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 Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 12:01 am
J of The Wind Meta_Fish MEEDLEEEEE MEEDLEEEEEEY MEEEEEDLEEEEEEEEEEEY!I'm back, hos! Hey, we prefer the term, "Tricks" You a ho. >=|
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Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 12:01 am
Chunky Boy is where it's at~
Drink a lot and you'll get Fat!
Chunky Boy Soda!
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Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 12:04 am
Meta_Fish J of The Wind Meta_Fish MEEDLEEEEE MEEDLEEEEEEY MEEEEEDLEEEEEEEEEEEY!I'm back, hos! Hey, we prefer the term, "Tricks" You a ho. >=| Why u gotta b mean like dat Pimp daddy Fish? cry
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Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 12:06 am
J of The Wind Meta_Fish J of The Wind Meta_Fish MEEDLEEEEE MEEDLEEEEEEY MEEEEEDLEEEEEEEEEEEY!I'm back, hos! Hey, we prefer the term, "Tricks" You a ho. >=| Why u gotta b mean like dat Pimp daddy Fish? cry CUZ YOU A HO, HO.
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Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 12:11 am
Meta_Fish J of The Wind Meta_Fish J of The Wind Meta_Fish MEEDLEEEEE MEEDLEEEEEEY MEEEEEDLEEEEEEEEEEEY!I'm back, hos! Hey, we prefer the term, "Tricks" You a ho. >=| Why u gotta b mean like dat Pimp daddy Fish? cry CUZ YOU A HO, HO. WELL YOU AN a**, a**
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Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 12:12 am
J of The Wind Meta_Fish J of The Wind Meta_Fish J of The Wind Meta_Fish MEEDLEEEEE MEEDLEEEEEEY MEEEEEDLEEEEEEEEEEEY!I'm back, hos! Hey, we prefer the term, "Tricks" You a ho. >=| Why u gotta b mean like dat Pimp daddy Fish? cry CUZ YOU A HO, HO. WELL YOU AN a**, a** shiiiiiit
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Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 12:13 am
Hey! J!
Whaddya say?
Care to have a drink of this soda today?
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Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 12:15 am
TtheHero Hey! J!
Whaddya say?
Care to have a drink of this soda today? Well, I DO need to gain a few pounds.... Maybe just a sip...
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Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 12:19 am
I've noticed I have like, only three friends in the Cult; Jay, Fish, and Sombre (Lady Hat). xD
WHERE HAS SUMMON NIGHT BEEN HIDING FROM ME? O:
I downloaded a ROM pack for a GBA emulator, and I decided to start playing games at random, and I started to play Summon Night, the first one, and I was all like, lololol she doesn't care if she's a lesbian. -awesome face-
Srsly, this Guardian Spirit chick is dead set on marrying the female main character. xD So you can imagine I kept on playing it. It's really interesting though!
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Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 12:22 am
Harupiggy I've noticed I have like, only three friends in the Cult; Jay, Fish, and Sombre (Lady Hat). xD
WHERE HAS SUMMON NIGHT BEEN HIDING FROM ME? O:
I downloaded a ROM pack for a GBA emulator, and I decided to start playing games at random, and I started to play Summon Night, the first one, and I was all like, lololol she doesn't care if she's a lesbian. -awesome face-
Srsly, this Guardian Spirit chick is dead set on marrying the female main character. xD So you can imagine I kept on playing it. It's really interesting though! XD That sounds interesting... Well, im sleepy. night Cult!
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Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 12:29 am
J of The Wind Harupiggy I've noticed I have like, only three friends in the Cult; Jay, Fish, and Sombre (Lady Hat). xD
WHERE HAS SUMMON NIGHT BEEN HIDING FROM ME? O:
I downloaded a ROM pack for a GBA emulator, and I decided to start playing games at random, and I started to play Summon Night, the first one, and I was all like, lololol she doesn't care if she's a lesbian. -awesome face-
Srsly, this Guardian Spirit chick is dead set on marrying the female main character. xD So you can imagine I kept on playing it. It's really interesting though! XD That sounds interesting... Well, im sleepy. night Cult!
Night J! =D
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Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 12:49 am
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Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 12:52 am
[Obvious cookie cue is obvious.]
INORITE?
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Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 1:05 am
Oh boy...
I KNOW they say a script format isn't alwasy good...
But you know, after seeing a constant barrage of,
"blah blah blah" said A
B replied "hoo hoo hoo"
"Honk?" asked C "beep beep beep?"
IT GETS REPETITIVE. even with varying words like said, replied responded and so on, what a d-r-a-g...
At least when I put the names in front of what a character says, it preserves the flow of moving between lines.
And the rest of the story's text is JUST like what you see in any other story.
So I'm gonna improve every other aspect of my story, and the text.
But on that point I just made, I'm am NOT budging.
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Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 1:34 am
T, I hope you don't want to get published, then. =/
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