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minhlana

PostPosted: Tue Mar 01, 2005 12:30 pm


PostPosted: Tue Mar 08, 2005 7:47 pm


the backround is kinda weird, but it's a cool picture ^_^

fishkisser


Pann-yu

PostPosted: Tue Mar 08, 2005 8:22 pm


Erm...let's see...it's really good, but a few pointers anyways:
1) The neck is way too long
2) The hair looks funny. I'm not saying that something's wrong with it or anything, it just looks...strange... sweatdrop

Other than those two tiny things, love it!
PostPosted: Sat Mar 12, 2005 1:41 am


Water Sorceress
Erm...let's see...it's really good, but a few pointers anyways:
1) The neck is way too long
2) The hair looks funny. I'm not saying that something's wrong with it or anything, it just looks...strange... sweatdrop

Other than those two tiny things, love it!


Lol xd

I have a problem with the neck, I can't seem to make it shorter.... sweatdrop

minhlana


Dammish

PostPosted: Thu Mar 17, 2005 9:59 am


The issue of having the neck unnaturally elongated is one which has plagued me for years. It usually comes about when one begins drawing the head first, then underestimates the distance between the chin and shoulders. Examine some pieces of good anatomy and you will notice that unless a character is supposed to be "laid back" in the extreme, the chin ends only a scale centimeter or so before the neck enters into the shoulders. Many people can actually make this artistic process work for them, myself most certainly NOT included, but you have such a way that you might try working with the deformity rather than against it.
PostPosted: Sun Mar 26, 2006 11:02 am


Just wanted to say that the coloring look great - good luck


aquanimas


Dapper Rogue


Okiyami

PostPosted: Sun Mar 26, 2006 4:15 pm


I dunno what other ppl might think but I really like her hair XD! I can never manage anime hair like that (all my character's hair look like plastic). Yes, I have the neck-problem too...
PostPosted: Mon Mar 27, 2006 10:59 am


I like her eyes and her skin ^^
Looks so cool ^^
The neck might look a little too long, but it's ok.

Cynthea


Violet_Dusk

PostPosted: Fri Mar 31, 2006 9:58 pm


Not bad...i like the colouring ^^
PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2006 7:45 am


the eyes are really good, but the bangs are a little flat

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