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Posted: Sun Jun 21, 2009 5:24 pm
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Posted: Mon Jun 22, 2009 11:22 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 24, 2009 6:36 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 1:02 pm
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Your Rank: ANBU Name of Jutsu: Cheshire Neko Detachment Rank of Jutsu: S-Rank Jutsu's Element: None Description: This is an improvement from the past accepted jutsu, Cheshire Neko Henge. The main difference with this jutsu is that instead of the user's body being taken over and transformed into this ghost-like being, the user insteads pulls it out of their body to serve them. Same rules and limits apply to Cheshire as before. With this version the Cheshire can't escape with the user or make the user invisible. Cheshire's powers as a different being are his own, and can not be simply given to the anybody nore shared with anybody else. Like the Cheshire Neko Henge this jutsu takes a full post before Cheshire can appear.
Your Rank: ANBU Name of Jutsu: Infinite-Fanged Lance Rank of Jutsu: Jounin Range of Jutsu: 2 meters Jutsu's Element: Wind Description: An improved and more powerful version of the past accepted jutsu, Bone-Fanged Lance. This version gives the attack more power and speed due to the increased tendrils that form around the arm as well as the number of twists that turn it. Strong taijutsu move that paralyzes the user's arm for at least one post after using it.
Your Rank: ANBU Name of Jutsu: Death-Fanged Lance Rank of Jutsu: S-Ranked Range of Jutsu: 2.4 meters Jutsu's Element: Wind Description: Final upgrade for the Bone-Fanged Lance. This move turns the bone and tendrils a black color that distinguishes it from the others. These bones make a more elastic and powerfully densified material. The near infinite number of thin tendrils does tremendous damage to the opponent, resulting in almost certain death if hit directly. It greatly damages the user's arm. No matter how much power they have, a user can't use this attack more than twice in a fight, and after the second attack their arm will be unable to move for a few hours.
((Here's the accepted forms of the base jutsu I wanted to upgrade, in case you need to look at them for reference.
Cheshire Neko Henge Rank of Jutsu: A Range of Jutsu: Self Jutsu's Element: None Description: This jutsu forces the user to take on the characteristics and split personality of a being known as "Cheshire" (based off of the mischievious cat from Alice in Wonderland). This is usually noted by how the user will seemingly grin all the time combined with other physical changes such as hair turning a shade of purple, eyes becoming cat-like, or even growing a purple-furred tail. During this transformation the user can not be killed but like-wise can not kill anybody else. Cheshire also has the ability to willingly turn invisible or alter any other physical sense of being one might recieve from him such as sound, touch, or smell. This cannot be done instantly however and the process usually takes a few seconds to fully perform. What this means is that if Cheshire were to become invisible to somebody, for example, the person would see Cheshire's legs disappear, then his chest and arms, then his head, ect. Along with this, Cheshire has the ability to willingly dismember himself as well, allowing him to perform deranged and crazy feats such as taking off his head and then standing on it. If anything, Cheshire is more along the lines of something like a poltergeist than anything else. Though his abilities to cause physical harm to others is relatively weak (capable of only performing things a normal human could do such as tripping and definitely NOT any other jutsu), Cheshire instead uses trickery, mischief, and misdirection to toy with enemies and get them to perhaps hurt themselves. Performing the jutsu doesn't require any handsigns, but takes an entire post to complete the transformation since otherwise a user could misuse the jutsu to make an easy escape at any sign of danger. Because of how using this jutsu makes the real user lose all sense of himself in replacement for Cheshire, the jutsu isn't well liked among the users. However, what it does do is serve a very important escape function. Since Cheshire can also manipulate other's ability to sense him, Cheshire can also easily make an escape for the host to save their life. Since escaping is its main purpose and it is a being different from the user, turning into Cheshire instantly dispells any genjutsu or other disabling affects such as poison. The number of posts a user can maintain the transformation depends on their rank. Chuunin=5 posts. Jounin=8 posts. Sannin/Kage=12 posts. (must wait five posts before becoming completely invisible. must wait at least one post between jutsu activation and escape)
Bone-Fanged Lance Rank: Chuunin Description: Strong bone covers user's entire arm with a long and sharp end. Following it are several tendrils made with elastic bone that wrap themselves over each other so tightly around the user's arm that it literally twists the user's arm completely around several times. After maximum rotations and buildup are completed, the user can release the massive buildup all at once. This causes the tendrils to lash out in a fury of widespread, windmill shaped, insanely fast rotating blasts (something like a man-made helicopter blade). Because of the order and legth of tendril release, the attack forms a large cone-like shape capable of obliterating anything in its range. (can't be fired) ))
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Posted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 5:39 am
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Posted: Thu Jul 02, 2009 4:27 pm
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OI!! Kitty here ^^ I have some ideas for new jutsus for the origami no dara (suiton). since the bloodline is only about moving paper and let is explode....what is...not very special at all... here comes my masterpiece *cough* THESE ARE NO KITTY ONLY JUTSUS, I WOULD LIKE TO SHARE THESE WITH OTHER ORIGAMI NO DARA USERS, THESE ARE BLOODLINE JUTSUS WHO I WISH TO BE ADDED.
MY RANK: ANBU
Name: Paper Barrier. Rank: Jounin (A) Range: Can contain 4-5 people inside. Owner: origama no dara suiton users. Description: The user uses His/her Chakra to create a paper barrier around his/her self and/or around allies to protect them from flying objects, jutsus or taijutsus attack. The hardness of the barrier depends on the ammount of used chakra and the layers of paper used. The barrier can is strong as stone and can be stronger then steel when a lot of chakra is pushed in the barrier* This technique requires a huge ammount of paper, so the user will had to use the Art of Pressing Pulp technique before using this, since the ammount of paper used for this technique is not able to carry in a bag.
Name: Paper creatures/puppets Rank: Chunin -> Sanin Range: 50 meters (user also has to follow the creature) Owner: Origami no dara (suiton) users Description: not the same as the Kimitate-assembly technique, who can fold paper in anything they want... This technique can make creatures out of paper, who are able to attack an enemy. Sanin ranked ninjas will be able to create better creatures then chunin, since sanin is able to put more chakra in them. Examples: Paper Boar/tiger/dog : who is able to bite their oponent with their teeth and scratch with nails. asks an amount of chakra but can also be done by chunins. but still, when they do not have the ammount of chakra, the animal will just fall apart in paper sheets. Paper Guardian: A guardian made of paper who can smash their oponent with their hard-as-rock arms. made of some nice layers of paper or paper meshay. asks more chakra to create. (can also be seen as puppet) Paper Snake : A huge snake with razor-sharp teeth, able to bite the oponent to death, or able to swallow the openent, which after the user can do something else with the paper of the snake since the oponent is inside. This asks a HUGE ammount of chakra and can only be done by talented and professional origami no dara (suiton) users. This technique also requires tons of paper sheets or meshay, so the user will have to post the technique for making paper out of trees, before using this technique, the needed ammount of paper can not be carried in a bag....again...(( Making creatures with this who are impossible to defeat, or who are overpowered will be seen as godmodding i guess. so be carefull with what you make))
Name: Paper plane Rank: Jounin - Sanin Range: can fly as far as the user has chakra. the plain has to be underneath the user, cant be used as a missile. Owner: origami no dara users Description: The user uses a huge ammount of chakra and a huge ammount of paper sheets (who will have to be made in a previous post by using the art of the pressing pulp since the needed ammount of paper can not be carried in a bag....)) To create a HUGE paper plane who can carry arround 7 a 8 people. The plane uses a gliding technique, used by pilots with gliders. this means the plane has to be on a high building or a mountain to set off. the plane can be usefull to cary anbu ninjas or others to different places. like for the anbu, seek and kill strategy will be usefull with the plane, cuz they can attack all togheter at one time. But it does Need a HUGE ammount of chakra to carry all the people on the plane, lets stand making the masterpiece.
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Posted: Fri Jul 03, 2009 1:00 pm
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Posted: Sat Jul 04, 2009 5:35 pm
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Posted: Sat Jul 04, 2009 6:32 pm
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Posted: Sat Jul 04, 2009 6:49 pm
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Posted: Sat Jul 04, 2009 7:57 pm
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