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 Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 6:33 pm
"heh....nice one."
((byes!))
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Posted: Tue Nov 24, 2009 1:57 pm
xXElectric_EmeraldsXx sonic the hedgehog665 xXElectric_EmeraldsXx sonic the hedgehog665 Rena went to get Aleta's backpack first she teleported to the bunkhouse "now,where is buck number 107" she saw the room "there it is" she open the door and grabed Aleta's backpack "well that was easy now to get the pheonix tears" Rena teleported to the duram reclamation facility everything was quiet then Rena heard a loud yell "WHAT WAS THAT!?" (good job, use punctuation, and describe actions) Aleta's body slept, but her mind was awake. I should help her... She then channels all of her energy to contact Rena tlepathicly. {{ Hey, Rena? Can you hear me? Do you know what a pheonix is? Its a big, pretty red bird. You'll know it when you see it.}} Rena was right in front of the pheonix {{ ya i hear ya,and i found the bird}} Rena was shocked when she saw the pheonix {{ Now, tell him why you need his tears, for a dying comrad. He'll help anyone pure of heart. I know this bird}} She remembers the first time she met her love, Aires. Yeah, that was his name... like the constellation. He was wounded, and he needed help, he was fighting the animated. {{ I have to leave you now...}} Aleta writhed in pain, it kept her awake. Her fever ravaged her body, she vomited twice, even though she hardly ate anyhing. Bile...not a good sign. hot tears streamed down her face...she didn't have much time left. a day in a half or so... (re-posting so friend can find it)
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Posted: Tue Nov 24, 2009 5:22 pm
((ME BACK! YAY!!))
"Thanks. It was to easy. you should see when I go over 1/1000th of my power. then it's a party!" Zero smiles. "How many enemies you want, and what're they called?"
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Posted: Tue Nov 24, 2009 5:25 pm
"you choose. enemies are enemies. and i feel like showing you my power."
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Posted: Tue Nov 24, 2009 5:29 pm
"Ok then. how about..." A thousand shadows apeared."That? good enough?"
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Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 5:10 pm
"Or is that to much miss june?"
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Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 5:45 pm
((OOC: Echo!Is it just me or have people given up on this thread!?))
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Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 8:10 am
xXElectric_EmeraldsXx xXElectric_EmeraldsXx sonic the hedgehog665 xXElectric_EmeraldsXx sonic the hedgehog665 Rena went to get Aleta's backpack first she teleported to the bunkhouse "now,where is buck number 107" she saw the room "there it is" she open the door and grabed Aleta's backpack "well that was easy now to get the pheonix tears" Rena teleported to the duram reclamation facility everything was quiet then Rena heard a loud yell "WHAT WAS THAT!?" (good job, use punctuation, and describe actions) Aleta's body slept, but her mind was awake. I should help her... She then channels all of her energy to contact Rena tlepathicly. {{ Hey, Rena? Can you hear me? Do you know what a pheonix is? Its a big, pretty red bird. You'll know it when you see it.}} Rena was right in front of the pheonix {{ ya i hear ya,and i found the bird}} Rena was shocked when she saw the pheonix {{ Now, tell him why you need his tears, for a dying comrad. He'll help anyone pure of heart. I know this bird}} She remembers the first time she met her love, Aires. Yeah, that was his name... like the constellation. He was wounded, and he needed help, he was fighting the animated. {{ I have to leave you now...}} Aleta writhed in pain, it kept her awake. Her fever ravaged her body, she vomited twice, even though she hardly ate anyhing. Bile...not a good sign. hot tears streamed down her face...she didn't have much time left. a day in a half or so... (re-posting so friend can find it) { got it } "hello!,may i get some of your tears? for my friend shes hurt" said rena
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Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 8:28 am
((whoops...sorry! ))
June smiles
"that's perfectly fine."
June dashed into the crowd of shadows, not even seen anymore. When she stopped on the other side, the path she took through them disappeared as the shadows split and died. She walked in the middle of the crowd, letting them close in on her. She wasn't seen anymore
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Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 8:44 am
The young warrior Aleta Rose lies inert on the bed. Her eyes open and close, she mouthed a few words, even though no one is there to speak to. all the while, she gathered strenght to try to contact Rena. She better get here soon...
And how did this happen? Oh, i just had to taunt my enemy, that was stupid and childish. I can't let my self do that again.
Clear thoughts. Thats a good sign.
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Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 8:38 am
the pheonix cryed and gave me the tears "thank you so much" said rena she teleported to aleta
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Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 8:49 am
Aleta was unconsious, she didn't respond to Rena whatsoever. A shen of sweat covered her brow, and her hair was like a messy, black halo surrounding her delicate face.
She wrote the instructions for the on the backside of the paper when she was awake, just before she gave it to the demon-human.
1- break open the pear, let the juice fall into the bowl.
2-Crush the apples, seperate the leftover chunks.
3- Add healing essence of water several vials of this are in my backpack, use the empty container for measuring the ingredients.
4-stir in willow sap
5-combine with pheonix tears
ALL INGREDIENTS MUST BE IN ROUGHLY EQUAL PARTS
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Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 9:03 am
Rena did everything it saids on the paper
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Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 9:09 am
sonic the hedgehog665 Rena did everything it saids on the paper (aww, come on! You could be alittle more descriptive, freind. Put yoursel in Rena's shoes. Become her, and write everything you hear, see, and experience. I'm gonna help you with your RP skills, okay?) Aleta' breathing was slow and labored. She had a dull realisation that someone was with her.
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Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 9:19 am
(im sorry,im sorry,im sorry)
rena throught to her self "now what?"
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