything is lost, Oh that we did not see it coming, that we never lift our heads from star studded seas to see without the distortion of the waves.
Dragon of the sky, the sea and land tear my heart from my body and snap my bones beneath me.
Rises, rise said tempest yaw, hammer my hands beneath your crushing reality.
Swirl! Damn your eyes you cursed twisted morning night. Compass lost.
Pale sands crafted under broken hands, quiet night pushes me off in some vague direction, borne up the rolling waves as I sink. I leave my vessel to those who come hereafter, to sail the directionless sea and suffer the tempest.
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2011 2:26 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2011 3:13 pm
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