Jutsu Approval Forum ((New Rule))

[Kyuubi_Naruto_88]

Your Rank: Genin
Name of Jutsu: Chidori: Devastating Sharpness
Rank of Jutsu: A
Range of Jutsu: Must make contact physical contact
Jutsu's Element: Lightning
Description: Chidori: Devastating Sharpness, branches off from Make-Shift Chidori surpassing even the original Chidori. The user creates all the signs for the Make-Shift Chidori, then concentrating the chakra the user improves the sharpness of the lightning blade. The ninja charges the now sharpened Lightning Blade into the enemy piercing flesh and causing internal injuries. The user uses the momentum from the charge to carry the enemy anywhere from 5-20 meters before tossing him/her aside. Chidori: Devastating Sharpness can only be learned if the user is Jonin rank and has learned Make-Shift Chidori (which was created by Spike Uchiha).
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Your Rank: Genin
Name of Jutsu: Double Chidori: Infinite Lightning Spear
Rank of Jutsu: S
Range of Jutsu: Must make contact physical contact
Jutsu's Element: Lightning
Description: Double Chidori: Infinite Lightning Spear is an extension of Chidori: Devastating Sharpness. The user creates all the signs for the Make-Shift Chidori, concentrating the chakra the user improves the sharpness of the lightning blade, and finally the user divides the Chidori with both hands forming two seperate lightning blades. The user uses high speed to appear crouched under the enemy then drives the first blade into the enemy, driving him/her into the air as well as themselves. The user then uses Leaf Shadow Dance to appear behind the now airbourne enemy. The user drives the second blade into the enemy's back and drives them down into the earth creating a crater on impact. Double Chidori: Infinite Lightning Spear can only be learned if the user is Sannin (or Kage) rank and has learned Make-Shift Chidori (which was created by Spike Uchiha).  

[Katsuro Sony]

Katsuro Kinjo

((Pigeon))

Your Rank: Chunnin
Name of Jutsu: Mummy Tomb bushin
Rank of Jutsu: Jounin
Range of Jutsu: clone body
Jutsu's Element:Sand
Description: This jutsu is very useful when a user wants to hide for man enemy the user creates a sand cloen or earth cloen then use the third eye to make the clone be able to see while the user wraps him/Her self i nbandages and be carried on the cloens back the user may hide i nthe wrapped bandages the cloen may use jutsu but the user must make the hand signs inside of the bandages the cloen still is required to use chakra for the jutsus but the clone has bandages around his torso contectign the user and the cloen making it possible for the cloen to use jutsu as long as the user makes the hand signs

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Your Rank: Chunnin
Name of Jutsu: Mummy clone jutsu
Rank of Jutsu: Jounin
Range of Jutsu: Size of the user
Jutsu's Element: Sand
Description: This jutsu requires the user to carry a large amount of bandages. the user transfers chakra into bandages the bandages then form a mummy like clone the clone is able to wrap it self around the opponent but is easily destroyed by ninjutsu the clone the clone may also use sand jutsus but it will take the chakra from the user.
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Your Rank: Chunnin
Name of Jutsu: Mummy armor jutsu
Rank of Jutsu: Chunnin
Range of Jutsu: The users body
Jutsu's Element: Sand
Description: the user pours chakra into bandages and wraps himself in bandages. the armor is able to wrap around the opponent when hit. The armor is always drainign chakra and when wrapping aorund an opponent it will take more chakra. the bandages are very resistant to heat but water jutsus will ruin the armor.

by the way if there's a way for these to be accepted can you sya so there not completly godmod materail but if there is room for improvment that would be awsome cause i really need these one's approved and i know that following the rule will get them approved but these are kinda cool jutsus and i do't thin kanyones posted jutsus liek these their some of my best ideas so juts tell me how they can improve  

[Death_God_Sakura]

People I made the rules for a reason, use them and NO RUN ON SENTENCES

Kyuubi_Naruto_88: Denied
Katsuro Kinjo biggrin enied  

[_Manpish_]

(( sorry forgot to tell him about the Rank requirement.))
(( Penguin ))

Your Rank: Chuunin
Name of Jutsu: Make-Shift Chidori: Devastating Sharpness
Rank of Jutsu: B
Range of Jutsu: Must make contact physical contact
Jutsu's Element: Lightning
Description: Chidori: Devastating Sharpness, branches off from Make-Shift Chidori surpassing even the original Make-ShiftChidori. The user creates all the signs for the Make-Shift Chidori, then concentrating the chakra the user improves the sharpness of the lightning blade. The ninja charges the now sharpened Lightning Blade into the enemy piercing flesh and causing internal injuries. The user uses the momentum from the charge to carry the enemy anywhere from 5-20 meters before tossing him/her aside. Make-Shift Chidori: Devastating Sharpness can only be learned if the user is Jonin rank and has learned Make-Shift Chidori (which was created by Spike Uchiha).
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Your Rank: Chuunin
Name of Jutsu: Double Make-Shift Chidori Chidori: Infinite Lightning Spear
Rank of Jutsu: A
Range of Jutsu: Must make contact physical contact
Jutsu's Element: Lightning
Description: Double Chidori: Infinite Lightning Spear is an extension of the Make-Shift Chidori: Devastating Sharpness. The user creates all the signs for the Make-Shift Chidori, concentrating the chakra the user improves the sharpness of the lightning blade, and finally the user divides the Make-Shift Chidori with both hands forming two separate lightning blades. The user uses high speed to appear crouched under the enemy then drives the first blade into the enemy, driving him/her into the air as well as themselves. The user then uses Leaf Shadow Dance to appear behind the now airborne enemy. The user drives the second blade into the enemy's back and drives them down into the earth creating a crater on impact. Double Make-Shift Chidori: Infinite Lightning Spear can only be learned if the user is Chuunin or Jounin rank and has learned Make-Shift Chidori (which was created by Spike Uchiha).  

[iHuntur]

Huntur

Penguin

Your Rank: Yukikage
Name of Jutsu: Air Sucktion
Rank of Jutsu: B-Ranked
Range of Jutsu: None
Jutsu's Element: Wind
Description: This jutsu utilizes the wind element. After completing a set of handisngs, the user may almost remove the air away from their opponent. In doing this, the opponents skin may shrivell causeing quick movements to be limited and painful. Too many movements may result in rips in the skin, leading to infection.

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Your Rank: Yukikage
Name of Jutsu: Oxygen Removal
Rank of Jutsu: A
Range of Jutsu: None
Jutsu's Element: Air
Description: This jutsu utilizes the wind element. After completing the needed handsigns, the user will draw away the opponents oxygen supply. In order for this jutsu to continue, the user must be in complete trance and focused on opponent. The user may not move or attack while the jutsu is being used. After 5 post of no oxygen, the opponent will pass out.

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Your Rank: Yukikage
Name of Jutsu: Air Interrogation Technique
Rank of Jutsu: Jounin
Range of Jutsu: Must be inside building
Jutsu's Element: Wind
Description:

This jutsu utilizes the wind element. After forming a complete set of handsigns, the user will cause a severe change in pressure in the building. Anyone inside the building, bescides the user, will become into a drunked like state. In this state, no taijutsu or genjutsu may be used, and ninjutsu is very slow to make. Although this can be used to attack, the main use for this is for in the drunked state, the affected ninja will be forced to answer any questions completely honest. This will be used for information gathering.

Note: The affected ninja have to know about the event or question to answer it truthfully, no meta-game.

 

[Ryoko Earth]

((Eagle))

Your Rank: Sannin
Name of Jutsu:Lava Arena
Rank of Jutsu: S
Range of Jutsu:N/A
Jutsu's Element:Earth
Description: Used for when there is a high chance that the opponant will run. The user does handseals and slaps the ground with both palms. Lava rises from any source and forms a dome with a diameter of 30 feet and a height of 20 feet around the user. If someone who doesn't have the lava swimmer technique in effect tries to walk through, they will die. If it is touched by said person, they will recieve third degree burns. The weaknesses are that it cannot hold a good enough Earth user. Also that Seal users can get through with the right seals. Also that it maintains a constant drain on the users Chakra. If the jutsu is released, then the dome will harden and turn to dust. If the Chakra flow stops at any time, then the Jutsu will be released.  

[Fist of the Bro Star]

((Hawk))

Your Rank: Chuunin
Name of Jutsu: Kaze no Kizu (Wind Scar)
Rank of Jutsu: S
Range of Jutsu:20 meters
Jutsu's Element: Wind
Description: This jutsu requires a sword of some kind, and it also requires the user to have some form of hightened senses for it to actually work. This jutsu can only be used on characters that are Chuunin level or higher, otherwise their chakra signature will be too weak for the jutsu's power to be unleashed. The user generates a massive amount of energy into their weapon. Then, they have to be able to see the area where their opponent's chakra signature crashes with their own. When these energies collide they create a jagged void inbetween them. By slicing down, with the energy of the weapon, through this void, the user is able to instantaneously unleash three explosive blasts of power towards their enemy capable of obliterating anything in their path. This power blasts from three areas of the user's front, and also slightly off their sides forming a tremendous wide beam of power when they as they leave the user's center. Here's a video link to give a clearer description of what the attack is like. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BI9LvUfv1a4

Your Rank: Chuunin
Name of Jutsu: Tsuiraku Kaze (Falling Winds)
Rank of Jutsu: C
Range of Jutsu: N/A
Jutsu's Element: Wind
Description: A fairly simple wind jutsu in which the user uses wind to crash objects to the ground. It's pretty much the opposite of "Levitating Winds" where the user uses wind to toss an object into the ground. This jutsu can mainly be used to dodge attacks while they're suspended in the air, using a fierce wind above them to blow them back to ground very quickly. Likewise this jutsu can be used to send projectiles down upon their enemy at a faster rate. This jutsu can be used to crash down multiple smaller objects. However, it can only be used on one person at a time, or likewise any object equal to or greater than their weight and/or size.

Your Rank: Chuunin
Name of Jutsu: Thunder God's Blitz
Rank of Jutsu: B
Range of Jutsu: N/A
Jutsu's Element: Lightning
Description: This is a taijutsu attack that focuses highly on quickness for the first blow, similar to Rock Lee's lotus. The user uses lightning chakra to accelerate and strengthen their movements and then blast off their feet to deliver a strong flying knee strike to either the opponents face of sternum. The lightning energy will momentarily stun the opponent as well, giving the user an better opening to continue the assault. Then while the opponent's balance is thrown off by the strike the user twists in the air to both land a foot on the ground and to wrap their arm around the opponents neck. Once the neck has been grabbed the user twists their feet on the ground and throws the opponent from their hip, where the opponent will crash into the ground headfirst. As if this combo isn't devastating enough the user continues to use the momentum they've gained to front flip and land a crushing axe kick into the opponent's chest and/or head, causing a small crater from the physical power.  

[Katsuro Sony]

((Voltures))

Your Rank: Chunnin
Name of Jutsu: Desert Lotus
Rank of Jutsu: Jounin
Range of Jutsu: Close Combat
Jutsu's Element: Sand
Description: This jutsu requires the user to know 5 of the inner gates, Next the user must know up to stage 5 of pia qau Quan and Desert Fist , Thne leanring Leaf Shadow Dance, and the final 2 are primary lotus, and Suna no Uzu (Sand Swirl), Once learning all These required justu the user must first either knock the oppoent into the air or have the enemy already in the air, The user then will appear right behind the target with Shadow Leaf Dance, then wiht the sand swirl create a spiral of sand around both the user and the target. Next the user grips the enemy wiht the strength form pia qua quan and have stage 5 desert faist to add wieght. Once they user is able to get the target in this grip the chakra around the user prevent substution jutsu from acuring and the deadly strong grip will be able to destroy normal clones, Then the sand swirl wil lbegin to cut up the target and will do minor damage to the user as long as they have a sand armor. then the user spins uncontralaly and the sand will begin to cut the target and then slam the target to the ground and with the extra weight is able to break the taregts neck and shoulders and will cause major damage to the targets limbs from the sand and will have extreme damage in the torso, the user himslef with release all active justu once hittign th gorund but will flip awya to avoid damage himself but the gates will close and damage muscle tissues and puts a huge strain on the users heart cuasing him to have a recovery time of 2 posts where his limbs will be heavy and jutsus are impossbile to use then afetr recovering the user is unable to open the gates for the remain of the battle if the target survives. The final note on this jutsu if the user hold back he may let the target survive and mearly knock himout but there wil lstill be neck, Shoulder and other major damages that they must recover from.  

[iHuntur]

Your Rank: Yukikage
Name of Jutsu: Amida's 1000-Armed Death Embrace
Rank of Jutsu: A Ranked
Jutsu Element: Taijutsu, no element
Description: Kakuzu called this technique "a gift of the gods." This jutsu is activated by Chiriku using his left hand to make a half-ram and extending his right hand down with his palm parallel to the ground. Music starts playing as Chiriku summons the spirit of Amida. The spirit seems to envelop Chiriku and react to his emotions. The spirit is normally calm and both angelic and peaceful looking, but whenever Chiriku gets angry, the spirit turns red and transforms into a somewhat demonic-looking creature. Amida then attacks Chiriku's target with its 1000 spirit fists. The fists attack at such a high speed and number, it seems almost impossible to block. He uses this technique against Kakuzu and Hidan when they attacked the Fire Temple. However, both Hidan and Kakuzu survived this technique.  

[_Manpish_]

((Pigeon))

Your Rank: Chuunin
Name of Jutsu: Rasensunashuriken (Spiral Sand Shuriken)
Rank of Jutsu: Chuunin/Jounin
Range of Jutsu:50-100 yards
Jutsu's Element: Sand
Description:
this jutsu is much like the Rasensunakirei (Spiral Sand Slicer) but insted the sand that is turning at high speeds in the users palm is spred out into a large shuriken shape much like the Rasen Shuriken. but this attack may only be used a set amount of times and can be thrown. the user must be near a great amount of sand to use this jutsu. after the user forms this jutsu it is recommended that they hold it above their heads so that it doesn't damage them. unlike the Rasen Shuriken this attack can only damage the opponent to a point where they may possibly bleed to death or pass out, but not cut through them. the wounds are usually large and the sand can infect the body where ever it hits after a while. the users arm is also damaged when using this attack if not careful.

how many times the user may be able to use this jutsu:
-Gennin = 1 time ((must have a chakra reserve or have a Biju.))
-Chuunin = 3 times
- Jounin = 6 times
-Kage = 10 times  

[xLytez]

Manpish: Denied, I will not accept any add ons to rasengan or chidori. Nor shall I except chidori based or rasengan based jutsu.

Huntur: Denied, I understand how useful your jutsu are inc ombat and so forth but they can easily lead to god modding.

Ryoko: Denied, Jutsu has GM written all over it.

Fenrir: 1 and 3 Denied, reason being YOU ARE A CHUUNIN. 2 however is accpeted

Katsuro: Denied, that technique sounds extremely god mddish at your current rank.

Huntur: Denied, sort of...that's a regular jutsu so why not just go learn it the normal way.

Manpish: Denied, I explained why before.

Note: If you were denied due to a ranking violation please be aware that this does not mean it will be denied again in the future once you rank up.

 

[_Manpish_]

(( eagle))

Your Rank: Chuunin
Name of Jutsu: Call of the Rising Storms Jutsu
Rank of Jutsu: Chuunin+
Range of Jutsu: 1-2 miles
Jutsu's Element: lightning
Description:
this jutsu requires that the user has extensive use with the lightning element. first the user must focus as much lightning chakra as they can, then fire it off into the sky. soon after doing that a large storm cloud will form and begin to make thunder like sounds. after a one minute (post) the storm cloud will launch down an enormous lightning bolt at the user giving them a bright armor of lightning that can withstand any attack A-ranked or above for up to 3 minutes (posts). this attack takes a huge amount of chakra and is usually used to protect the user from a attack that could posibly kill them in one blow such as the Kirin or Amaterasu.

Your Rank: Chuunin
Name of Jutsu: Sand Crab Clone Technique
Rank of Jutsu: Chuunin+
Range of Jutsu:(none)
Jutsu's Element: Sand
Description:
after preforming the necessary hand signs the user creates a small or large crab made out of sand. this crabs defence is nearly impenetrable making it a great defencive/offencive jutsu. the crab can be formed with large claws that can squeeze the opponent to the point of passing out. the crab will disperse after being hit with at least 4-6 C-ranked jutsu, 3-4 B-ranked jutsu, or 1-2 A-ranked jutsu. this jutsu may only be learned by Suna Shinobi.  

[Katsuro Sony]

(( Parrot- Do we still ned to put a bird?))

Your Rank: Chunnin
Name of Jutsu: Hidden Boulder Release
Rank of Jutsu: Chunnin
Range of Jutsu: As far as a boulder can be thrown
Jutsu's Element: Earth
Requirements- Clone that can use earth jutsus and milatary movment or hidden sand jutsu.
Description: this justu is useful for sneak attacks, and may be used in multiple situations the user may hide in a debris and then have a clone throw the boulders(Chunnin Ranked jutsu, in douton jutsu list) the user then may be thrown towards and enemy and exit the boulder for a suprise atatck.

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Your Rank: Chunnin
Name of Jutsu: Zombie Taijutsu
Rank of Jutsu: Chunnin
Range of Jutsu:N/A
Jutsu's Element: N/A
Requirements- N/A
Description: This is a jutsu that must be activated before they are caught in a genjustu, the user will focus and force there mental state and physical state apart this will then send the user into a state of not being able to use jutsu becuase they lose the ability to think and control their body, the reason for this is so if the user is caught in a genjustu they may use taijustu even when there mind is being tormented, but this olny last 3 posts and if the user is still i nthe genjustu they wil ltake massive mental stress, the zombie stae is a huge risk because they will randomly attack. No hand signs required to preform this jutsu.

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Your Rank: Chunnin
Name of Jutsu: Stone Orbit Release
Rank of Jutsu: Gennin-Sannin
Range of Jutsu: 5 meters-35 meters
Jutsu's Element: Earth
Requirements- N/A
Description: This a jutsu in which the user puts chakra around him to make pebbles and rocks and other forms of earht to spin aorund them, the point of this is to create a spinning shield around the user or they may use it as offence by throwing the rocks for mthe orbit.The power of the justu gets stronger the higher ranked the user is, gennins are able to orbit rocks up to the size of a head(50 pounds) around them and every turn it counts as a gennin jutsu, chunnins may orbit body sized rocks(300 pounds) and every post that justu is active counts as a chunnin jutsu, Jounin may pick 1 ton rocks and every posts justu is active counts as a jounin ranked justus, Sannin may pick up 5 ton boulders, and for every post it is active it counts as an S-Rank jutsu, The area in which the rocks may be spinned is also increased with rank gennin may rotate rocks 5 meters around, chunnin mat rotate 15 meters aorund, jounin 25 meters sannin 40 meters.  

[xLytez]

Manpish- Accpeted

Katsuro- Denied, alittle more description, and you overdid the weight of the boulders by a lot.