Deathgod of Legend
9/10
For some reason...Metal Gear Solid comes to mind...
6/10
I really think that this idea is fantastically workable; but the kitsune mask REALLY is bad idea for this, in my opinion. I've never seen someone wearing that mask with the rest of them being all angel-god-y, and I'm not liking it.
However, if you run in that vein, you've got a pretty decent avatar going on here! It just needs a couple touch ups... like the lack of a mask. XD Try adjusting the eyes, and maybe altering the hair style; add a little more gold, and be careful about touching in some blues.