looks great! I love pin-up tattoos. They're so damn classy. PS- why aren't the lines are her knees connected? Is that intentional?
Very intentional. The traditional way to draw pin ups was to leave out those joints (elbows and knees mostly), it just makes it look softer, more feminine and aesthetically pleasing.
I was doing another pin up the other day, and did the same thing, but the guy requested that I connect them, and it just looked awkward. He liked it, but I wasn't happy with it. sad