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 Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2005 3:01 pm
I'm working on this site as a freelance gig, and I was wondering what you guys thought of it. Since I have yet to reteach myself Flash, I'm just using HTML and CSS. I did not pick the color scheme. Link: http://poshpaperonline.comPlease comment, thanks!
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Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2005 6:36 pm
That is an interesting color scheme, that is for sure!!!
I like the design! I suggest for the list of products, chose a different font that is a little more readable at that small size.
I'll look at it more and see if I can think of any other comments... sorry to not be very helpful. wink
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Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2005 3:33 am
I suggested that to the client too, but she looooooves that font. Blah. Thanks though!
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Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2005 8:27 am
"A Bar or Bar Mitzvah is a joyous celebration"
on the mitzvahs.html page. Is that a typo? I seem to read Bar/Bat Mitzvahs in the title. Though the font is horrendous with r's and t's. (Not your fault, I know.)
Oddly enough, pink and brown isn't actually too bad on the eyes.
Might want to use better headings for the windows that pop up for the larger sized pictures.
Not too bad a site.
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Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2005 7:23 pm
What do you mean by better headings? The text?
Bar Mitzvahs are for boys and Bat Mitzvahs are for girls. Does that clear it up?
I did a lot of work on it today, added more pictures and such.
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Posted: Mon Jun 06, 2005 8:31 pm
Very nice site ^__^ I like the colour scheme, but I find the pink a -tad- bright. I'd suggest just toning it down just a little ^_^
Another small nitpick: the menu graphics are not evenly spaced. It's because of the p's, I know, but I think it would be nicer to look at if all the graphics were the same height.
But very cute site overall! n.n
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 6:46 pm
I like the banner at the top, it keeps the layout from being too simple.
The color sceme kind of turns me off however...
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Posted: Mon Dec 19, 2005 12:33 pm
i think the colors work fine. the type is atrocious.
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Posted: Mon Dec 19, 2005 6:46 pm
I like the banner on top but the coloring is ok but i don't really like it like...bothers me for some reason but besides that it's awesome
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Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2005 1:44 am
That's actually pretty good. A little nitpicks here and there, but I think it's very good.
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