its good just needs rhyme need help but i like the point
Posted: Thu Sep 25, 2008 1:21 pm
summerysky
who ever said poetry had to be in time? as long as each line is in order then it doesnt matter- poetry doesnt even have to ryme or anything- all a poem needs is a specificc tone. nothing more, x
true but if u start a poem with rhyme u should keep it going