RPC Need some crits before colouring!!! =3

[Toxxic Vixen]

Okay so that's her. My Rp character. I'm gonna colour her later, but in the mean time, I need some feed back before I actually do. I think her head looks a little too foreward maybe, and if it is just make a small comment on it cause I'm not really gonna change that....anything but that.

Thanks a bunch guys!

Ja ne~!  

[DjNawo]

To me, it seems like her chin is to much forward. I would just take back the chin a little and it would be great.  

[superb soup]

You know what, I think it looks cool that way. Everyone has their own unique style, and the whole longish neck thing actually works for this particular character.  

[Icarus Fallen]

I would actually say bring the neck forward, not the chin back. The way it is now makes it look like she has no neck, and even a thin one would show up some. I would say draw in a bit of neck in front of the hair.  

[Argentine]

I agree; bring the back forward.
Other than that, beautiful lineart.