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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 7:46 pm
((...Yeah thats more than enough.. But you didn't have to go and bite me.. you need to learn patience, I mean you just showwed up out of nowhere and attacked me... now you've gotta go vamp!?.. Also some of us aren't using enough pronouns, such as he,she, it, ect. And commas! don't forget commas! Don't really care about misplaced spaces.))
Duri caringed, bringing up his arms to his neck and shoved June away from him, "The hell June!?" He shouted, his arms clutching to the light wound, his footfalls uneven as he stumbled away, keeping both of his dark eyes on June. (( I've really need to learn how to add a third line onto my posts.. =_=))
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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 7:55 pm
June licked her lips "data complete! You have a strange blood type."
((1.not vamp! 2.this'll be fun!! ^w^ 3. ROAR! You think to use more commas, you'll end up with a splice.=_= 4. patience smatience. Plot movements keep things interesting. 5. why yes, yes you do~))
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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 8:24 pm
Duri's left eye twitched, quivering at the strange situation placed before Duriono. "Data? Data on me? Why do you need my blood type?" He questioned, cautiously moving back towards June with small rapid footsteps, large intervals in between the sets. "Why did you just bite me!?" He pressed on, the wound in his neck had already healled, but however it did sting the demon.
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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 8:33 pm
"hm? oh!" June smiled sweetly, her face red from embarrassement "I'm sorry! I never told you why I fell from heaven!"
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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 8:40 pm
After the words "Fell from heaven" Duri went into his little Overly romantic state of mind, dashing up in June's face, and took her hands. "My angel, a gift from the heavens! This unknown purpose of yours obviously was created so that we'd meet!" He let go, and wrapped his arms around her waist, lifting her up slightly. "Its great that you fell from the sky! I would hate to have lived my life, only knowing true love after my long stay here is over! Now please, tell me why you fell on that fateful day!?"
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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 8:45 pm
((...I don't know whether I should squee or have lawls.....o.0))
June's face deepened in colour "k-k-kawaii~" She muttered. After a moment she shook her head and snapped out of it "erm...when I was in heaven, I never believed I truly knew a person until I actually...knew them, meaning I had to know every aspect of them. Because of this, I took up the habit of knowing someone's blood. It actually tells a lot about their personality, depending on the type as well as the sweetness...." (anime sweatdrops biggrin ) "...but everyone thought I was doing such because of a demonic presence...so I..fell..."
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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 8:59 pm
((Just do both >_>))
Duri passionatly kissed June for a moment before pulling away. "Then by all means my princess! Take as much as you'd like! I'll always just make more!" There was a strange gleam in Duri's iris, as took Junes hands once more and spun her a full three hundred and sixty degrees. Then tugged her close again. (Anime floating hearts=Lawls XD) "Why would such a wonderful uhh....." "Obsessive compulsive disorder?" Kagura suggested. Popping up from over June's shoulders wearing Yumi's glasses, holding a finger in the air. "No not that! Uhh Lovely O.C.D. be called demonic!?"
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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 9:02 pm
June blinked in surprise, a chill running down her spine at Kagura's sudden appearance. "u-uh, n-no! I'm f-fine now! I have what I n-need!"
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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 9:10 pm
Duri looked from June to Kagura, his puzzled look quickly turned into a glare, as he released one of June's hands and smacked the demoness with a paperfan, which he had retrieved from his pocket. "Stop killing the moment!" He scolded, rapidly hitting her until she retreated. "Okay! Okay! I got it!" She cried out, climbing a tree. "Ok, as I was saying..." Duri huffed, annoyed. He put the fan away, then wrapped his right hand around June's waist. "And how fine you are! My sweet angel; a gift from the sky angel gods! Or god... I'm pretty sure the Overseer was a fish god..." There was a small moment of silence. "......GOD DAMMIT KAGURA! YOU KILLED MY TRAIN OF THOUGHT!" Duri screamed, hurling the fan at her and knocking her out of the tree. "GYAH!"
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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 9:17 pm
June twitched, slowly raising her hand and flicking his forehead "D-d-duri, You've gone nuts."
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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 9:27 pm
Duri's hyped up condition came to a halt. His breathing returned to its norm. "Uhh.. well, what I'm trying to say is that I love you." He grinned nonchalantly, a bead of sweat running down his cheek, down his neck, and under his black gunman outfit.
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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 9:28 pm
Juen's eyes widened. After a moment she fainted
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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 9:38 pm
Duri sighed. "I should really work on that.." He counselled himself, laying her down in the car, and sat on the hood of said car.
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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 9:44 pm
((yup, this is fun~))
June opened her eyes after a few minutes, looking upward and groaning "...I have a headache.."
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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 9:47 pm
((This could be a filler episode if it were an anime =_=))
Duri sprung into action looming over the windshield and waving at her. "you ok? can I help with your headache?"
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