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 Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 10:17 pm
Owwin Ribbin What about Gorgrael the Destroyer? He was only more powerful because his mixed blood was foretold in a prophecy, same with Axis. [/wayfarer redemption reference] He is still stronger though. Dante's blood makes him stronger because he is the son of a particularly strong demon lord. Same deal, still stronger. I want a guy with a real reason to be pissed off. Maybe that would make a good villain? Saving the concept. The most interesting aspect of half breeds is how they're looked down upon in society. That's what interests me.
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Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 10:19 pm
Ribbin Owwin Ribbin What about Gorgrael the Destroyer? He was only more powerful because his mixed blood was foretold in a prophecy, same with Axis. [/wayfarer redemption reference] He is still stronger though. Dante's blood makes him stronger because he is the son of a particularly strong demon lord. Same deal, still stronger. I want a guy with a real reason to be pissed off. Maybe that would make a good villain? Saving the concept. The most interesting aspect of half breeds is how they're looked down upon in society. That's what interests me. If a kid in town could leap tall buildings in a single bound, would you care if his mom had horns? I KNOW I WOULDN'T! I would always pick him first to be on my team.
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Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 10:24 pm
Owwin Kuzodav sounds like a bad plot twist on sweeney todd, except with a motive. I'll take it. Sweeny Todd is awesome. Wait, how it it like Sweeny Todd? obsession with something killing random people plot. obsession with revenge and making his friend's business boom, and killing random hair-cut-wanters. obsession with bring people pack to life, killing, via poison, random people.
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Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 10:27 pm
I'm not sure who reads it still, but new TRC chapter is up. 8D
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Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 10:28 pm
Kuzodav Owwin Kuzodav sounds like a bad plot twist on sweeney todd, except with a motive. I'll take it. Sweeny Todd is awesome. Wait, how it it like Sweeny Todd? obsession with something killing random people plot. obsession with revenge and making his friend's business boom, and killing random hair-cut-wanters. obsession with bring people pack to life, killing, via poison, random people. Sweeny never tried to bring anybody back to life, or was it different in the play? Also my character isn't out for revenge, or killing random people.
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Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 10:29 pm
YOU GUYS SUCK! GO WATCH INUYASHA THEN!
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Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 10:31 pm
Owwin Kuzodav Owwin Kuzodav sounds like a bad plot twist on sweeney todd, except with a motive. I'll take it. Sweeny Todd is awesome. Wait, how it it like Sweeny Todd? plot. obsession with revenge and making his friend's business boom, and killing random hair-cut-wanters. obsession with bring people pack to life, killing, via poison, random people. Sweeny never tried to bring anybody back to life, or was it different in the play? Also my character isn't out for revenge, or killing random people. the plot equation is similar is what i meant. you just said that he poisons random people.
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Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 10:33 pm
Kuzodav Owwin Kuzodav Owwin Kuzodav sounds like a bad plot twist on sweeney todd, except with a motive. I'll take it. Sweeny Todd is awesome. Wait, how it it like Sweeny Todd? plot. obsession with revenge and making his friend's business boom, and killing random hair-cut-wanters. obsession with bring people pack to life, killing, via poison, random people. Sweeny never tried to bring anybody back to life, or was it different in the play? Also my character isn't out for revenge, or killing random people. the plot equation is similar is what i meant. you just said that he poisons random people. I said that he poisons people, not random people. Ah screw it. It was a bad idea anyway.
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Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 10:49 pm
Owwin Kuzodav Owwin Kuzodav Owwin Kuzodav sounds like a bad plot twist on sweeney todd, except with a motive. I'll take it. Sweeny Todd is awesome. Wait, how it it like Sweeny Todd? plot. obsession with revenge and making his friend's business boom, and killing random hair-cut-wanters. obsession with bring people pack to life, killing, via poison, random people. Sweeny never tried to bring anybody back to life, or was it different in the play? Also my character isn't out for revenge, or killing random people. the plot equation is similar is what i meant. you just said that he poisons random people. I said that he poisons people, not random people. Ah screw it. It was a bad idea anyway. Just make a half-breed like you'd expect it to be, without some deep plot, let a plot naturally boil in your head. obsession with ressurection is kind of cliche'.
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Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 10:54 pm
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Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 10:55 pm
Kuzodav Just make a half-breed like you'd expect it to be, without some deep plot, let a plot naturally boil in your head. obsession with ressurection is kind of cliche'. I will ditch the resurrection thing, but I am not gonna ditch that cliche to make another. I mean, every half breed has the paper thin Mary-Sue plot of boo-hoo, I want people to accept me, or boo-hoo, I want revenge on the people who won't accept me when they have awesome powers to make up for it. That doesn't make sense either. In a world filled with monsters you have one that was raised by humans and will save you, why would you alienate it? I don't know. I walked into one cliche avoiding another.
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Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 11:11 pm
Owwin Kuzodav Just make a half-breed like you'd expect it to be, without some deep plot, let a plot naturally boil in your head. obsession with ressurection is kind of cliche'. I will ditch the resurrection thing, but I am not gonna ditch that cliche to make another. I mean, every half breed has the paper thin Mary-Sue plot of boo-hoo, I want people to accept me, or boo-hoo, I want revenge on the people who won't accept me when they have awesome powers to make up for it. That doesn't make sense either. In a world filled with monsters you have one that was raised by humans and will save you, why would you alienate it? I don't know. I walked into one cliche avoiding another. I said how you would expect it to be, not the opposite of what you had.
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Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 11:26 pm
Kuzodav Owwin Kuzodav Just make a half-breed like you'd expect it to be, without some deep plot, let a plot naturally boil in your head. obsession with ressurection is kind of cliche'. I will ditch the resurrection thing, but I am not gonna ditch that cliche to make another. I mean, every half breed has the paper thin Mary-Sue plot of boo-hoo, I want people to accept me, or boo-hoo, I want revenge on the people who won't accept me when they have awesome powers to make up for it. That doesn't make sense either. In a world filled with monsters you have one that was raised by humans and will save you, why would you alienate it? I don't know. I walked into one cliche avoiding another. I said how you would expect it to be, not the opposite of what you had. Oh, I WILL BOIL IT!
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Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 11:27 pm
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Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 11:28 pm
YOUR INPUT IS CONFUSING AND NOT VERY CONSTRUCTIVE!
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