my style is big heads so dont bother me about it. 3nodding
Posted: Tue Sep 19, 2006 7:07 pm
She is cute! I don't see many anatomical errors besides the big head. I do have an issue about her left arm...it shouldn't bend back so much that her torso covers it like that...You should be able to see almost all of her upper arm.
Your coloring is pretty good. It's clean, deep, and I like the colors you chose. I could only suggest adding more shadows [in her hair] and highlights [on her dress], and experiment in adding more colors, especially to her skin tone. Skin has yellows, reds, and even blues and greens sometimes.
I like her character design. Her hair makes her seem strong, like she has attitude, but her pose shows that she's still vulnerable. [xD maybe I'm reading too much into this]
Anyways, it's a really good picture!
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Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2006 8:33 am
The one boob is significantly larger than the other. Other than that, she's adorable.
Posted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 8:55 pm
well... something feels 'off' in regards the face... I'd say it's the mouth.
in square 1, the smaller right boob to the bigger left boob... as already pointed out.
and square 2... it's just that is kinda like shoping off one of the arms... you should make a little line, and the arm to overlap a little bit more. 3nodding
please, don't feel insulted. She looks cute, btw. ^^
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Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 9:06 pm
yes, she's cute. biggrin I like her eyes and her hair. but her mouth looks a little off, as previously mentioned... I dunno much about boobs though, most of the characters I draw are kinda flat-chested. xDDDD;
Posted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 7:35 pm
she looks mildly disgusted....though cute and the far boob is a little small.....
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Posted: Thu Oct 05, 2006 1:08 pm
yeah....she looks good besides her boob..........
Posted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 11:08 am
one of her boobs is bigger than the other...besides that...its good whee
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Posted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 3:04 pm
I would also have to say the boobs are a bit on the lopsided side lol, but she is cute. I wish I could draw like that, I suck lol.
Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 5:57 pm
lol well everyone says the boobs are a lil off which is agreeable but id say your nose curves a lil weird... mostly its because when i draw i use more pointed noses or just the straight line where the nose would come down to always try different ways! =D
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Posted: Fri Oct 27, 2006 10:10 pm
I like it!!!
Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2006 7:41 am
the face is a little long, and the far boob is a bit small....she also doesn't look very awake, but thats your choice..
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Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2006 2:34 pm
Hehe, I like it^_^ Cute expression, and nice hair~
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