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NUR Guild Mule

PostPosted: Thu Jul 03, 2014 10:02 pm
            Rules
                  1. To have a puppet you must learn the puppetry jutsu
                  2. The description must be at least 1 paragraph. The appearance must be described, unless you have a picture.
                  3. No chakra draining.
                  4. You must build your puppet in RP.
                      D rank puppets take 2 posts to build.
                      C rank puppets take 5 posts to build.
                      B rank puppets take 7 posts to build.
                      A rank puppets take 10 posts to build
                      S rank puppets take 15 posts to build

                      SS rank puppets take 40 posts to build. They can only be made from Kage level human puppets, or human puppets added onto S rank puppets. You can only control one SS rank puppet at a time, or 2 if you are a Shirogane. If your body is SS puppet then you cannot use its functions with another puppet active.






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                  [b]Description:[/b]

                  [b]Weak Joint:[/b]
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 06, 2014 9:34 pm
Username: Capt Kool-Aid
RPC: Kaito Arata
Rank: Jounin

Puppet Name: Phantom
Puppet Rank: A Rank
Description: Phantom is a sneaky puppet standing around six feet tall. It's arms are extraordinarily long giving it further melee reach. The rest of it's body is hidden underneath a cloak, hiding its weaponry underneath. The puppets fingers are made from Kunai that have been dipped in poison.

-Yoyo Sawblade: The Yo-yo Sawblade
is a launching and recoiling weapon. It has poison blades
The gives the ability of a saw when it launches. The ball
And the handle where made of a rare spider silk that makes
It invulnerable to tear.

-Cursed Eyes: The power of this eye is Genjutsu based, and costs one of Kaito's Genjutsu slots. The Phantom's middle eye lights up dark red, and a high powered screeching noise comes from within the puppet. If this noise is heard, it makes the opponents body feel like they've been poisoned and greatly hinders their movement. It should be noted this technique lasts for three posts, and cost's B ranked chakra.

-Extra arms: A second set of arms hidden inside the back cavity of the puppet. These arms quintuple jointed so they can reach behind the head to reach it's hidden daggers.

-Crescent Daggers: These blades are hidden behind the Phantoms head, around the should blade area. These are made only for the second pair of arms for a weapon. These are dipped in poison.

Open Chest Cavity: The entire chest cavity of the puppet is filled with aburame bugs. A small slot will open on the back of the puppet allowing the bugs to be release.

-Explosives: In the left and right foot of the puppet, his clans explosive clay is hidden within. At the right moment, Kaito can set these off for a large explosion. It should be noted that Kaito is the only one capable of making this detonate.

-Flame Retardent Cloak: The cloak surrounding the puppet is made from a flame retardant material, keeping the puppet safe from catching fire.

Weak Joint: Right shoulder joint. A solid strike here will disconnect the normal right arm, and the extra arm.
Picture (not mandatory):


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Username: Capt Kool-Aid
RPC: Kaito Arata
Rank: Jounin

Puppet Name: The Black Ogre
Puppet Rank: B
Description: A large round shaped puppet. This puppet stands eight feet tall, and it's body reaches four feet wide. The Ogre's legs only consist of two feet of it's eight foot frame, making it look awkwardly unproportional. It's body is thick and made of thick metal. This puppet is obviously extremely slow, and is best used for long range capabilities. The color of the puppet is jet black, which earned the puppet it's name.

-Senbon launchers: The Black Ogres palms have five openings, each capable of launching ridiculous amounts of senbon per second. These senbon are laced with poison and must be reloaded every three of the users posts.

-Chakra Shield: The puppet will move one hand forward, creating a large shield of chakra around itself protecting itself from incoming attacks.

-Flamethrower: The mouth of the puppet opens up, launching extremely hot flames. These flames can shoot as far as twenty yards.

-Cable Launcher: The puppets left and right shoulders can shoot a cable with a sharp blade at the end. These blades are poisonous, and upon contact have small blades that expand out, making it extremely hard to take out without ripping a giant hole in one's body.

Open Chest Cavity: The large he entire chest cavity of the puppet is filled with aburame bugs. A small slot will open on the back of the puppet allowing the bugs to be release. Also due to the massive size of the cavity, the bottom 33% of the torso is filled with explosive clay. When detonated, the explosion is large enough to kill mostly anything within it's blast radius. It should be noted, Kaito is the only person capable of detonating this clay.

Weak Joint: Right hip.
Picture (not mandatory):


Username: Capt Kool-Aid
RPC: Kaito Arata
Rank: Jounin

Puppet Name: Ouroboros, the Deceitful Serpent
Puppet Rank: C Rank
Description: A puppet made for indirect combat, usually catching it's victims with a stealthy strike. It reaches about five feet in length, and five inches thick.

-Eye Canister: Next to the pupil in each eye, a small opening releases a thick poisonous gas. This gas leaks quickly, rapidly filling the area in a matter of seconds. This gas is different than the other poisons, by making the victims vision extremely blurry and causing them to cough non stop. After two posts of exposure, the opponent is temporarily blinded for the two following posts after the victim escapes the smog.

Mouth/Tail: The mouth and tail are capable of shooting small needles. The mouth has three launchers, while the tail has one. These needles are poisonous. The tail has two blades that can spring out on the left and right side which are both also poisonous.

Fangs/jaw: The jaw can open very wide just like a normal snake, making it easier to bite it's targets. It's fangs are the most poison filled area on the puppets body, being the equivalent of ten poisonous senbon needles.

Neck Shield: At the neck there are two foldable shields, which are meant to protect the puppets neck. This resembles a cobra's hood.


Weak Joint: Directly behind the neck.
Picture (not mandatory):


Username: Capt Kool-Aid
RPC: Kaito Arata
Rank: Jounin

Puppet Name: Crow - Revamped
Puppet Rank: C
Description: The typical crow, revamped for Kaito's needs for his team of puppets. This puppet has four arms, and a large cloak covering it's body. The crow has been redesigned for speed, making it great for scouting with the puppet eyes technique.

-Senbon Lauchers: All four palms, the puppet has senbon launchers. Due to the puppet being so thin, a new addition has been added to it's back. This addition was created to reload the senbon launchers, and hold extra ammo. These senbon are poisonous.

-Poison Canister: The puppet opens it's mouth, a small opening releases a thick poisonous gas. This gas leaks quickly, rapidly filling the area in a matter of seconds. This gas is different than the other poisons, by making the victims vision extremely blurry and causing them to cough non stop. After two posts of exposure, the opponent is temporarily blinded for the two following posts after the victim escapes the smog.

-Explosive body: Though being the smallest of all the puppets, the crow has the largest amount of explosive clay. When this puppet explodes, it also shoot the remaining senbon needles out in every direction.


Weak Joint: Left Hip Joint
Picture (not mandatory):


Username: Capt Kool-Aid
RPC: Kaito Arata
Rank: Jounin

Puppet Name: Maverick, Master of Puppets
Puppet Rank: A Rank
Description: A massive puppet towering above the rest of it's squad, standing ten feet tall. It's body takes shape of a human. Maverick is a defensive puppet with a special ability. It's made of a rare metal strong enough to deflect any projectiles shot at it, and taking very little damage from attacks of it's rank.

-Cockpit: The user is able to crawl inside the puppet, and run the show while being protected. This cockpit is formed to match his body, using just enough room for him to fit.

-Chakra Strings: While Kaito is within, Maverick can create chakra strings to manipulate the other puppets. This was integrated in to keep Kaito protected while concentrating on the rest of his puppets.

-Chakra Shield: This shield is slightly different than the rest, as the shield generator sits in Mavericks chest. This way, when the shield is active Kaito can keep manipulating his team.

-Chakra Shield #2: A second generator sits next to the original, making a second shield for extra protection against large scale attacks.

-Thigh Cavity: Both thigh cavities of the puppets can open up and release a large wave of aburame bugs.

-Explosive Clay: Large amounts of the explosive clay are hidden with the puppets feet and abdomen. This clay can only be detonated by Kaito.

-Poison Canister: The puppet opens it's mouth, a small opening releases a thick poisonous gas. This gas leaks quickly, rapidly filling the area in a matter of seconds. This gas is different than the other poisons, by making the victims vision extremely blurry and causing them to cough non stop. After two posts of exposure, the opponent is temporarily blinded for the two following posts after the victim escapes the smog.

Weak Joint: Left Shoulder
Picture (not mandatory):


Username: Capt Kool-Aid
RPC: Kaito Arata
Rank: Jounin

Puppet Name: Parasite
Puppet Rank: B
Description: Parasite is a rather unique puppet, as most of the time it attaches itself to another puppet. This way, it can combine it's abilities with another puppets abilities to wreak havoc on it's foes. This puppet sits around five feet.

Head: Parasite's head has several sneaky abilities built in at once. This also makes him extremely versatile and able to adapt to the situation. The first being it's neck. This puppets neck and head is attached by chain link, enabling the head to launch itself toward its enemy. It's head has what looks like a pointy mohawk, which is composed of several needles each laced with poison. The mouth has the three holes, where it can shoot several poisonous senbon from. The puppets eyes can Illuminate with a great flash, equal to that of a flash bang to blind it's opponent temporarily. From it's nostrils, it can emit a poisonous smog. This gas leaks quickly, rapidly filling the area in a matter of seconds. This gas is different than the other poisons, by making the victims vision extremely blurry and causing them to cough non stop. After two posts of exposure, the opponent is temporarily blinded for the two following posts after the victim escapes the smog.

-Chain Link Sword: Upon the puppets back, sits a three foot blade with a three foot hilt. This sword can be swung normally, or can detach into several parts making it's reach around ten feet. This blade is laced with poison.


Weak Joint: Left Hip Joint
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Credit and much thanks for some of these awesome puppets to MaverickTears
 


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PostPosted: Mon Jul 07, 2014 7:09 pm
Capt Kool-Aid
Username: Capt Kool-Aid
RPC: Kaito Arata
Rank: Jounin

Puppet Name: Phantom
Puppet Rank: A Rank
Description: Phantom is a sneaky puppet standing around six feet tall. It's arms are extraordinarily long giving it further melee reach. The rest of it's body is hidden underneath a cloak, hiding its weaponry underneath. The puppets fingers are made from Kunai that have been dipped in poison.

-Yoyo Sawblade: The Yo-yo Sawblade
is a launching and recoiling weapon. It has poison blades
The gives the ability of a saw when it launches. The ball
And the handle where made of a rare spider silk that makes
It invulnerable to tear.

-Cursed Eyes: The power of this eye is Genjutsu based, and costs one of Kaito's Genjutsu slots. The Phantom's middle eye lights up dark red, and a high powered screeching noise comes from within the puppet. If this noise is heard, it makes the opponents body feel like they've been poisoned and greatly hinders their movement. It should be noted this technique lasts for three posts, and cost's B ranked chakra.

-Extra arms: A second set of arms hidden inside the back cavity of the puppet. These arms quintuple jointed so they can reach behind the head to reach it's hidden daggers.

-Crescent Daggers: These blades are hidden behind the Phantoms head, around the should blade area. These are made only for the second pair of arms for a weapon. These are dipped in poison.

Open Chest Cavity: The entire chest cavity of the puppet is filled with aburame bugs. A small slot will open on the back of the puppet allowing the bugs to be release.

-Explosives: In the left and right foot of the puppet, his clans explosive clay is hidden within. At the right moment, Kaito can set these off for a large explosion. It should be noted that Kaito is the only one capable of making this detonate.

-Flame Retardent Cloak: The cloak surrounding the puppet is made from a flame retardant material, keeping the puppet safe from catching fire.

Weak Joint: Right shoulder joint. A solid strike here will disconnect the normal right arm, and the extra arm.
Picture (not mandatory):


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Username: Capt Kool-Aid
RPC: Kaito Arata
Rank: Jounin

Puppet Name: The Black Ogre
Puppet Rank: B
Description: A large round shaped puppet. This puppet stands eight feet tall, and it's body reaches four feet wide. The Ogre's legs only consist of two feet of it's eight foot frame, making it look awkwardly unproportional. It's body is thick and made of thick metal. This puppet is obviously extremely slow, and is best used for long range capabilities. The color of the puppet is jet black, which earned the puppet it's name.

-Senbon launchers: The Black Ogres palms have five openings, each capable of launching ridiculous amounts of senbon per second. These senbon are laced with poison and must be reloaded every three of the users posts.

-Chakra Shield: The puppet will move one hand forward, creating a large shield of chakra around itself protecting itself from incoming attacks.

-Flamethrower: The mouth of the puppet opens up, launching extremely hot flames. These flames can shoot as far as twenty yards.

-Cable Launcher: The puppets left and right shoulders can shoot a cable with a sharp blade at the end. These blades are poisonous, and upon contact have small blades that expand out, making it extremely hard to take out without ripping a giant hole in one's body.

Open Chest Cavity: The large he entire chest cavity of the puppet is filled with aburame bugs. A small slot will open on the back of the puppet allowing the bugs to be release. Also due to the massive size of the cavity, the bottom 33% of the torso is filled with explosive clay. When detonated, the explosion is large enough to kill mostly anything within it's blast radius. It should be noted, Kaito is the only person capable of detonating this clay.

Weak Joint: Right hip.
Picture (not mandatory):


Username: Capt Kool-Aid
RPC: Kaito Arata
Rank: Jounin

Puppet Name: Ouroboros, the Deceitful Serpent
Puppet Rank: C Rank
Description: A puppet made for indirect combat, usually catching it's victims with a stealthy strike. It reaches about five feet in length, and five inches thick.

-Eye Canister: Next to the pupil in each eye, a small opening releases a thick poisonous gas. This gas leaks quickly, rapidly filling the area in a matter of seconds. This gas is different than the other poisons, by making the victims vision extremely blurry and causing them to cough non stop. After two posts of exposure, the opponent is temporarily blinded for the two following posts after the victim escapes the smog.

Mouth/Tail: The mouth and tail are capable of shooting small needles. The mouth has three launchers, while the tail has one. These needles are poisonous. The tail has two blades that can spring out on the left and right side which are both also poisonous.

Fangs/jaw: The jaw can open very wide just like a normal snake, making it easier to bite it's targets. It's fangs are the most poison filled area on the puppets body, being the equivalent of ten poisonous senbon needles.

Neck Shield: At the neck there are two foldable shields, which are meant to protect the puppets neck. This resembles a cobra's hood.


Weak Joint: Directly behind the neck.
Picture (not mandatory):


Username: Capt Kool-Aid
RPC: Kaito Arata
Rank: Jounin

Puppet Name: Crow - Revamped
Puppet Rank: C
Description: The typical crow, revamped for Kaito's needs for his team of puppets. This puppet has four arms, and a large cloak covering it's body. The crow has been redesigned for speed, making it great for scouting with the puppet eyes technique.

-Senbon Lauchers: All four palms, the puppet has senbon launchers. Due to the puppet being so thin, a new addition has been added to it's back. This addition was created to reload the senbon launchers, and hold extra ammo. These senbon are poisonous.

-Poison Canister: The puppet opens it's mouth, a small opening releases a thick poisonous gas. This gas leaks quickly, rapidly filling the area in a matter of seconds. This gas is different than the other poisons, by making the victims vision extremely blurry and causing them to cough non stop. After two posts of exposure, the opponent is temporarily blinded for the two following posts after the victim escapes the smog.

-Explosive body: Though being the smallest of all the puppets, the crow has the largest amount of explosive clay. When this puppet explodes, it also shoot the remaining senbon needles out in every direction.


Weak Joint: Left Hip Joint
Picture (not mandatory):


Username: Capt Kool-Aid
RPC: Kaito Arata
Rank: Jounin

Puppet Name: Maverick, Master of Puppets
Puppet Rank: A Rank
Description: A massive puppet towering above the rest of it's squad, standing ten feet tall. It's body takes shape of a human. Maverick is a defensive puppet with a special ability. It's made of a rare metal strong enough to deflect any projectiles shot at it, and taking very little damage from attacks of it's rank.

-Cockpit: The user is able to crawl inside the puppet, and run the show while being protected. This cockpit is formed to match his body, using just enough room for him to fit.

-Chakra Strings: While Kaito is within, Maverick can create chakra strings to manipulate the other puppets. This was integrated in to keep Kaito protected while concentrating on the rest of his puppets.

-Chakra Shield: This shield is slightly different than the rest, as the shield generator sits in Mavericks chest. This way, when the shield is active Kaito can keep manipulating his team.

-Chakra Shield #2: A second generator sits next to the original, making a second shield for extra protection against large scale attacks.

-Thigh Cavity: Both thigh cavities of the puppets can open up and release a large wave of aburame bugs.

-Explosive Clay: Large amounts of the explosive clay are hidden with the puppets feet and abdomen. This clay can only be detonated by Kaito.

-Poison Canister: The puppet opens it's mouth, a small opening releases a thick poisonous gas. This gas leaks quickly, rapidly filling the area in a matter of seconds. This gas is different than the other poisons, by making the victims vision extremely blurry and causing them to cough non stop. After two posts of exposure, the opponent is temporarily blinded for the two following posts after the victim escapes the smog.

Weak Joint: Left Shoulder
Picture (not mandatory):


Username: Capt Kool-Aid
RPC: Kaito Arata
Rank: Jounin

Puppet Name: Parasite
Puppet Rank: B
Description: Parasite is a rather unique puppet, as most of the time it attaches itself to another puppet. This way, it can combine it's abilities with another puppets abilities to wreak havoc on it's foes. This puppet sits around five feet.

Head: Parasite's head has several sneaky abilities built in at once. This also makes him extremely versatile and able to adapt to the situation. The first being it's neck. This puppets neck and head is attached by chain link, enabling the head to launch itself toward its enemy. It's head has what looks like a pointy mohawk, which is composed of several needles each laced with poison. The mouth has the three holes, where it can shoot several poisonous senbon from. The puppets eyes can Illuminate with a great flash, equal to that of a flash bang to blind it's opponent temporarily. From it's nostrils, it can emit a poisonous smog. This gas leaks quickly, rapidly filling the area in a matter of seconds. This gas is different than the other poisons, by making the victims vision extremely blurry and causing them to cough non stop. After two posts of exposure, the opponent is temporarily blinded for the two following posts after the victim escapes the smog.

-Chain Link Sword: Upon the puppets back, sits a three foot blade with a three foot hilt. This sword can be swung normally, or can detach into several parts making it's reach around ten feet. This blade is laced with poison.


Weak Joint: Left Hip Joint
Picture (not mandatory):


** Before I even touch these, proper credit for inspiration better be given to the DA Artist MaverickTears as the original artist of Phantom and the creator of various puppets listed here. I do not tolerate plagiarism. **  
PostPosted: Tue Jul 08, 2014 12:57 am
Username: Panthers7
RPC: Rose Allomora Liang
Rank: Chuunin

Puppet Name: Pierrot De Lou Fou
Puppet Rank: B
Description: Pierrot De Lou Fou is a unique puppet as it is fearsome. It is an seven foot, "obese" looking clown. It is operated of course by chakra strings, but what makes it unique is that the chakra strings also activate the "engine" within Pierrot De Lou Fou; a steam engine that, of course, has a large tank of poison instead of water. [ Poison will be described later on ] The puppet itself, is made of thick iron to hold it together, seeing as this is a power-tank puppet. It is not required to move fast. Only be a wrecking ball of power.

The steam engine is required to create the amount of force and power that the puppet needs to do most of it's techniques.

I.) Right Arm: The right arm of the puppet has a cane. The cane, can be utilized for striking, but it's true purpose is it is a barrel. On the inside of it's palm is a hole and on top of the cane is another. When ready to shoot, the puppet's palm would be placed on-top of the hole of the cane and it will push out a railroad sized spike doused in poison. On the interior of the arm are aligned with rollers, that would help accelerate the spike pushed by the pistons of poison steam that coats the metal until releasing. The speed of these spikes firing release up to 104 mph. The cane itself, has no rollers but has groves that will make the spire spin and twist. Making it probable for the spike to stab straight through an opponent as well as many defenses.

II.) Left Arm: Is hollowed out for only one reason. To release chakra from it once the hand cocks back and create a large shield. This shield can absorb damage C-Rank and below, but costs B-Rank chakra to initiate and repair the child.

III.) Rose's Poison: Rose, in all his elegance has a sadistic side. Twisted in the fact that he wants all his kills to have a smile upon their faces. His poison is an extreme mixture of hydrogen cyanide and Strychnodide (a strychnine derivative). As a side effect, the victim's muscles contract in such a way as to severely tighten and discolor the victim's skin, especially in the facial area. This leaves the victim's corpse permanently scarred with a clown-like grin in tribute to his killer. So that always, Rose would end the battle as being the "most beautiful". It is a seven staged poison ( or in 7 posts ) :

-Stage One [ Lasts Two Posts ]: The poison infiltrates the blood. There will be no intense changes other than the fact that the person has been poisoned. But there will be an additional [10] points of chakra deducted for every post hereafter.

-Stage Two [ Advances upon Third and lasts until Fourth post]: The person begins to feel a sense of euphroia. The poison upon reaching the brain will start to stimulate it, and the victim will start to find things funny or amusing

-Stage Three [ Advances upon fifth post and lasts until sixth post]: The emotion of euphoria increases and the victim starts to find more and more entertainment or humor. They will begin to outwardly burst into fits of uncontrollable laughter.

-Stage Four [Advances upon seventh post and lasts until eight post] : Laughter becomes harder to ignore or contain. They will find themselves unable to properly breathe.The oxygen in the body will be depleted faster than it will be gained. Leaving them light headed and dizzy.

Stage Five [ Advances upon ninth post and lasts until tenth post] : Laughter at this stage is close enough to buckle ones knees. They will become exceptionally dizzy. They will have, at this time a hearty laugh as their eyes would tear. Obscuring vision which in addition to the dizziness, may make it very difficult for one to even attack.

Stage 6 [Advances upon eleventh post and lasts until twelfth post]: This is essentially the final stage in terms that the poison will have fully make it's manifestation within the individual. Their muscles in the face would be semi-perma locked in a hideous looking grin or "Risus Sardonicus". Because of the constant laughter their bodies have forced out, their eyes will be discolored as would vision start to go to a full on blur. Yet even so, they will harder until each chuckle brings tremendous amounts of pain to their lungs. Where the tears will be that of pain rather than that of delight.

Stage 7 [Advances on thirteenth posts and ENDS on fourteenth]: The last stage... Death. The poison would have ran it's course and leave the victim in a ugly form of "happiness". The face and jaw would be locked in a grotesque reflection of laughter. The eyes will be completely discolored and buldge out of the skull. The lungs of the individual would be shot if not completely destroyed due to their hyperstimulation. Pure beauty.

IV) Eyes and "Brain": Rose seems to wish to make his performances reach perfection. But as a human, he knows that certainly no one can reach such a level if they don't know what is their imperfections. The eyes are recording devices that is stored in a computer chip. That can be removed and downloaded into a computer to retrieve the intel that the puppet as seen.

V) Mouth: The mouth as five tubes at the back of the throat. These tubes bring and extract the poison out from the tank that lies in the puppets stomach and occassionally releases pressure that is used to operate the puppet's powerful attacks. Doing nothing more, than spewing out the poison in a hick, hazy fog that can affect (at max while keeping it's potency) 10 yards of distance.

VI) Self-Destruct: In times of crisis,mostly when the puppet gets locked up or blocked, the steam would cause the puppet to reach an over load. Or even just when things in general get heavy, Rose has the ability to make it self destruct by purposely cutting off all exits for the liquid toxin to escape. Making the puppet have a [3] post count down before exploding. This explosion will be similar to a nail bomb with the poisoned railroad sized nails and the poison itself will be send everywhere within a 20 yard radius.

Weak Joint:
*Right/Left Palms/Mouth: If during attacks they are gunked up, the puppet will blow up. Although the mouth will cause a stronger explosion, as it's wear the build up of poisoned steam is occasionally released to keep the pressure in the puppet at a safe level.

* Antidote: To Rose's poison is an antidote. But of course, seeing as there has been none-like it before, only Rose knows the proper quantities of chemicals and poison needed to make the poison be halted. In general, the antidote only halts the stage that it is in. It does not cure the individual, but it does keep the poison from advancing to higher stages. Only a Special Jounin or higher ranked medical shinobi, can create a remedy to this poison. Any lower, you may speed up the process due to inexperience.

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2014 3:39 pm
Panthers7
Username: Panthers7
RPC: Rose Allomora Liang
Rank: Chuunin

Puppet Name: Pierrot De Lou Fou
Puppet Rank: B
Description: Pierrot De Lou Fou is a unique puppet as it is fearsome. It is an seven foot, "obese" looking clown. It is operated of course by chakra strings, but what makes it unique is that the chakra strings also activate the "engine" within Pierrot De Lou Fou; a steam engine that, of course, has a large tank of poison instead of water. [ Poison will be described later on ] The puppet itself, is made of thick iron to hold it together, seeing as this is a power-tank puppet. It is not required to move fast. Only be a wrecking ball of power.

The steam engine is required to create the amount of force and power that the puppet needs to do most of it's techniques.

I.) Right Arm: The right arm of the puppet has a cane. The cane, can be utilized for striking, but it's true purpose is it is a barrel. On the inside of it's palm is a hole and on top of the cane is another. When ready to shoot, the puppet's palm would be placed on-top of the hole of the cane and it will push out a railroad sized spike doused in poison. On the interior of the arm are aligned with rollers, that would help accelerate the spike pushed by the pistons of poison steam that coats the metal until releasing. The speed of these spikes firing release up to 104 mph. The cane itself, has no rollers but has groves that will make the spire spin and twist. Making it probable for the spike to stab straight through an opponent as well as many defenses.

II.) Left Arm: Is hollowed out for only one reason. To release chakra from it once the hand cocks back and create a large shield. This shield can absorb damage C-Rank and below, but costs B-Rank chakra to initiate and repair the child.

III.) Rose's Poison: Rose, in all his elegance has a sadistic side. Twisted in the fact that he wants all his kills to have a smile upon their faces. His poison is an extreme mixture of hydrogen cyanide and Strychnodide (a strychnine derivative). As a side effect, the victim's muscles contract in such a way as to severely tighten and discolor the victim's skin, especially in the facial area. This leaves the victim's corpse permanently scarred with a clown-like grin in tribute to his killer. So that always, Rose would end the battle as being the "most beautiful". It is a seven staged poison ( or in 7 posts ) :

-Stage One [ Lasts Two Posts ]: The poison infiltrates the blood. There will be no intense changes other than the fact that the person has been poisoned. But there will be an additional [10] points of chakra deducted for every post hereafter.

-Stage Two [ Advances upon Third and lasts until Fourth post]: The person begins to feel a sense of euphroia. The poison upon reaching the brain will start to stimulate it, and the victim will start to find things funny or amusing

-Stage Three [ Advances upon fifth post and lasts until sixth post]: The emotion of euphoria increases and the victim starts to find more and more entertainment or humor. They will begin to outwardly burst into fits of uncontrollable laughter.

-Stage Four [Advances upon seventh post and lasts until eight post] : Laughter becomes harder to ignore or contain. They will find themselves unable to properly breathe.The oxygen in the body will be depleted faster than it will be gained. Leaving them light headed and dizzy.

Stage Five [ Advances upon ninth post and lasts until tenth post] : Laughter at this stage is close enough to buckle ones knees. They will become exceptionally dizzy. They will have, at this time a hearty laugh as their eyes would tear. Obscuring vision which in addition to the dizziness, may make it very difficult for one to even attack.

Stage 6 [Advances upon eleventh post and lasts until twelfth post]: This is essentially the final stage in terms that the poison will have fully make it's manifestation within the individual. Their muscles in the face would be semi-perma locked in a hideous looking grin or "Risus Sardonicus". Because of the constant laughter their bodies have forced out, their eyes will be discolored as would vision start to go to a full on blur. Yet even so, they will harder until each chuckle brings tremendous amounts of pain to their lungs. Where the tears will be that of pain rather than that of delight.

Stage 7 [Advances on thirteenth posts and ENDS on fourteenth]: The last stage... Death. The poison would have ran it's course and leave the victim in a ugly form of "happiness". The face and jaw would be locked in a grotesque reflection of laughter. The eyes will be completely discolored and buldge out of the skull. The lungs of the individual would be shot if not completely destroyed due to their hyperstimulation. Pure beauty.

IV) Eyes and "Brain": Rose seems to wish to make his performances reach perfection. But as a human, he knows that certainly no one can reach such a level if they don't know what is their imperfections. The eyes are recording devices that is stored in a computer chip. That can be removed and downloaded into a computer to retrieve the intel that the puppet as seen.

V) Mouth: The mouth as five tubes at the back of the throat. These tubes bring and extract the poison out from the tank that lies in the puppets stomach and occassionally releases pressure that is used to operate the puppet's powerful attacks. Doing nothing more, than spewing out the poison in a hick, hazy fog that can affect (at max while keeping it's potency) 10 yards of distance.

VI) Self-Destruct: In times of crisis,mostly when the puppet gets locked up or blocked, the steam would cause the puppet to reach an over load. Or even just when things in general get heavy, Rose has the ability to make it self destruct by purposely cutting off all exits for the liquid toxin to escape. Making the puppet have a [3] post count down before exploding. This explosion will be similar to a nail bomb with the poisoned railroad sized nails and the poison itself will be send everywhere within a 20 yard radius.

Weak Joint:
*Right/Left Palms/Mouth: If during attacks they are gunked up, the puppet will blow up. Although the mouth will cause a stronger explosion, as it's wear the build up of poisoned steam is occasionally released to keep the pressure in the puppet at a safe level.

* Antidote: To Rose's poison is an antidote. But of course, seeing as there has been none-like it before, only Rose knows the proper quantities of chemicals and poison needed to make the poison be halted. In general, the antidote only halts the stage that it is in. It does not cure the individual, but it does keep the poison from advancing to higher stages. Only a Special Jounin or higher ranked medical shinobi, can create a remedy to this poison. Any lower, you may speed up the process due to inexperience.

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2014 10:25 pm
Reiko Zena
Capt Kool-Aid
Username: Capt Kool-Aid
RPC: Kaito Arata
Rank: Jounin

Puppet Name: Phantom
Puppet Rank: A Rank
Description: Phantom is a sneaky puppet standing around six feet tall. It's arms are extraordinarily long giving it further melee reach. The rest of it's body is hidden underneath a cloak, hiding its weaponry underneath. The puppets fingers are made from Kunai that have been dipped in poison.

-Yoyo Sawblade: The Yo-yo Sawblade
is a launching and recoiling weapon. It has poison blades
The gives the ability of a saw when it launches. The ball
And the handle where made of a rare spider silk that makes
It invulnerable to tear.

-Cursed Eyes: The power of this eye is Genjutsu based, and costs one of Kaito's Genjutsu slots. The Phantom's middle eye lights up dark red, and a high powered screeching noise comes from within the puppet. If this noise is heard, it makes the opponents body feel like they've been poisoned and greatly hinders their movement. It should be noted this technique lasts for three posts, and cost's B ranked chakra.

-Extra arms: A second set of arms hidden inside the back cavity of the puppet. These arms quintuple jointed so they can reach behind the head to reach it's hidden daggers.

-Crescent Daggers: These blades are hidden behind the Phantoms head, around the should blade area. These are made only for the second pair of arms for a weapon. These are dipped in poison.

Open Chest Cavity: The entire chest cavity of the puppet is filled with aburame bugs. A small slot will open on the back of the puppet allowing the bugs to be release.

-Explosives: In the left and right foot of the puppet, his clans explosive clay is hidden within. At the right moment, Kaito can set these off for a large explosion. It should be noted that Kaito is the only one capable of making this detonate.

-Flame Retardent Cloak: The cloak surrounding the puppet is made from a flame retardant material, keeping the puppet safe from catching fire.

Weak Joint: Right shoulder joint. A solid strike here will disconnect the normal right arm, and the extra arm.
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Username: Capt Kool-Aid
RPC: Kaito Arata
Rank: Jounin

Puppet Name: The Black Ogre
Puppet Rank: B
Description: A large round shaped puppet. This puppet stands eight feet tall, and it's body reaches four feet wide. The Ogre's legs only consist of two feet of it's eight foot frame, making it look awkwardly unproportional. It's body is thick and made of thick metal. This puppet is obviously extremely slow, and is best used for long range capabilities. The color of the puppet is jet black, which earned the puppet it's name.

-Senbon launchers: The Black Ogres palms have five openings, each capable of launching ridiculous amounts of senbon per second. These senbon are laced with poison and must be reloaded every three of the users posts.

-Chakra Shield: The puppet will move one hand forward, creating a large shield of chakra around itself protecting itself from incoming attacks.

-Flamethrower: The mouth of the puppet opens up, launching extremely hot flames. These flames can shoot as far as twenty yards.

-Cable Launcher: The puppets left and right shoulders can shoot a cable with a sharp blade at the end. These blades are poisonous, and upon contact have small blades that expand out, making it extremely hard to take out without ripping a giant hole in one's body.

Open Chest Cavity: The large he entire chest cavity of the puppet is filled with aburame bugs. A small slot will open on the back of the puppet allowing the bugs to be release. Also due to the massive size of the cavity, the bottom 33% of the torso is filled with explosive clay. When detonated, the explosion is large enough to kill mostly anything within it's blast radius. It should be noted, Kaito is the only person capable of detonating this clay.

Weak Joint: Right hip.
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Username: Capt Kool-Aid
RPC: Kaito Arata
Rank: Jounin

Puppet Name: Ouroboros, the Deceitful Serpent
Puppet Rank: C Rank
Description: A puppet made for indirect combat, usually catching it's victims with a stealthy strike. It reaches about five feet in length, and five inches thick.

-Eye Canister: Next to the pupil in each eye, a small opening releases a thick poisonous gas. This gas leaks quickly, rapidly filling the area in a matter of seconds. This gas is different than the other poisons, by making the victims vision extremely blurry and causing them to cough non stop. After two posts of exposure, the opponent is temporarily blinded for the two following posts after the victim escapes the smog.

Mouth/Tail: The mouth and tail are capable of shooting small needles. The mouth has three launchers, while the tail has one. These needles are poisonous. The tail has two blades that can spring out on the left and right side which are both also poisonous.

Fangs/jaw: The jaw can open very wide just like a normal snake, making it easier to bite it's targets. It's fangs are the most poison filled area on the puppets body, being the equivalent of ten poisonous senbon needles.

Neck Shield: At the neck there are two foldable shields, which are meant to protect the puppets neck. This resembles a cobra's hood.


Weak Joint: Directly behind the neck.
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Username: Capt Kool-Aid
RPC: Kaito Arata
Rank: Jounin

Puppet Name: Crow - Revamped
Puppet Rank: C
Description: The typical crow, revamped for Kaito's needs for his team of puppets. This puppet has four arms, and a large cloak covering it's body. The crow has been redesigned for speed, making it great for scouting with the puppet eyes technique.

-Senbon Lauchers: All four palms, the puppet has senbon launchers. Due to the puppet being so thin, a new addition has been added to it's back. This addition was created to reload the senbon launchers, and hold extra ammo. These senbon are poisonous.

-Poison Canister: The puppet opens it's mouth, a small opening releases a thick poisonous gas. This gas leaks quickly, rapidly filling the area in a matter of seconds. This gas is different than the other poisons, by making the victims vision extremely blurry and causing them to cough non stop. After two posts of exposure, the opponent is temporarily blinded for the two following posts after the victim escapes the smog.

-Explosive body: Though being the smallest of all the puppets, the crow has the largest amount of explosive clay. When this puppet explodes, it also shoot the remaining senbon needles out in every direction.


Weak Joint: Left Hip Joint
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Username: Capt Kool-Aid
RPC: Kaito Arata
Rank: Jounin

Puppet Name: Maverick, Master of Puppets
Puppet Rank: A Rank
Description: A massive puppet towering above the rest of it's squad, standing ten feet tall. It's body takes shape of a human. Maverick is a defensive puppet with a special ability. It's made of a rare metal strong enough to deflect any projectiles shot at it, and taking very little damage from attacks of it's rank.

-Cockpit: The user is able to crawl inside the puppet, and run the show while being protected. This cockpit is formed to match his body, using just enough room for him to fit.

-Chakra Strings: While Kaito is within, Maverick can create chakra strings to manipulate the other puppets. This was integrated in to keep Kaito protected while concentrating on the rest of his puppets.

-Chakra Shield: This shield is slightly different than the rest, as the shield generator sits in Mavericks chest. This way, when the shield is active Kaito can keep manipulating his team.

-Chakra Shield #2: A second generator sits next to the original, making a second shield for extra protection against large scale attacks.

-Thigh Cavity: Both thigh cavities of the puppets can open up and release a large wave of aburame bugs.

-Explosive Clay: Large amounts of the explosive clay are hidden with the puppets feet and abdomen. This clay can only be detonated by Kaito.

-Poison Canister: The puppet opens it's mouth, a small opening releases a thick poisonous gas. This gas leaks quickly, rapidly filling the area in a matter of seconds. This gas is different than the other poisons, by making the victims vision extremely blurry and causing them to cough non stop. After two posts of exposure, the opponent is temporarily blinded for the two following posts after the victim escapes the smog.

Weak Joint: Left Shoulder
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Username: Capt Kool-Aid
RPC: Kaito Arata
Rank: Jounin

Puppet Name: Parasite
Puppet Rank: B
Description: Parasite is a rather unique puppet, as most of the time it attaches itself to another puppet. This way, it can combine it's abilities with another puppets abilities to wreak havoc on it's foes. This puppet sits around five feet.

Head: Parasite's head has several sneaky abilities built in at once. This also makes him extremely versatile and able to adapt to the situation. The first being it's neck. This puppets neck and head is attached by chain link, enabling the head to launch itself toward its enemy. It's head has what looks like a pointy mohawk, which is composed of several needles each laced with poison. The mouth has the three holes, where it can shoot several poisonous senbon from. The puppets eyes can Illuminate with a great flash, equal to that of a flash bang to blind it's opponent temporarily. From it's nostrils, it can emit a poisonous smog. This gas leaks quickly, rapidly filling the area in a matter of seconds. This gas is different than the other poisons, by making the victims vision extremely blurry and causing them to cough non stop. After two posts of exposure, the opponent is temporarily blinded for the two following posts after the victim escapes the smog.

-Chain Link Sword: Upon the puppets back, sits a three foot blade with a three foot hilt. This sword can be swung normally, or can detach into several parts making it's reach around ten feet. This blade is laced with poison.


Weak Joint: Left Hip Joint
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** Before I even touch these, proper credit for inspiration better be given to the DA Artist MaverickTears as the original artist of Phantom and the creator of various puppets listed here. I do not tolerate plagiarism. **


Oh sorry, haven't been on in a few days. I actually already have permission from the artist! I honestly meant to add his info from the start, I was just in a hurry and forgot.  


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PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2014 10:28 pm
Capt Kool-Aid
Reiko Zena
Capt Kool-Aid
Username: Capt Kool-Aid
RPC: Kaito Arata
Rank: Jounin

Puppet Name: Phantom
Puppet Rank: A Rank
Description: Phantom is a sneaky puppet standing around six feet tall. It's arms are extraordinarily long giving it further melee reach. The rest of it's body is hidden underneath a cloak, hiding its weaponry underneath. The puppets fingers are made from Kunai that have been dipped in poison.

-Yoyo Sawblade: The Yo-yo Sawblade
is a launching and recoiling weapon. It has poison blades
The gives the ability of a saw when it launches. The ball
And the handle where made of a rare spider silk that makes
It invulnerable to tear.

-Cursed Eyes: The power of this eye is Genjutsu based, and costs one of Kaito's Genjutsu slots. The Phantom's middle eye lights up dark red, and a high powered screeching noise comes from within the puppet. If this noise is heard, it makes the opponents body feel like they've been poisoned and greatly hinders their movement. It should be noted this technique lasts for three posts, and cost's B ranked chakra.

-Extra arms: A second set of arms hidden inside the back cavity of the puppet. These arms quintuple jointed so they can reach behind the head to reach it's hidden daggers.

-Crescent Daggers: These blades are hidden behind the Phantoms head, around the should blade area. These are made only for the second pair of arms for a weapon. These are dipped in poison.

Open Chest Cavity: The entire chest cavity of the puppet is filled with aburame bugs. A small slot will open on the back of the puppet allowing the bugs to be release.

-Explosives: In the left and right foot of the puppet, his clans explosive clay is hidden within. At the right moment, Kaito can set these off for a large explosion. It should be noted that Kaito is the only one capable of making this detonate.

-Flame Retardent Cloak: The cloak surrounding the puppet is made from a flame retardant material, keeping the puppet safe from catching fire.

Weak Joint: Right shoulder joint. A solid strike here will disconnect the normal right arm, and the extra arm.
Picture (not mandatory):


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Username: Capt Kool-Aid
RPC: Kaito Arata
Rank: Jounin

Puppet Name: The Black Ogre
Puppet Rank: B
Description: A large round shaped puppet. This puppet stands eight feet tall, and it's body reaches four feet wide. The Ogre's legs only consist of two feet of it's eight foot frame, making it look awkwardly unproportional. It's body is thick and made of thick metal. This puppet is obviously extremely slow, and is best used for long range capabilities. The color of the puppet is jet black, which earned the puppet it's name.

-Senbon launchers: The Black Ogres palms have five openings, each capable of launching ridiculous amounts of senbon per second. These senbon are laced with poison and must be reloaded every three of the users posts.

-Chakra Shield: The puppet will move one hand forward, creating a large shield of chakra around itself protecting itself from incoming attacks.

-Flamethrower: The mouth of the puppet opens up, launching extremely hot flames. These flames can shoot as far as twenty yards.

-Cable Launcher: The puppets left and right shoulders can shoot a cable with a sharp blade at the end. These blades are poisonous, and upon contact have small blades that expand out, making it extremely hard to take out without ripping a giant hole in one's body.

Open Chest Cavity: The large he entire chest cavity of the puppet is filled with aburame bugs. A small slot will open on the back of the puppet allowing the bugs to be release. Also due to the massive size of the cavity, the bottom 33% of the torso is filled with explosive clay. When detonated, the explosion is large enough to kill mostly anything within it's blast radius. It should be noted, Kaito is the only person capable of detonating this clay.

Weak Joint: Right hip.
Picture (not mandatory):


Username: Capt Kool-Aid
RPC: Kaito Arata
Rank: Jounin

Puppet Name: Ouroboros, the Deceitful Serpent
Puppet Rank: C Rank
Description: A puppet made for indirect combat, usually catching it's victims with a stealthy strike. It reaches about five feet in length, and five inches thick.

-Eye Canister: Next to the pupil in each eye, a small opening releases a thick poisonous gas. This gas leaks quickly, rapidly filling the area in a matter of seconds. This gas is different than the other poisons, by making the victims vision extremely blurry and causing them to cough non stop. After two posts of exposure, the opponent is temporarily blinded for the two following posts after the victim escapes the smog.

Mouth/Tail: The mouth and tail are capable of shooting small needles. The mouth has three launchers, while the tail has one. These needles are poisonous. The tail has two blades that can spring out on the left and right side which are both also poisonous.

Fangs/jaw: The jaw can open very wide just like a normal snake, making it easier to bite it's targets. It's fangs are the most poison filled area on the puppets body, being the equivalent of ten poisonous senbon needles.

Neck Shield: At the neck there are two foldable shields, which are meant to protect the puppets neck. This resembles a cobra's hood.


Weak Joint: Directly behind the neck.
Picture (not mandatory):


Username: Capt Kool-Aid
RPC: Kaito Arata
Rank: Jounin

Puppet Name: Crow - Revamped
Puppet Rank: C
Description: The typical crow, revamped for Kaito's needs for his team of puppets. This puppet has four arms, and a large cloak covering it's body. The crow has been redesigned for speed, making it great for scouting with the puppet eyes technique.

-Senbon Lauchers: All four palms, the puppet has senbon launchers. Due to the puppet being so thin, a new addition has been added to it's back. This addition was created to reload the senbon launchers, and hold extra ammo. These senbon are poisonous.

-Poison Canister: The puppet opens it's mouth, a small opening releases a thick poisonous gas. This gas leaks quickly, rapidly filling the area in a matter of seconds. This gas is different than the other poisons, by making the victims vision extremely blurry and causing them to cough non stop. After two posts of exposure, the opponent is temporarily blinded for the two following posts after the victim escapes the smog.

-Explosive body: Though being the smallest of all the puppets, the crow has the largest amount of explosive clay. When this puppet explodes, it also shoot the remaining senbon needles out in every direction.


Weak Joint: Left Hip Joint
Picture (not mandatory):


Username: Capt Kool-Aid
RPC: Kaito Arata
Rank: Jounin

Puppet Name: Maverick, Master of Puppets
Puppet Rank: A Rank
Description: A massive puppet towering above the rest of it's squad, standing ten feet tall. It's body takes shape of a human. Maverick is a defensive puppet with a special ability. It's made of a rare metal strong enough to deflect any projectiles shot at it, and taking very little damage from attacks of it's rank.

-Cockpit: The user is able to crawl inside the puppet, and run the show while being protected. This cockpit is formed to match his body, using just enough room for him to fit.

-Chakra Strings: While Kaito is within, Maverick can create chakra strings to manipulate the other puppets. This was integrated in to keep Kaito protected while concentrating on the rest of his puppets.

-Chakra Shield: This shield is slightly different than the rest, as the shield generator sits in Mavericks chest. This way, when the shield is active Kaito can keep manipulating his team.

-Chakra Shield #2: A second generator sits next to the original, making a second shield for extra protection against large scale attacks.

-Thigh Cavity: Both thigh cavities of the puppets can open up and release a large wave of aburame bugs.

-Explosive Clay: Large amounts of the explosive clay are hidden with the puppets feet and abdomen. This clay can only be detonated by Kaito.

-Poison Canister: The puppet opens it's mouth, a small opening releases a thick poisonous gas. This gas leaks quickly, rapidly filling the area in a matter of seconds. This gas is different than the other poisons, by making the victims vision extremely blurry and causing them to cough non stop. After two posts of exposure, the opponent is temporarily blinded for the two following posts after the victim escapes the smog.

Weak Joint: Left Shoulder
Picture (not mandatory):


Username: Capt Kool-Aid
RPC: Kaito Arata
Rank: Jounin

Puppet Name: Parasite
Puppet Rank: B
Description: Parasite is a rather unique puppet, as most of the time it attaches itself to another puppet. This way, it can combine it's abilities with another puppets abilities to wreak havoc on it's foes. This puppet sits around five feet.

Head: Parasite's head has several sneaky abilities built in at once. This also makes him extremely versatile and able to adapt to the situation. The first being it's neck. This puppets neck and head is attached by chain link, enabling the head to launch itself toward its enemy. It's head has what looks like a pointy mohawk, which is composed of several needles each laced with poison. The mouth has the three holes, where it can shoot several poisonous senbon from. The puppets eyes can Illuminate with a great flash, equal to that of a flash bang to blind it's opponent temporarily. From it's nostrils, it can emit a poisonous smog. This gas leaks quickly, rapidly filling the area in a matter of seconds. This gas is different than the other poisons, by making the victims vision extremely blurry and causing them to cough non stop. After two posts of exposure, the opponent is temporarily blinded for the two following posts after the victim escapes the smog.

-Chain Link Sword: Upon the puppets back, sits a three foot blade with a three foot hilt. This sword can be swung normally, or can detach into several parts making it's reach around ten feet. This blade is laced with poison.


Weak Joint: Left Hip Joint
Picture (not mandatory):


** Before I even touch these, proper credit for inspiration better be given to the DA Artist MaverickTears as the original artist of Phantom and the creator of various puppets listed here. I do not tolerate plagiarism. **


Oh sorry, haven't been on in a few days. I actually already have permission from the artist! I honestly meant to add his info from the start, I was just in a hurry and forgot.


Imma trust you on this then.

Give me some time, I need... sake... even though its in the morning.  
PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2014 10:35 pm
Reiko Zena
Capt Kool-Aid
Reiko Zena
Capt Kool-Aid
Username: Capt Kool-Aid
RPC: Kaito Arata
Rank: Jounin

Puppet Name: Phantom
Puppet Rank: A Rank
Description: Phantom is a sneaky puppet standing around six feet tall. It's arms are extraordinarily long giving it further melee reach. The rest of it's body is hidden underneath a cloak, hiding its weaponry underneath. The puppets fingers are made from Kunai that have been dipped in poison.

-Yoyo Sawblade: The Yo-yo Sawblade
is a launching and recoiling weapon. It has poison blades
The gives the ability of a saw when it launches. The ball
And the handle where made of a rare spider silk that makes
It invulnerable to tear.

-Cursed Eyes: The power of this eye is Genjutsu based, and costs one of Kaito's Genjutsu slots. The Phantom's middle eye lights up dark red, and a high powered screeching noise comes from within the puppet. If this noise is heard, it makes the opponents body feel like they've been poisoned and greatly hinders their movement. It should be noted this technique lasts for three posts, and cost's B ranked chakra.

-Extra arms: A second set of arms hidden inside the back cavity of the puppet. These arms quintuple jointed so they can reach behind the head to reach it's hidden daggers.

-Crescent Daggers: These blades are hidden behind the Phantoms head, around the should blade area. These are made only for the second pair of arms for a weapon. These are dipped in poison.

Open Chest Cavity: The entire chest cavity of the puppet is filled with aburame bugs. A small slot will open on the back of the puppet allowing the bugs to be release.

-Explosives: In the left and right foot of the puppet, his clans explosive clay is hidden within. At the right moment, Kaito can set these off for a large explosion. It should be noted that Kaito is the only one capable of making this detonate.

-Flame Retardent Cloak: The cloak surrounding the puppet is made from a flame retardant material, keeping the puppet safe from catching fire.

Weak Joint: Right shoulder joint. A solid strike here will disconnect the normal right arm, and the extra arm.
Picture (not mandatory):


User Image

Username: Capt Kool-Aid
RPC: Kaito Arata
Rank: Jounin

Puppet Name: The Black Ogre
Puppet Rank: B
Description: A large round shaped puppet. This puppet stands eight feet tall, and it's body reaches four feet wide. The Ogre's legs only consist of two feet of it's eight foot frame, making it look awkwardly unproportional. It's body is thick and made of thick metal. This puppet is obviously extremely slow, and is best used for long range capabilities. The color of the puppet is jet black, which earned the puppet it's name.

-Senbon launchers: The Black Ogres palms have five openings, each capable of launching ridiculous amounts of senbon per second. These senbon are laced with poison and must be reloaded every three of the users posts.

-Chakra Shield: The puppet will move one hand forward, creating a large shield of chakra around itself protecting itself from incoming attacks.

-Flamethrower: The mouth of the puppet opens up, launching extremely hot flames. These flames can shoot as far as twenty yards.

-Cable Launcher: The puppets left and right shoulders can shoot a cable with a sharp blade at the end. These blades are poisonous, and upon contact have small blades that expand out, making it extremely hard to take out without ripping a giant hole in one's body.

Open Chest Cavity: The large he entire chest cavity of the puppet is filled with aburame bugs. A small slot will open on the back of the puppet allowing the bugs to be release. Also due to the massive size of the cavity, the bottom 33% of the torso is filled with explosive clay. When detonated, the explosion is large enough to kill mostly anything within it's blast radius. It should be noted, Kaito is the only person capable of detonating this clay.

Weak Joint: Right hip.
Picture (not mandatory):


Username: Capt Kool-Aid
RPC: Kaito Arata
Rank: Jounin

Puppet Name: Ouroboros, the Deceitful Serpent
Puppet Rank: C Rank
Description: A puppet made for indirect combat, usually catching it's victims with a stealthy strike. It reaches about five feet in length, and five inches thick.

-Eye Canister: Next to the pupil in each eye, a small opening releases a thick poisonous gas. This gas leaks quickly, rapidly filling the area in a matter of seconds. This gas is different than the other poisons, by making the victims vision extremely blurry and causing them to cough non stop. After two posts of exposure, the opponent is temporarily blinded for the two following posts after the victim escapes the smog.

Mouth/Tail: The mouth and tail are capable of shooting small needles. The mouth has three launchers, while the tail has one. These needles are poisonous. The tail has two blades that can spring out on the left and right side which are both also poisonous.

Fangs/jaw: The jaw can open very wide just like a normal snake, making it easier to bite it's targets. It's fangs are the most poison filled area on the puppets body, being the equivalent of ten poisonous senbon needles.

Neck Shield: At the neck there are two foldable shields, which are meant to protect the puppets neck. This resembles a cobra's hood.


Weak Joint: Directly behind the neck.
Picture (not mandatory):


Username: Capt Kool-Aid
RPC: Kaito Arata
Rank: Jounin

Puppet Name: Crow - Revamped
Puppet Rank: C
Description: The typical crow, revamped for Kaito's needs for his team of puppets. This puppet has four arms, and a large cloak covering it's body. The crow has been redesigned for speed, making it great for scouting with the puppet eyes technique.

-Senbon Lauchers: All four palms, the puppet has senbon launchers. Due to the puppet being so thin, a new addition has been added to it's back. This addition was created to reload the senbon launchers, and hold extra ammo. These senbon are poisonous.

-Poison Canister: The puppet opens it's mouth, a small opening releases a thick poisonous gas. This gas leaks quickly, rapidly filling the area in a matter of seconds. This gas is different than the other poisons, by making the victims vision extremely blurry and causing them to cough non stop. After two posts of exposure, the opponent is temporarily blinded for the two following posts after the victim escapes the smog.

-Explosive body: Though being the smallest of all the puppets, the crow has the largest amount of explosive clay. When this puppet explodes, it also shoot the remaining senbon needles out in every direction.


Weak Joint: Left Hip Joint
Picture (not mandatory):


Username: Capt Kool-Aid
RPC: Kaito Arata
Rank: Jounin

Puppet Name: Maverick, Master of Puppets
Puppet Rank: A Rank
Description: A massive puppet towering above the rest of it's squad, standing ten feet tall. It's body takes shape of a human. Maverick is a defensive puppet with a special ability. It's made of a rare metal strong enough to deflect any projectiles shot at it, and taking very little damage from attacks of it's rank.

-Cockpit: The user is able to crawl inside the puppet, and run the show while being protected. This cockpit is formed to match his body, using just enough room for him to fit.

-Chakra Strings: While Kaito is within, Maverick can create chakra strings to manipulate the other puppets. This was integrated in to keep Kaito protected while concentrating on the rest of his puppets.

-Chakra Shield: This shield is slightly different than the rest, as the shield generator sits in Mavericks chest. This way, when the shield is active Kaito can keep manipulating his team.

-Chakra Shield #2: A second generator sits next to the original, making a second shield for extra protection against large scale attacks.

-Thigh Cavity: Both thigh cavities of the puppets can open up and release a large wave of aburame bugs.

-Explosive Clay: Large amounts of the explosive clay are hidden with the puppets feet and abdomen. This clay can only be detonated by Kaito.

-Poison Canister: The puppet opens it's mouth, a small opening releases a thick poisonous gas. This gas leaks quickly, rapidly filling the area in a matter of seconds. This gas is different than the other poisons, by making the victims vision extremely blurry and causing them to cough non stop. After two posts of exposure, the opponent is temporarily blinded for the two following posts after the victim escapes the smog.

Weak Joint: Left Shoulder
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Username: Capt Kool-Aid
RPC: Kaito Arata
Rank: Jounin

Puppet Name: Parasite
Puppet Rank: B
Description: Parasite is a rather unique puppet, as most of the time it attaches itself to another puppet. This way, it can combine it's abilities with another puppets abilities to wreak havoc on it's foes. This puppet sits around five feet.

Head: Parasite's head has several sneaky abilities built in at once. This also makes him extremely versatile and able to adapt to the situation. The first being it's neck. This puppets neck and head is attached by chain link, enabling the head to launch itself toward its enemy. It's head has what looks like a pointy mohawk, which is composed of several needles each laced with poison. The mouth has the three holes, where it can shoot several poisonous senbon from. The puppets eyes can Illuminate with a great flash, equal to that of a flash bang to blind it's opponent temporarily. From it's nostrils, it can emit a poisonous smog. This gas leaks quickly, rapidly filling the area in a matter of seconds. This gas is different than the other poisons, by making the victims vision extremely blurry and causing them to cough non stop. After two posts of exposure, the opponent is temporarily blinded for the two following posts after the victim escapes the smog.

-Chain Link Sword: Upon the puppets back, sits a three foot blade with a three foot hilt. This sword can be swung normally, or can detach into several parts making it's reach around ten feet. This blade is laced with poison.


Weak Joint: Left Hip Joint
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** Before I even touch these, proper credit for inspiration better be given to the DA Artist MaverickTears as the original artist of Phantom and the creator of various puppets listed here. I do not tolerate plagiarism. **


Oh sorry, haven't been on in a few days. I actually already have permission from the artist! I honestly meant to add his info from the start, I was just in a hurry and forgot.


Imma trust you on this then.

Give me some time, I need... sake... even though its in the morning.


If ya have deviant art you could even massage him and he'll tell ya. He's a pretty awesome dude. And I haven't had sake in a while... Good choice. xD  


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PostPosted: Sun Jul 13, 2014 8:00 pm
Reiko Zena


Don't mean to be that guy, but anyways you could start picking at my puppets soon? I wanna get to RPing soonish. sweatdrop  
PostPosted: Mon Jul 14, 2014 10:06 pm
Username: Panthers7
RPC: Rose Allamora Liang
Rank: Chuunin

Puppet Name: Soldant De l'incube
Puppet Rank: B
Description: Soldant De I'incube is an interesting puppet as it takes a different method to puppetry. It is known throughout the land that puppet users usually lack the physical ability to perform taijutsu at a manner that can cause any damage; specially Rose who could probably do more damage smacking a person than punching them.... after of course cursing to the pain coursing through his hand. But he realized... is not Taijutsu simply movement? Can the brain, not duplicate that movement and perform it through puppetry? Certain moves and styles like Konoha's Eight Gates could hardly be be replicated... but techniques that do not require complexity of chakra and flesh, can be replicated. For it is nothing but knowledge! This is where "Soldant De L'incube" comes from. A puppet whose sole purpose is to take Taijutsu Rose has "learned" and bring it to life through his puppet.

Abilities: The obvious one is that it is geared towards performing Taijutsu. The puppet isn't innately heavy. After all, Rose wishes to operate the puppet as powerfully as possible. The puppet is created with a fusion of many hard plastics (such as polyethylene-based materials) and metal-matrix materials. Making the puppet light, very fire resilient (Up to C-rank in resiliency before taking damage. Although continuous fire damage and still take effect), but hard enough to cause quite some damage upon contact.

Head: Within the protective shell of the head is explosive tags activated by Rose's chakra. By disconnecting the puppet or should it be destroyed, he can send the head filled with tags at his opponent and explode them with a seal. Activated with C-Rank chakra

Right Eye Socket: Like most of Rose's puppets, there is a camera to record. This eye has just that function. Zooming up to for 4x magnification, they eye records visual and stores information into a microchip. That can be plugged into a blank memory disk that can then be plugged into a computer.

Left Arm & RIght Arms: A mechanism triggers to bring out the lethality of Rose's poison. Upon the wrists, they will bend back and pull towards the forearms where a foot inch pipe with just a tiny hole at the tip will be released. It will have just a droplet of poison continuing to drip from it's holes. At the elbows, an extension from the upper arm will be made, creating a similar pipe that would drip occasionally. Both take [1] post to activate. Keeping it constantly coated in poison, specifically when the poison has the blades sheathed within a tube of it that lays within the inner forearm compartment. Complete 360 degree rotation.

The poison, while active, will last only [15] of active use. Meaning because the storage is limited to a smaller limb, it has a limit to it's quantity. Droplets of poison keep the weapon coated in the poison, but after the poison is completely gone, it will only keep the poison active for [2] more posts before drying up.

Chest Cavity: Rose has, rolled up in the chest of the puppet, twenty yards of heavy iron chain connected to a sickle. Like most of his puppets, it carries Rose's unique poison doused upon it. While the heaviness of the chain can be used to capture and the sickle to stab, slash, and mutilate. Although, it must be focused with at least one arm not in "use". For the longer the chain is in use, the more limited the attacks can get.

Arm socket and Hip Joint: Complete 360 degree rotation with springs that upon winding, can unwind back at a more significant force. Increasing the attack power of the puppet.

Weakness: The main weakness of the puppet is it's strength. Should the puppet spin making an attack that is ranked ( i.e perform a taijutsu technique) and an opposing attack of greater physical force is made against it, it will overload the skeleton of the puppet and break the limb.


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Panthers7


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Beloved Friend

PostPosted: Tue Jul 15, 2014 10:43 pm
Username: chaosduo
RPC:Masutā papetton
Rank:genin
Puppet Name:Rantō kuma
Puppet Rank:B
Description:The bear itself has actually been crafted out of senju mokutin making it a bit more durable than your standard wood puppet. It stands about six and a half feet when on its hind legs. The paws of the bear are made of titanium alloy and the front paws have one small hollowed out hole in the center of each of them. When activated the holes themselves will secrete acid which is usually used to corrode blades and other weapons if they can be caught within the bears paws. Users would have to be in the same speed bracket as the puppeteer.This acid can only be used three times before the canisters need to be refilled . The containers would have to be taken out of the bears paw to be refilled.

The arms are hydraulically charged and upon activation they can deliver punches in rapid succession four in about the span of two seconds. Can only use the hydraulics once every three posts or they will burn themselves out. The arms also dawn titanium bracers which run down the forearms to the elbow of Rantō kuma.

The claws on the front paws can each extend up to five feet . They are sharpened razors which can tear into the opponents skin. The claws themselves have a small hole on the tip of each claw which secrete a small amount of poison. Once secreted the poison will only remain on the claws for three posts before evaporating. (Poison cartridges must be replaced after three uses.) The spools will have to be taken out and the cable will have to be rethreaded on the poison cartridges.

Post # 1: The infected will feel as though all is normal.
Post #2: They will begin to feel sick to their stomach.
Post# 3-5: The toxins will make their stomach feel like it is beginning to be squeezed in a knot. The pain will slowely get worse over the next 2 posts.The body will feel as though it has been caught on fire.
Post #6:The pain on the body will become excruciating making the opponents eyes began to blur and making it hard for them to concentrate .
Post #7: The opponents vision will become blurred and the body will become sluggish making movement difficult and the opponents breathing will begin to slow.
Post #8: The opponent will pass out from the pain and fatigue which the poison has placed upon the body.

The poison itself is not deadly but will require a shinobi to visit a hospital or find a medical nin to draw the poison out of the body.

Rantō kuma also dawns a titanium alloy helmet which covers his face and back of his neck. As well as a chest plate which opens into a compartment in which the user can climb into.Believing an animal should appear in their natural state Masutā is well known for taking an animal hide and placing it around his creation leaving openings for their weapons. Therefore Rantō looks exactly like a black bear. Some people say it is a sadistic side of Masutā but he believes it is paying homage to the animal itself. He has even put a recording the bears growl in its mouth.

Weak Joint:The elbows. Lightning will virtually take this puppet out as it has a lot of moving components.
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The components

The claws are separately run to a mechanical pulley system. The cables each approximately an inch thick are run along the bears leg and up each of its sides to their own personal gear box near its hind legs. When the bear stands the cords will tense like a slingshot as they are wound upon their own spools. The mechanism which is near the claws themselves is actually nothing more than a pin attached to a spring. The will cause the pin to eject as the claws are shot out approximately five feet for each claw. Reaching their full extension the gear box will reel the claws back in and the will spring back shut locking them in place. The wires themselves are bore out in the center to allow for a pressurized poison to be released. The spool in which the wire is attached is a small cylindrical contain which is specially coated to hold the poison.

The opening of the paw when the bear is erect have a tiny metal lip which barely sticks out from the paw itself. This is attached to the special plastic container which houses the hydrofluoric acid. The housing of the container which is about the size of a mason jar is pressured by a special lid which is a few inches below the paws surface. When the paws touch a surface lip will compress causing the containers lid to open releasing the acid and creating a suction between the bears paw and whatever object it may be holding. When released the lid will shut and the acid will refrain from being released.

The arms are each controlled by two pistons attached to a shaft which runs the length of the shoulder blades and down to the elbows in a upside down v shape. In the middle of the shaft is an electric motor which can be switched on from the bears back itself. The motor will cause the pistons to fire rapidly in a short burst causing the arms to have a substantial amount of speed and force.

I think I fixed everything and I had planned on being part of the senju and having the ability to make my puppets out of mokutin.

Reiko Zena
 
PostPosted: Wed Jul 16, 2014 10:42 am
Username:xxx_mist_of_shadows_xxx
RPC:Alexandra James
Rank:genin

Puppet Name:Sail
Puppet Rank:C
Description:
The puppet Sail is made of finally sanded logs and branches, the body is constructed of logs and branches that connect each thing to another. The puppet has a heart shape carved into the log chest and stands 4'5 and weighs 60 pounds. The waist down of the puppet is fairly regular while the fingers on both hands seperate to reveal blades, their are 2 blades per finger while each finger can open up and release fire. Both elbows can fold back to reveal swords.The mouth of the puppet can open to shoot needles. The puppet other then that is fairly simple and meant to be for a genin.
Weak Joint:shoulders, if the arms are detatched the puppet has no more weapons to use.
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Description above ^  

xxx_Mist_of_shadows_xxx

Intellectual Sage



-x- Rei -x-


O.G. Vampire

PostPosted: Thu Jul 17, 2014 2:55 pm
Panthers7
Username: Panthers7
RPC: Rose Allamora Liang
Rank: Chuunin

Puppet Name: Soldant De l'incube
Puppet Rank: B
Description: Soldant De I'incube is an interesting puppet as it takes a different method to puppetry. It is known throughout the land that puppet users usually lack the physical ability to perform taijutsu at a manner that can cause any damage; specially Rose who could probably do more damage smacking a person than punching them.... after of course cursing to the pain coursing through his hand. But he realized... is not Taijutsu simply movement? Can the brain, not duplicate that movement and perform it through puppetry? Certain moves and styles like Konoha's Eight Gates could hardly be be replicated... but techniques that do not require complexity of chakra and flesh, can be replicated. For it is nothing but knowledge! This is where "Soldant De L'incube" comes from. A puppet whose sole purpose is to take Taijutsu Rose has "learned" and bring it to life through his puppet.

Abilities: The obvious one is that it is geared towards performing Taijutsu.The puppet isn't innately heavy. After all, Rose wishes to operate the puppet as powerfully as possible. The puppet is created with a fusion of many hard plastics and metal-matrix materials. Making the puppet light, very fire resilient, but hard enough to cause quite some damage upon contact.

Head: Within the protective shell of the head is explosive tags activated by Rose's chakra. By disconnecting the puppet or should it be destroyed, he can send the head filled with tags at his opponent and explode them with a seal.

Left Eye Socket: Plated with metal, this socket does not have an eye. It is instead, a pure tube of fire resilient metal. That, obviously is required to spout fire. The launching of fire does not go very far at all. At most, a foot, but that does not meant that it won't cause severe burns up close

Right Eye Socket: Like most of Rose's puppets, there is a camera to record. This eye has just that function. Zooming up to for 4x magnification, they eye records visual and stores information into a microchip. That can be plugged into a blank memory disk that can then be plugged into a computer.

Left Arm & Right Arms: A mechanism triggers to bring out the lethality of Rose's poison. Upon the wrists, they will bend back and pull towards the forearms where a foot inch pip with just a tiny hole at the tip will be released. It will have just a droplet of poison continuing to drip from it's holes. At the elbows, an extension from the upper arm will be made, creating a similar pipe that would drip occasionally. Keeping it constantly coated in poison, specifically when the poison has the blades sheathed within a tube of it that lays within the inner forearm compartment. Complete 360 degree rotation

Chest Cavity: Rose has, rolled up in the chest of the puppet, twenty yards of heavy iron chain connected to a sickle. Like most of his puppets, it carries Rose's unique poison doused upon it. While the heaviness of the chain can be used to capture and the sickle to stab, slash, and mutilate.

Arm socket and Hip Joint: Complete 360 degree rotation with springs that upon winding, can unwind back at a more significant force. Increasing the attack power of the puppet.

Speed: 5

Strength: 6

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Judgement is at hand.

1.) Remove the stats, they are not an aspect of puppetry as of now. Simply cross them out or delete them altogether, anything outside the norm should be avoided for the time being,

Onto the actual judgement itself, I will have to ask you to clarify more on the subject of its abilities. Plastic still can melt at substantial tempuratures as can metal, a specification of what mixture/form would be greatly appreciated.

To have your puppet mimic the movements of taijutsu would need research and need an accompanying ninjutsu/puppetry supplementary jutsu to aid in this. There is one that has been made canon in the filler episodes of the anime, simply create a derived version of this. Again, please avoid things that are outside of the norm and apply them to a guild standard.

On the further note of this, the movements and the regiment of any sort of 'taijutsu' must be studied in RP and be taught by a Taijutsuist that has at least 4 Stages in the style in question learned. In even further clarification, such a thing would need a limit that being said only physical movements can be replicated and no style bonuses may ever be applied to the puppet. Nothing augmented by chakra can be replicated and no organic manipulations of the human body can also be replicated. TL;DR: Only movements. Nothing else. You are a puppeteer, I will not allow a pseudo Taijutsu-ist running around in the form of a man made nightmare and will throw off the balance of our classes as it were.

The Head: A set amount of chakra should be stated on how effective this will be in its activation. The explanation of 'explosive tag' will not suffice in the potency of the blast. Some hard facts should be applied.

Eye 1: Where is this fire being made? Is it chakra, oil, air, chemical? Where is the storage for its production? Is it chakra? Do you have the capability of using fire? Specify this weapon a bit more.

Eye 2: Accepted

Arms: Are the arms weakened when the weapons are out? How much dosage is kept within the weapon, how fast and how fluid is the motion of the puppet's 'shift' to the weapon?

Chest: Elaborate on the weapon, reach, length and include a chakra cost to how much is used in order for it to be used.

Poison Note: Please Include the poison with the puppet in a foot note or a spoiler.

Additional Note: This puppet needs to describe its weaknesses, to me it would most likely be the hollow chese and the arms when the pipes? are extended. The chest being susceptible to heavier blows or even sound ninjutsu the arms being weakened when the weapon is in use with the joints exposed.  
PostPosted: Thu Jul 17, 2014 3:27 pm
ChaosDuo
Username: chaosduo
RPC:Masutā papetton
Rank:genin
Puppet Name:Rantō kuma
Puppet Rank:B
Description:The bear itself has actually been crafted out of senju mokuton making it a bit more durable than your standard wood puppet. It stands about six and a half feet when on its hind legs. The paws of the bear are made of titanium alloy and the front paws have one small hollowed out hole in the center of each of them. When activated the holes themselves will secrete acid which is usually used to corrode blades and other weapons if they can be caught within the bears paws. Users would have to be in the same speed bracket as the puppeteer.(Must roll a four, five, or six on a ten sided die depending on the difference in speed between the user and the opponent. If they are of equal speed a four and so on so forth in the same bracket.) This acid can only be used three times before the canisters need to be refilled.

The arms are hydraulically charged and upon activation they can deliver punches in rapid succession four in about the span of two seconds. +2 to speed for the technique. Can only use the hydraulics once every three posts or they will burn themselves out. The arms also dawn titanium bracers which run down the forearms to the elbow of Rantō kuma.

The claws on the front paws are attached to a 40 foot retractable cable on each paw. Allowing each claw to stretch out ten feet when used together or any other combination in length depending on how many claws the user chooses to use. They are sharpened razors which can tear into the opponents skin. The claws themselves have a small hole on the tip of each claw which secrete a small amount of poison. Once secreted the poison will only remain on the claws for three posts before evaporating. (Poison cartridges must be replaced after three uses.)

Post # 1: The infected will feel as though all is normal.
Post #2-4: They will gradually start feeling nauseous and their vision will gradually blur.
Post # 5: They will pass out from the poison taking over the body.

Rantō kuma also dawns a titanium alloy helmet which covers his face and back of his neck. As well as a chest plate which opens into a compartment in which the user can climb into. Upon entering into the chamber their is a seal which surges with chakra.

(Upon Approval.)Hibernation Seal: This chakra energizes the user for three posts as they gain 20 points of chakra per post. User must remain laying in Rantō kuma's chest for the duration.

Believing an animal should appear in their natural state Masutā is well known for taking an animal hide and placing it around his creation leaving openings for their weapons. Therefore Rantō looks exactly like a black bear. Some people say it is a sadistic side of Masutā but he believes it is paying homage to the animal itself. He has even put a recording the bears growl in its mouth.

Weak Joint:The elbows
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1 - Are you a Mokuton user? Do you have access to the Mokuton element? Are you able to gain access to make the puppet out of the Mokuton Element? If not, eliminate this bit in your description with an actual wood type.

2 - The claws/Paws -> Define 'activated'. How is it activated, is it mechanical or chakra flow? How is it opened, elaborate.

3 - Paws -> How does this 'acid' not affect the puppet itself? Elaborate this acid.

4 - Speed System Abuse -> Take this out of the description. Use our system, a dice system will not be allowed.

5 - Canisters -> Explain where these are, how are they refilled?

6 - Arms -> Explain the mechanics of the hydraulics and where it is all located, how it is done. Is this mechanical or chakra flow? If its chakra, do you have a jutsu or does it cost something? If its mechanical, what is it, steam, kinetic gyroscopics? What? Explain.

7 - Arms. Speed -> Eliminate the speed increase, and nerf the ability slightly.

8 - Claws - Reduce the range, improbable for a lot of coiled metal in a small space in addition to whatever mechanism of hydraulics you have in the arm.

9 - How is this poison healed, and please define the effects a lot more and the potency needs to be nerfed slightly for a longer clock. The effects need to be more defined for RP description purposes.

10 - The Seal is denied. Puppeteers do not have sealing other than their Untapped Ability.

Anything that was not mentioned is approved or missed upon this initial judgement.

Edit: Please include a more defined weakness.  


-x- Rei -x-


O.G. Vampire



-x- Rei -x-


O.G. Vampire

PostPosted: Thu Jul 17, 2014 3:29 pm
xxx_Mist_of_shadows_xxx
Username:xxx_mist_of_shadows_xxx
RPC:Alexandra James
Rank:genin

Puppet Name:Sail
Puppet Rank:C
Description:
The puppet Sail is made of finally sanded logs and branches, the body is constructed of logs and branches that connect each thing to another. The puppet has a heart shape carved into the log chest and stands 4'5 and weighs 60 pounds. The waist down of the puppet is fairly regular while the fingers on both hands seperate to reveal blades, their are 2 blades per finger while each finger can open up and release fire. Both elbows can fold back to reveal swords.The mouth of the puppet can open to shoot needles. The puppet other then that is fairly simple and meant to be for a genin.
Weak Joint:shoulders, if the arms are detatched the puppet has no more weapons to use.
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Description above ^


Can I ask you to define the parts of the puppet a bit more or provide a short simple list of its mechanics?  
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