I wrote a song... [[LIEK, DONE]]

[dogs are not cool]

I wrote a song... I'm feeling very broken right now and I am having troubles in my life so I wrote a song to vent sort of.

"Corruption in my soul, cockroaches in my head;
Everyone backs away, they've all left me for dead.
Nobody understands, Nobody gives a s**t
Just get her away and keep her away.

Nobody wants me, choke me love me.
Kiss me, kill me, feed my angst.
She's the girl, the one to avoid.
Get her away, keep her away.

She's strange and misleading, she loves to be bleeding
And she carves up her arms with a razorblade.

I don't understand what drove her to insanity,
Maybe it's her family
A lack of love; a lack of life.

She's the girl, the one to avoid,
The girl who's friend is pain
And the scars apon her arms are proof she's had enough of that.

I'm feeling down, I'm feeling scared
I feel as if nobody cares
But just because I feel alone and dead
Should I play my arm like a violin?

Too late."


Just finished. <3
 

[toy cowboy]

I love it..  

[dogs are not cool]

Thank you, I thought I would get flamed...

 

[Rellik San]

No one here will flame you for creativity, though there is a forum for that, but I'm guessing your new so it doesn't matter.

Anyway, ther most you'll get is people casting a critically objective eye over it.  

[dogs are not cool]

Wicked. Thanks for having me here =D  

[aikoislost]

too short but itll do. razz  

[[[blunt.object]]]

me likes, me likes.
wonderfully creepy and demented.  

[dogs are not cool]

Thanks.  

[LadyPanda04]

It's great.

 

[rikaLeshay]

i love it.
it's wonderful.  

[_darkened_tears_]

Wow, that's really good. I really like it. 3nodding  

[electronewyork]

yea i really liked it too, dont forget to post the entire song when u are done ^ ^.  

[fullmeatgirl]

awsome I heart it (i can never wite a song that's good any tips sweatdrop )  

[dogs are not cool]

Thank you, I never beleived that it would actually be liked biggrin  

[Gambino Statue]

Cockroaches in my head.
Awesome.