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Anzu_Tenshi

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Posted: Thu Mar 30, 2006 8:16 pm

Ok. Please, if you see anything that needs work plz tell me! I'm kinda mad the wing got kinda cut off, but oh well.... stare

Posted: Thu Mar 30, 2006 8:35 pm

Mm... I like her wings ^^. So Intricate...

1.) her eye's colored in skin-color.
2.) Pupil/Eye is a little too big but it's ok.
3.) Her bust and back don't match up that well. Bust is supposed to make a smoother transition to the waist and doesn't stick out that much.
4.) ... the background is...?

I like the pic though. You all gotta love angels!

Okiyami

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Anzu_Tenshi

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Posted: Thu Mar 30, 2006 8:48 pm

Thank you! xd I was going to make a cloud-like background to it, but I found it bland afterwards. So I just started airbrushing with different colors, and it just came out like that. xp Thanks for the comment on the wings! They took me forever!

Posted: Fri Mar 31, 2006 7:38 am

ah... hmmm...
well... the wings are really well done ^^;
her face looks good... I think the eye size is okay... well... anime is marked by the big eyes... isn't it? XD... what is weird is that I can not realize the exactly shape of the eye...
her arms are too long and too thin... and... it looks like she doesn't have bow... XD
and yup... I agree with okiyami-san... about the bust ^^;
hmmm... well... bg is really troublesome XD
so I don't really mind about this one ^^
hehe
overall... good job ^^
keep on drawing and posting ^^

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