My first LoZ fan fic! ^^ (CHAPPIE 5!!! whoot. read.)

[bunnybunnyxo]

I made a LoZ fanfiction, and i was wondering if anyone here would like to read it! If you do or don't like it, then just post here.

Link:

A New Beginning

Hope you like it! LxZ haters, be cautious...I didn't put any "moments" in there, but the content is based around them....  

[Kutabacchimae]

I'm not really sure how I feel about it. I suppose that's just because if conflicts with my own opinions of Zelda. I can't imagine her as the kind of person who would be in that situation. That said, you haven't revealed much about the story or the circumstances that lead to the current situation. As such, I can't commit myself to either disliking or liking the story. I simply have to know more.

The doctor seems to be really close to Zelda o.O;; He kinda creeps me out a little. I feel like he's gonna pounce on her any minute or something.

Anyway, please write more ^^  

[bunnybunnyxo]

Kutabacchimae

I'm not really sure how I feel about it. I suppose that's just because if conflicts with my own opinions of Zelda. I can't imagine her as the kind of person who would be in that situation. That said, you haven't revealed much about the story or the circumstances that lead to the current situation. As such, I can't commit myself to either disliking or liking the story. I simply have to know more.

The doctor seems to be really close to Zelda o.O;; He kinda creeps me out a little. I feel like he's gonna pounce on her any minute or something.

Anyway, please write more ^^

^^ i kinda meant for it to have that effect on people. i didn't want to reveal much now.

and i've started the 2nd chapter (it's going to be longer) so you'll be able to read that soon! ^^ (glad someone...kinda....likes it!)  

[bunnybunnyxo]

Updated. ninja  

[Satsun]

Oh...god... so... sweet... with... the...girl... and... Link..
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I like it... I actually have the need to make a fanart for it *twitch*
Continue with it! I wanna know what's going to happen!  

[Loki Ichimura]

It's nice, but I do kind of agree with Kutabacchimae regarding Zelda... I don't think Zelda would act like that, nor would Zelda and Link get it on, if you wil. BUT! That's what fanfiction is about, no? So good work. ^ ^  

[Sono Ketsuraku Rinku]

Not bad.

You keep the characters acting the way most people think they would, so its easy to follow.

Good Job  

[lalobabaloo]

Pretty nice. Keep updating, we're all anticipating more information!  

[bunnybunnyxo]

ugh...i need to start the third chappie....i just got back from a month long camp. ^^;  

[bunnybunnyxo]

UPDATED! *does updating dance* rofl  

[bunnybunnyxo]

updated (anyone reading...? gonk )
ninja ninja ninja  

[Satsun]

bunnybunnyxo

updated (anyone reading...? gonk )
ninja ninja ninja

You got to move fast, it's a good story, and I want to read more...! 3nodding  

[bunnybunnyxo]

Satsun

bunnybunnyxo

updated (anyone reading...? gonk )
ninja ninja ninja

You got to move fast, it's a good story, and I want to read more...! 3nodding

hehe....well, im typing up the 5th chappie now, so hopefully it'll be up soon!  

[Satsun]

bunnybunnyxo

Satsun

bunnybunnyxo

updated (anyone reading...? gonk )
ninja ninja ninja

You got to move fast, it's a good story, and I want to read more...! 3nodding

hehe....well, im typing up the 5th chappie now, so hopefully it'll be up soon!

Mikau (points to sig) truly hopes so, so he doesn't have to read anymore Young LinkxHim fanfics... *shivers*  

[bunnybunnyxo]

UPDATED!!!!! WHEEE!!!!! xd whee xd whee xd whee