Avi!

[Momo Shimizu]

I've been working on a sketch of my avi...so I guess I pretty much just wanted to know what you think! I can't color it, so please don't ask.
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/44434835/
It does work, just so you know. If you click on it (the picture) it should show up.  

[Pann-yu]

I like it! I think you can afford to add a bit more detail to the bottom half, even though I think I know what you're trying to do by eliminating the details there. Nice pic, though. ^.^  

[Momo Shimizu]

^_^ Thanks. Actually, I'm just really far from done. I'm not exactly sure what I'm going to do yet, but yeah I do agree. More detail! I have uploaded more drawings! Most of these are old, actually, but with some new progress. A few I've already posted. Some of them are going to be on my DeviantArt because they're too big. Sorry!


Ariella. She has some anatomical problems. My math teacher said she was hot. burning_eyes
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/44491263/
Yeah that one's upside down... sweatdrop
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/44491367/
Also upside down. -_-
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/44435013/
Nifty.
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/44490896/
XD Me and my boyfriend.

Alright that's it for now. What do you think???  

[Shizzle Bam Boom-]

Not bad, by the way you can get image editing programs to flip your upside down sketches. I think even the one that comes standard with windows XP can do it.  

[Momo Shimizu]

Yeah I was trying, and it worked on that program, and then when I tried to upload it flipped again. I gave up. xd  

[Pann-yu]

Hm...I really like the way you shade! I won't say a word on the ones upside down as I can't get my brain to see what's wrong with an upside down picture O.o but for the first one...really nice job! You can probably do something with her dress so it seems more 3-D, but overall, really nice! ^.^  

[DarkNeko86]

Not bad at all.

You are beginning to shade in the hair, and you can probably work your way up to shading everywhere else too.. gives a three-dimensional look.

Your anatomy problems are shared by all artists at some point and beyond. It never really goes away. If it really bothers you or if you dont develop a style that feeds off of an anatomical mishap, it's always safe to use real photos. Real references are always a good things to use.

Keep practicing.  

[PinkGhost]

You have a very cute style! I love the way you shade everything, especially the hair. I also like the detail you put into your drawings. The main anatomical error I see in most of your work is the face shape. They seem a little too round and flattened. But other than that, it's all wonderful, even the upside down ones. ;D

 

[Momo Shimizu]

Thank you for your comments! PinkGhost, I asked my sister about my drawings and she said the same thing. xd I like drawing round faces because they're cute, and I have a round face. whee And just to tell everyone, most of my drawings aren't finished (as if that wasn't obvious), so if there are shading problems and such, thank you for telling me and I will get to them ASAP! I think Chill is the only one that is, but I'm not sure if I posted him. Again thanks for the comments, and I'd still love more!  

[Tsuyumi Riko]

Have you tried using windows paint program to rotate the picture?

Btw, I love your sketches. The lines are very clean (perfect for colouring~~ heart ). The shading in most of your pictures are detailed and defined. And is this deviantart account the one you use mostly?  

[Momo Shimizu]

Yeah, it is. I don't have any others...but most of my drawings are on my photobucket, since I started using that way before DeviantArt. Here it is: { http://s17.photobucket.com/albums/b86/Demonic_Artist/ } Feel free to take a glance at those. ^_^

--x--Momo--x--