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Jin the Shadow Wolf

Flower Child Acey

Jin the Shadow Wolf

HERE IN CALI... O:
We got the CAHSEE. The California High School Exit Exam. It's at an 8th grade level and meant to see if people are qualified to graduate on schedule. It can be taken 3 or 4 times. I passed it on the first go with one of the highest marks. :3

me too. That was eeeeeeasy D: I really don't know how anybody could have NOT passed it the first time.

I also finished early. I tried to drag out the last three hours I was stuck in the auditorium by doodling on the scratch paper I had for the math section, but I ran out of room and couldn't get my sketch book out or else I'd get disqualified from passing for "cheating". D:

D: it was pretty much the same for me B| I even scribbled on the scratch paper. D; I wanted to listen to my music, but...well...having your phone out was also considered as cheating.  

[Kittenflavored]

by the way...totally random

I love this smiley


 

[Jedi Master Acey]

D: *murdered this thread* Oops...  

[Nutrino Starwind]

*Jabs with the sharp end of a moldy cookie*

stare

 

[Blind Blindness]

I did my essay. 5/6...with a ""normal-bounds error"....which the teacher may inquire about or take off because. Oh well...if I get a C instead of a B it won't matter. I'll still have a B in the class. NOW, if she tells me to redo it, I'd refuse xD  

[oO Lorelei Oo]

i love the weather here! man i missed this... still hasn't set into my mind i'm really staying and not on vaca.. but that could be cause all my stuffs is in the garage still until me and mom can get cracking on making my room a bedroom again...  

[oO Lorelei Oo]

OMG YES! florida has 4 seasons... they follow: Hot; Hotter; Fire; Hurricane rofl Here i get to see the leaves changing.. i dun have to worry about my mind leaving my body to be here and throw me off (happened the second year i was in florida *shivers* that messed me up a bit) and it's a cold day.. yesterday was about 95 and i didn't need my AC cause it was still cooler then 95 of Florida.. i worked with... well in the same building as my mom today ^.^ i nee to do electric bill stuffs from fL still but have to be able to unpack a bit to do so...  

[Blind Blindness]

Queen Spazzy

*wonders what the heck a "normal-bounds error" is*
o.o

It's still hott x.x.
Cool lori

Lolll...the normal bounds error means the essay is considered "outside the norm", that a component of it differs compared to most other essays. But for the following reasons: it was left blank.

Wait, here...

On a 6-point scale, your overall score was: 5
[error code: NORMAL-BOUNDSVIOLATION] occurred while evaluating your essay. The following reasons may contribute to this:

Indicates, as in the unscoreable case, that there is something unusual about this essay. The degree to which the essay varies from the norm is sufficient to raise a BOUNDSVIOLATION flag, but not sufficient to deem it unscoreable.





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[Blind Blindness]

Lorelei_Ediemeious

OMG YES! florida has 4 seasons... they follow: Hot; Hotter; Fire; Hurricane rofl Here i get to see the leaves changing.. i dun have to worry about my mind leaving my body to be here and throw me off (happened the second year i was in florida *shivers* that messed me up a bit) and it's a cold day.. yesterday was about 95 and i didn't need my AC cause it was still cooler then 95 of Florida.. i worked with... well in the same building as my mom today ^.^ i nee to do electric bill stuffs from fL still but have to be able to unpack a bit to do so...

I live in Miami. IT IS SOO HOTTTT....x.x.  

[Blind Blindness]

I have to do another essay today! x.x.  

[oO Lorelei Oo]

ick to essays... even though i'm good at them.. still dun like them... most have limits that are too short for me...

and yes i'd imagine miami is hot.. i was in orlando and it was hot... (didn't know you were kinda close... that's cool.. least same state as me and kitaka.. lol)