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Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 10:20 pm
Uhm..ok.. let's see how this works:
My favorite color is black, It's my heart's favorite too... In a second, my whole world can change from happy to blue.
Buy some stitches for my broken heart, it's proof two people can be torn apart.. I walk along an empty rode, For which I paved for which I know.
There is where my dreams fall apart, There is where my depression starts, That is why my tears are sorrow, That is why my happiness won't start till tommorow.
I wake up in an empty room, I then know hope can start too soon. Under my bed lies a key, A key that holds happy possibilities.
As you may already know, That key stays there- Through rain and snow...
Because, my life bends, Yet my life aches.. But my life can't take it- When my heart must break
~ xWilted Heartx
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Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2007 2:41 am
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Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 12:17 pm
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 6:57 am
Fix your spelling and punctuation. Maybe then I'll consider critiquing it, or rather, giving you my opinion.
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