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 Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 7:46 pm
So here is a very small part of my 85 page story that I've been working on for years. It's going to be male/male, but there is none of that in this part.
http://heartlessnobody.livejournal.com/1117.html#cutid1
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 7:53 pm
Wow.
That's a great start. I can't wait to read more!
And if you ever get it published into an acutal book, let me know. I'll buy it. ^^
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 8:20 pm
Spastic waffles Wow.
That's a great start. I can't wait to read more!
And if you ever get it published into an acutal book, let me know. I'll buy it. ^^ Thank you! ^_^ I really wish I could get something published. I'm sure they'd expect to see something finshed. None of my stuff is finished yet. I really have to work on that. I'm glad you liked it.
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 11:03 pm
heart I loof if! And I loof it even more because I loof Yaoi! heart
One Word.
Genius!
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Posted: Wed Aug 23, 2006 2:22 am
I hope to read more, it seems really good. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Aug 23, 2006 11:37 am
so sweet
as a sleeping angel.
loverly.
heart -Remy
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Posted: Wed Aug 23, 2006 1:10 pm
Thank you all. I'm glad you liked it. ^_^
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Posted: Wed Aug 23, 2006 5:52 pm
The throw in of Alex's thought into the section where he seemed to be a 3rd person narrative on Roland's part threw me off, I would suggest either removing it all together, or simply shifting it to a section where Alex is the main narrator.
I liked it though.
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Posted: Wed Aug 23, 2006 7:23 pm
Zahmen The throw in of Alex's thought into the section where he seemed to be a 3rd person narrative on Roland's part threw me off, I would suggest either removing it all together, or simply shifting it to a section where Alex is the main narrator. I liked it though. Thanks for the suggestion. Once I get the story all written out I'm going to go back and re-write everything. I'll work on it later. Thanks again. ^_^
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