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Okiyami

PostPosted: Thu Mar 30, 2006 3:37 pm


Ok, so I've asked for lots of critique/feedback/ratings/comments these past days, but, hey, that's what part of this guild's for, right? XDXD
And I do try to comment on other topics, but I feel guilty since I'm not all that good of an artist (possibly) giving bad (unhelpful, misleading) advice to others...

Anyways, so I didn't get any comments on this on 'PICTURE HELP' so I decided to post it here... or is that against the rules? eek Possibly. Oh well.

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Can I please have advice on backgrounds too? That would be SO helpful ^^
PostPosted: Thu Mar 30, 2006 5:27 pm


The hair looks stringy... was that the look you were going for? [If you want more anime like hair, try and make the ends of her hair pointed instead of circle or square like. If not then cross this out.]
I like how you made her eye look slanted, she looks really calm and reserved ^^.

Hmm... Other than the hair, her clothes (the jacket/top) should have more wrinkles on it; it looks very stiff on her, refrence other clothes and compare and contrast. Also since im guessing she is a woman... >.> On her jacket, make curves around her breasts to make it look like she has some (unless you're going for the flat look). The bottom part, her pants, should also be larger, women have curves aka a butt. So try to curve out her arse a little more whee Also work on the hands i too like bubble hands >< but ty and add some more details. Backgrounds i stink at them, so i wont confuse you XD.

But i do like the pose and the slant that she has going on heart  

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Okiyami

PostPosted: Thu Mar 30, 2006 6:46 pm


XD Thanx for the advice ^^. I guess you've one of my 'trick questions' (aka things I look out for beforehand but see if other people notice it too.)

Note: This kid's a guy.

Mm... so you think he'll look better with sharper anime hair? Actually, that how I drew him out in the first place, but then because of my problem (aka tendency to make every one of my characs look the same) I changed the hair so I could tell who he was ^^.

For the wrinkles... heck, I took them off 'cause I'd probably mess 'em up. Advice on how to make wrinkles look realistic?
PostPosted: Sat Apr 01, 2006 6:17 am


the hair is a bit akward but none the less he is a good looking picture

Xx bound Angel xX

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