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The scanner made my pics way light D: Is there anything that needs to be imroved on these biggrin

i really think your good...but thats my opinon considering that i'm not the best drawer here. I really have nothing to say thats wrong with your drawings.

you need to put more emotion into your carecters eyes they look like doll or something. a common anime idea is that the eyes are the window to the soul and that they show how a person is. and light reflects from a persons eye that makes a certain shine. the desing is very good you have a very good idea with the body just keap drawing and stuff. look at some manga books look at how the carecter is design, try to figure its most apeling features and take it from there. that aside very nice work.

overall tips: draw the nose and mouth lower, their lips always look pursed together. u can make the lips somewhat longer for a more natural smile. neck is a bit long
keep practicing. they're pretty nice

Thank you both for the advice whee