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Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2006 6:51 pm
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Im new here and I know its a bit immposing, but i would love some input on my current collaborative. Ive been at it for a while but it seems that its much to intimidating for the average writer in collabrative, and sadly yeilds no comments or even hints that any have read it. so here's the link:
http://www.gaiaonline.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=17545567&page=1
Unfortunatly allot of the thred is made up of disscusion so you'll have to dig for the story, most of it, though is on pages 2, 3, 5, 6, and 7 once again you may have to do some digging.
note that im still editing, and ill have up the rest of my begging post re-edited shortly
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Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2006 8:46 pm
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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 2:15 pm
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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 4:25 pm
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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 7:46 pm
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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 7:49 pm
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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 7:54 pm
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KirbyVictorious YOU. Gain some self confidence. more affirming title more self-assured comments or Kirby will poke you with ehr fluffy pink pimp stick.
I am self confidence ^_^ but i dare not lie ^_--
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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 8:02 pm
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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 8:24 pm
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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 8:33 pm
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KirbyVictorious You are self confidence. *ahem* can anyone say "flawed"? Excuse me, this is 11:00 at night, hormonal, chocolate-starved Kirby speaking. Nice Kirby is duct-taped in the closet. Well, duh I did. I'm a very, very powerful mod *haughty glare*
i can, and what i meant to say was: I am the very essence of self confidence. indeed self confidence flows through my every vain, promclaiming its glory at the highest volume it can emmit.
But that was a bit long so I thought the phrase: I am "self confidence" would surfice. hehe guess i was wrong.
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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 8:35 pm
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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 8:40 pm
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KirbyVictorious did I mention the CHOCOLATE DEPRAVED part? I thought so. You talk liek you're edging around us. Grow some balls, dude! Kirby doesn't sugar-coat ANYTHING. (6^-^)6
grow wha?? im not edging around anyone silly, I would really like some feed back on that story i linked to. there.
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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 8:55 pm
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Posted: Fri Dec 15, 2006 12:04 pm
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Posted: Fri Dec 15, 2006 5:53 pm
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