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 Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 12:22 pm
This is someone's RP character. I know not what she is, where she comes from... heck, barely had enough information to draw her. Teach me not to require reference pictures for all commissions.
I've noticed I have a habit of making the stomaches, well... strangely flat. Undefined. I've also been dying to figure how to draw her right arm right, because I tried quite hard and yet still it looks rather detached to me. Ideas? And just because I can: headshot headshot headshot
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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 1:00 pm
Very nice! I like the expression biggrin
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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 1:16 pm
Well... not really sure how to fix it, but her arms seem rather short.
You can try making her left arm jut out a bit more.
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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 1:42 pm
Hold on, before I continue any further, this is a woman, right?
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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 3:14 pm
AkiraBirtron Hold on, before I continue any further, this is a woman, right?
In my defense, the person did say "Just enough to tell she's female."
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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 8:56 pm
Just for future reference, while I like the fact that you have subtle colors and everything, it's just that you happen to show that this has more testosterone than anything else.
You should slope the shoulders more, and at the same time, give her a little more hips as well. Almost everything about her screams I'm a woman trapped in a man's figure. (Slim her arms down a tad as well, and make them a bit longer.) Have it bend at the most narrow part of her body. It works best that way.
I suggest next time you should narrow out her neck and have her chin less broad as well. Keep up the good work!
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Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 6:11 pm
AkiraBirtron Just for future reference, while I like the fact that you have subtle colors and everything, it's just that you happen to show that this has more testosterone than anything else. You should slope the shoulders more, and at the same time, give her a little more hips as well. Almost everything about her screams I'm a woman trapped in a man's figure. (Slim her arms down a tad as well, and make them a bit longer.) Have it bend at the most narrow part of her body. It works best that way. I suggest next time you should narrow out her neck and have her chin less broad as well. Keep up the good work!
I have one question, though. The arms seem pretty slim to me as is. Could you be more specific on which part/s to slim?
Phishy: Quite right. =D
Starlit: Thanks!
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