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Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 8:34 pm
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Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 12:41 pm
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((Ya know, I think I'll give Arisu time to be the suffering 17 year old girl she is. She's kept up this touch girl act for the last 100 pages, so I think she deserves it.))
A ten-year old Arisu was sitting in a corner, shaking and hugging her knees. The bodies of her parents and little sister lay throughout the room. A man was approaching her. "You're scared, aren't you?" the man laughed. He had a knife in his hand. The knife was covered in the blood of Arisu's family. "Wh-Why...are you...doing this?" Arisu asked with a voice that shook. She was terrified. The man just laughed and started to walk closer. Arisu couldn't see the man clearly because it was dark. The only thing she could see were eyes. Eyes the color of blood. "Wh-Who...are you? Wh-Why did you...kill my parents...and my sister?" she asked the man again. The man laughed. "I am simply an Eternal Eyes, like yourself," he said. "Are you...with the army?" Arisu asked. "No. But why am I telling you all this? You won't need the information in hell!" he said, laughing maniacally. Then he took one step. Then another. Then suddenly-
Arisu woke to the sound of Qin shouting. It took all her energy to stop from falling off the roof, where she had fallen asleep. "Even after seven years, that night is as clear as day..." she said quietly so no one could hear. She buried her face in her knees to hide the tears that were streaming down her cheeks.
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Mamoru looked at the stone wings in his hand and his thoughts turned to Asuka. "Thank you, Zack," he said to him quietly.
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Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 2:08 pm
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Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 4:17 pm
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 6:52 am
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 11:56 am
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:18 pm
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 5:38 pm
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 10:25 pm
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Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 5:55 am
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Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 12:33 pm
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Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 2:08 pm
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Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 9:55 pm
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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 6:22 am
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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 8:53 am
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