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Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 2:52 pm
-a-smoke-to-show-the-fame- -a-purge-to-stop-the-gain- -a-pill-to-win-the-game- -a-drink-to-numb-the-shame- -a-shot-to-kill-the-pain- -a-cut-to-break-the-vein- -an-addict's-life-is-lame- -is-your-life-the-same-?-
i wrote this with one of my friends.... somebody said my other poem.. ,"an emo's picture", was too short... hope this one is better
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 7:25 am
it's pretty good.
i can imagine someone reciting this in some kinda local coffee shop kinda thing...
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Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 6:05 pm
BeckytheGoat it's pretty good. i can imagine someone reciting this in some kinda local coffee shop kinda thing... Yes, very coffee shopesque.
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 12:25 am
Is that all you people care about? How you'd look reciting poetry in a coffee shop?
Anyway, the poem is good, or was good up until the last two lines. They ruined it for me. Though your "emo's picture" poem was stolen, so I can't imagine this is your's, too.
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Posted: Wed Jul 04, 2007 1:21 pm
That poem reminds me of my friend...shes like that....
I love it.
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 10:35 am
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Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 12:02 am
A Kiss Goodbye Is that all you people care about? How you'd look reciting poetry in a coffee shop?
Anyway, the poem is good, or was good up until the last two lines. They ruined it for me. Though your "emo's picture" poem was stolen, so I can't imagine this is your's, too. *sigh* tsuki hasn't been on this guild for a while... TT 3 TT tht's mean.... tsuki doesn't care anymore... the "emo's picture" was written by tsuki. tsuki did not copy any ******* person. and tht's tht. don't care if you don't believe tsuki. but. this poem is by tsuki and one of her best friends. tht's all. *runs to a corner and starts cutting away.* now stfu. plz. (*^~^*)
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