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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 9:35 am
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 9:54 am
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 11:04 am
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 12:11 pm
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The Lights of Seoul Sailboat A boat sails on the horizon Its snow white sails flapping in the wind Its course already set A sailboat in its way Flowers Flowers dancing gently with the wind Swaying back and forth to silent music Ocean Sparkling Ocean Leaping dolphins Blue sky
What an elegant display of simplicity ^_^ I really enjoyed these.
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 4:50 pm
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Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 1:01 pm
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KirbyVictorious Now, now, Takky, you learn more about people through aimless conversation than writing and critique. And us being a family means us knowing each other well, because that's what we do. Though critiquing is something I heavily support, because if you don't tell someone that you read their story they'll be sad and disencouraged from writing any more. ):
I disagree kribs. You may learn a lot from "aimless conversation" but you can still learn just as much, if not more, from how the person your talking to tells his or her story. Indeed, you may not feel it necessary to disclose your inner state of being to a person in the normal confounds of idle chit chat; but when your writing something, you have to dig deep within your personal experiences to weld together viable representations of the real world.
Your characters, descriptions, and attention to different aspects of a story, can all reveal specific aspects of your inner self.
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Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 4:53 pm
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Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 6:31 pm
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