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 Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 5:17 pm
(Sorta a continuation off of the other post. Since this just happened in my life and I'm gettin' pissed...)
Brian: What happen?
What? You aren't suppose to read those.
Brian: Well I just did, BIATCH.
Oh hush. Where's your smarter and far more appealing brother?
Spyke: You call?
Yes. I'm pissed.
Spyke: Oh, that's a first for '07. Why and who?
That Brittany girl I thought I was about to go out with. Turns out she "found out she had a chance with two other boys."
Spyke: Ouch. So you're basically dumped before even going out?
Yaaa...
Brian: Sounds like you need to get away from marching band people!
... actually, Brian, you have a good point.
Spyke: Wow, never thought I'd hear that.
Brian: Neither did I!
But really, I'm sick of being a frickin' back-up boyfriend. This happened with another girl I was really dating and about to ask out, until she also "found out this one boy liked her." Sure enough, they started going out a few days later.
Brian: My senses detect another devilish marching band woman!?
Ya. But she went to a different school. So that sorta-
Brian: No. It's official. You're getting away from all marching band people.
Spyke: Agreed. Nothing good has ever come out of hanging around with girls in the marching band cult.
But... I really liked her.
Brian: Ya, and I really like Mudkip. BUT DO YOU SEE WHAT BECAME OF THAT!?!?
Spyke: ... Brian, your moment to shine ended a few minutes ago.
Brian: Curses.
Well, ya. Guess I'll be waiting for someone. Might even write something worthwhile in the meantime.
Brian: Write another Wingless! I wanna see what awesome things I do this time!
Spyke: And you better turn me back into that demonic super-saiyan thing or whatever it was.
Heh... guess I will.
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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 7:32 pm
wow you cant tell by looking but its actually quite sophisticated as far as dialog and human nature go ( most of it anyways.) some of the the dialog you can tell is a transferance of your nature onto the other boys but the other stuff stays well hindden with the nature of boydom [not quite sure how to spell that made up word]
I think you used spyke as your reasoning side and brian as a transferance of observed human nature.
even if that analysis is wrong or any of that stuff you put in was unintentional; the fact remains that i enjoyed it.
[this is actually one of the first works ive seen from you...odd, but enjoyable.]
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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 9:29 pm
Lol, noob.
(that was sarcasm)
I'm a marching band person. (snare). Do I count as a person you shouldn't hang around with?
Cause I'm a Hawk fangirl, and we don't use you for backup. ^^ 3nodding that's what Ross is for... ninja
(he totally has the hots for me. i ignore him)
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