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HellRaven Aura Vice Captain
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 Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:30 pm
Aura barked and ran after Kyra,not taking but a bit to catch up.
Kyra looked at Aura sideways."Hi Rahvine!" Mia grinned holding on tigthly.The wolves race jus berly squeezing through the corners. Their claws clicked on the floor,as they slipped to not trip.
"Doc's here~!!"
((Thats cool xD I really dont have fanfics,aside from a couple stories i have planned...but i havent gotten it concrete.))
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:37 pm
"Hey Mia." Rahvine grinned, then freed one hand to pet Aura. "I guess we'd better go back and see what he has to say."
((Thanks. I'm still working out the details for the main part of the story but I know how it ends. It's not as easy as you might think to come up with a haunting for Kazuya and his team to investigate. xD))
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HellRaven Aura Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:42 pm
"Yep we wanna know if the puppies are okay~!" Mia patted Kyra's shoulder as the wolves turned aeound and walked back toawrd the main lobby.
Dr.Philip was talking to Violete who nodded along.
((I bet it isnt xD Woah...dogs can get alot of diseases >_< ))
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:50 pm
"Me too." Rahvine slid off of Aura's back and looked over at Dr. Philip. "So, what did you find out Doctor?"
((Yeah, especially since the ghost has to be bad enough to kill Hoshiko 3/4's of the way through the story. Mmm, I knew there were quite a few they could get.))
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HellRaven Aura Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:55 pm
"A bit."Dr.Philip picked up a few papers,"Lex you are good to go,sane as you could be~"
"What about Kyra?" Mia asked.
"She has cuterebra."
"That doesnt sound too bad...?" Violete said.
"Its a parasite,its under the skin,and a bit hard to spot,"the vet explained,"it cant cause tissue damage,the good news is they should be easy to get rid off."
"What do we do then?"Mia asked.
"Just give her this medication of a week once a day,and if you see anything in her fur get it off and step on it,just to ensure non of the others get the parasite too."
"Okay."Mia took the bottle.
((You must see killing your characters as a good way to end your storiee...BRB 10-15 minutes~"
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:01 pm
Rahvine nodded. "What about Aura? She's okay right?"
((I mostly do that when I can't see how keeping the character around would further the story or series. It's my way of tying up a loose end so no one will wonder what happened to her. And if I change my mind I could always have her ghost pop up. xD In this case Hoshiko's death would actually serve to give Kazuya a nudge in the general direction of the girl I think he should get romantically involved with. xD Okay. ^^))
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HellRaven Aura Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:25 pm
"Her immune system is a bit low,"He answered.
((Lol nice~ xD Sorry i think that was a bit longer than ithought xD))
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:31 pm
...That doesn't sound good. Rahvine glanced at Aura then back at Dr. Philip. "Oh? What would cause that?"
((Yeah. xD Hoshiko used her influence as Kazuya's 'big sister' to do it. Or rather her ghost did when he came to say goodbye and fufill thier childhood promise. (That's okay Aura. ^^))
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HellRaven Aura Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:41 pm
"Anything mostly a bad diet,"Philip shrugged,"from what i have heard probably becuase she keeps getting hurt and getting up all to early. Or anything,like i said,it is a bit,but it did catch my attention since everythig else was in order so...I am bot really sure." he Dug around his bag,"here,try to take one of this between today and next time we do get to check you up. Its got some vitamins and proteins you seemed to be missing the most."
Aura turned human,and took the vitamins,"okay,thanks."
((You are confusing me more xD I dont think i could kill one of mg characters without much of a purpose or dramatic effect...I mean,most of my main characters became my favorites, Aura and Nicole,then the twins from the tavern...then probably Mia xD
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:49 pm
"I see." said Rahvine nodding. Well hopefully those vitamins will help...
((What's confusing? And I guess I can do it is because I like the way it works with her death better than how it would turn out without. I mean if she doesn't die the most Hoshiko can do is explain her and Kazuya's relationship to Mai at the end so she sees that Hoshiko isn't a threat to Kazuya developing feelings for her. (I see. xD Of your characters I would say Aura, Mia are my favorites. ))
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HellRaven Aura Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:58 pm
Aura put the vitamins in her coat.
"Try to take them." Dr.Philip said,then turned to Kyra,"yours for sure okay?If you miss a day and it gives time the parasite to grow it will only get worse okay?"
Kyra nodded,and did Mia.
"Okay i am done here for the time,"the vet looked at the werewolves,"try to remind me,a two month check up okay?Keep yourselves cold,with the heat fleas and other parasites only give more trouble. Watch for mosquitos too,heartworms are the last thing you guys need. So...I will see you in a while~!"He gave a slight smile,and a polite nod before leaving with one last wave. Mia looked at the medicine philip had given Kyra,"uh..."
((All those names xD Yeah the death of your character makes sense here. ^_^ the reason i like Nicole is because even though she is evil and bad and apparently obvioue she still does stuff you dont see comming...between that and the teen breaks the bad guys get..~! And Mia is a sticky character,I dont think i could ever get rid of her! xD))
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 10:03 pm
"Well at least it wasn't too bad." said Rahvine looking at Aura. She glanced over at Mia. "What is it Mia?"
((Oh. xD Yeah, it kind of helps keep them straight if you know the series already. I see, yeah that makes sense.))
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Posted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 8:25 am
Zero looked at aura.
"Huh...I would've thought that you had a blood type of disorder but hay, that's a little better..."
Dopple looked at him.
"A sickness is a sickness you moron."
"Dopple, fall."
"You Bit-" He complied.
"Who's the moron now?"
Dopple flipped him off.
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Posted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 8:36 am
Rahvine rolled her eyes. "Honestly you two, don't make it a bigger deal than it is."
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